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[vnorm]

(my first battle. am prone to make a few mistakes wit the layout. ) :D lets ball slik

[vnorm]

You cant handle beef*, to protect you i gotta ham*(harm) you/ I 'crossed' you; you a donkey as i thought and i prove it(prophet) like some mule (Samuel!)//
(1.Prophet Samuel coz i predicted he'd be a donkey/ass. 2.A donkey crossed with a horse births a mule)

That makes me a horse(hoarse), something you not because you sleek/ You only wid* it when blunted. dem rugged shots be what i came to coarse you with//
(hoarse=rough, sleek(slick)=smooth )

I 'sap your energy', am philic to Joules* this cat gotta protect his necklace/ u dont struggle to be perfect coz u content with fakeness//
(chek his quote; 'i dont struggle to be perfect...')

Slik's a whack cat and i know but i oppress him shameless/ I hold a rhyme to his head and make him confess his lameness!//

Incoherent cat claimin' he's in school, who's believin this bi*tch?/ She dont rhyme with harmony(her money) thats why what she's spittin is cheap!//
(money, cheap..? incoherence, ever goin to school)

I'm young like you are, but you're lame you cant resemble Vnorm// i remember your name from 'Most Unbelievably Disabled People'!//*(haha)
(coz he be lame)

[ik-sl!ck]

OK!!!!!!!!!!!!

The real phenom slick is in the house, Vnorm is hell shook,
batlle king still sitting on hills like my girls foot
Ill bring the liquid (sweat) out this pussy but i aint hitting the hole
poor nigga, ill smash your bones now your really broke

be rest assured your hands gonna bleed as we fight
cause am harder to beat than a drum with spikes
you aint dastardly, thats why yu always win the wacky races
you cant even SMILE at your WEAK lines, they both lacking braces
(ie. your teeth and your lines)

wack mc trying to ACT UP like the sets in mid air
but we all know your lame and too(two) TIRED like a wheel chair
my wolverine claws will leave you three stripes like adidas
im through with this ahh virgin, somebody wipe the blood off his pad
heres a bonus line for this slut
you a horse, il whoop your ass so bad like a jockey on drugs
YOU DIG!!!!

[ik-sl!ck]

I think yall can vote now

[MC SKILLZ]

it wasall good homs.it was a pretty close battles neva knew kenya dudes cud even rap a line.big shouts on that.
ma votes goes 2 vnorm he had more punchlines n more complex n wordplay compared 2 slick.although the

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you a donkey as i thought and i prove it(prophet) like some mule

to me that shit didnt really go,the word play i mean.but all ur other lines were kool though
vote vnorm

[mceeQ]

i think vnorm jus pipped it by just a little
vote : vnorm

in a hurry if u need a breakdown holla paece!!

[Couzifer]

vnorm said:

I 'sap your energy', am philic to Joules* this cat gotta protect his necklace/ u dont struggle to be perfect coz u content with fakeness//
(chek his quote; 'i dont struggle to be perfect...')

This single line sl!ced sl!ck into pieces like a loaf!!

vnorm claimed this,no doubt, peep tha' wordplay n' tha' creativity.
ma' vote goes to vnorm

[vnorm]

nice drop slick. u came harder than usual :o

thanks ya'l for the votes but i'd appreciate breakdown.

thats 3-0 slick. k.o? :)

[vnorm]

MC SKILLZ said:

it wasall good homs.it was a pretty close battles neva knew kenya dudes cud even rap a line.big shouts on that.

:evil: :evil: :shock: where you from?

[Koldiz3k]

tha 2 catz both ate ratz, next tyme make it deep so u can eat beaf.1luv

[vnorm]

stil upppin 4 votes
koldi, wtf?

[Xblaze]

opener:ik slick, vnorm: ur wordplay on that line was too forced, ended up fucking it up.
metas: not much but ik slick(that adidas line didnt really work well, but the drum with spikes line was ok)
punches: vnorm

vnorm said:

Incoherent cat claimin' he's in school, who's believin this bi*tch?/ She dont rhyme with harmony(her money) thats why what she's spittin is cheap!//
(money, cheap..? incoherence, ever goin to school)

this line wasnt really hitting.. i just didnt feel it that much.

