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[mceeQ]

cypher is about the most obscure and crazy sh*t u can think up....i'll get da ball rolling

buttered down flows mistaken for vaginal discharges
spreading chocolate enema's on toasted penal reductions/
teeming with valent, champagne indulgent
tipping scales like sperm whales birth contractions/
captain insurgent bomb "soldiers boys" with detergent
washed up cranked and snapped fingers in virgin
so my coming in was a click away like khoisan conversation
with steel nails on seats the applause is a standing ovation/

[XCAPEE]

so my coming in was a click away like khoisan conversation
with steel nails on seats the applause is a standing ovation/

^^
fav lines..i liked ur vocab and ur flow was aight..though i hardly understood some lines never realy made sense to me..but the whole piece is crazee too short though...stick around and keep droppin'

peaz

[mceeQ]

The Explanation

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buttered down flows mistaken for vaginal discharges

Wanted to start of in a sickening or disgusting tip but at same time with a rhyme scheme based on food,so some females get horrid vag-discharges that are thick as butter(don't ask how i know,u ain't had a HIV biology class u betta have one)so i related the two

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spreading chocolate enema's on toasted penal reductions

Still on the same tip as the first line i continued with it making the obvious ref of chocolate as analogy of sh*t and also added some homo erotism in dat gay dudes of course do it up the bum,no disrespect intended.

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teeming with valent, champagne indulgent

expressing the braggadacio side of myself also setting up the next line by emphasizing the L in words in the rhyme

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tipping scales like sperm whales birth contractions

the L in the words scale and whale allow da flow to move,the phrase is more of imagery than anything trying to imagine how heavy a whale is n more a pregnant one,so its bound to tipp scales especially if it gives birth alot of mass lost tipping da scales.

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captain insurgent bomb "soldiers boys" with detergent

inspired by Iraq war with insurgents n the like but also adding in how Souljah Boys runaway hit "crank it" is watering hip hop down n statement is basically i'm an insurgent bombing da commercial artists to clean the artform up,also sets up next line

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washed up cranked and snapped fingers in virgin

urbsurd wordplay and namechecking but essentially closing the stanza

the last two lines are a simple simile and imagery fused to make an appropraite ending,

Anyway hope more