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I'm young like you are, but you're lame you cant resemble Vnorm// i remember your name from 'Most Unbelievably Disabled People'!//*(haha)
(coz he be lame)

ok

ik-sl!ck said:

but we all know your lame and too(two) TIRED like a wheel chair
!!!!

too played...

ik-sl!ck said:

im through with this ahh virgin, somebody wipe the blood off his pad

not really working, rewording might've helped.

flow: to ik slick , vnorm ur forced wordplays drained ur flow, but dawg, u gat mad potential.
wordplay: vnorm
closer:ik slick
personals:vnorm

vote: slick
and slick, if u improved ur complexity and vocab, u culd be a battle animal, u gat potential with metaphors but wording them properly is the problem. nice battle peeps. just keep elevating. one

[ik-sl!ck]

ok. ok. havent had time to come on ahh for some time. Nice battle V, that was some tight ish. I think the first 3 votes were wack. Yall should breakdown like xblaze. i guess its a ko though. Yall can still vote, ill like more criticism. Most esp. ill like to see nudiva's comments, where you at???

[mceeQ]

slick wanted a breakdown.....aiight first of all thing i hate about break downs is how pple on AHH try to mould u into da emcee they wanna hear,truth be told dudes be like "oh u should have made this metaphor like this!"

Honestly dats not da emcee i am,realise each emcee grows in his own direction and would rathed have emcee decide where he goes so i'mma jus speak my piece u take it as u want.

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Incoherent cat claimin' he's in school, who's believin this bi*tch?/ She dont rhyme with harmony(her money) thats why what she's spittin is cheap!//

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be rest assured your hands gonna bleed as we fight
cause am harder to beat than a drum with spikes

can't talk to much about similes or technicalities coz dats not ma rep but to put in lay mans terms V'norms verse had more disses than slicks although i really hate when an emcee has to explain his every verse coz its patronizes the reader but here on AHH most sh*t u write jus goes over dudes heads anyway .....but regardless nothing doper than figuring a metaphor an emcee puts out without explanation.
Thats a shout out to AHH read with Third Eyes Open peace yall so much luv to yall n peace to da emcees most def repped ya styles keep killing da verses!!!

[bolaji]

ik-sl!ck said:

Somethins brewing for sure. Yo sike, thanks for the vote but what dyou mean, you accusing v of somethin????

no he accusing ikslick of biting ..these lines are from realraptalk.com/rapbattles bloody ikslick fcukin biter

[ik-sl!ck]

Lol. Ive said it before, am 'off the hook', how the hell can i 'bite lines', plus the only time i bite lines is when am having zebra skin for dinner, you dig. Am ill, i dont even need to reply your wack accusations. Am happy that youve stepped your trash taking game up, this new year. Keep it up, YOUR ROYAL WACKNESS!

[Xblaze]

ik-sl!ck said:

Lol. Ive said it before, am 'off the hook', how the hell can i 'bite lines', plus the only time i bite lines is when am having zebra skin for dinner,

bolaji, i bet ur head wont be able to decipher those simple ones.. :D , dont try too hard u might fracture ur mentality, lol

[africankings]

oh ikslick is also biting. disgraceful

[ik-sl!ck]

Yo africanqueen, feel free to search for my verse on the site that HIS ROYAL WACKNESS provided and stop jumping to conclusions. Its very obvious that mr broke is just being jealous of my skill!

[sauron]

ik-sl!ck said:

Yo africanqueen, feel free to search for my verse on the site that HIS ROYAL WACKNESS provided and stop jumping to conclusions. Its very obvious that mr broke is just being jealous of my skill!

i searched and i noticed some chewin and biting by ikslick , ikslick or what is ya name. cover ur face in shame.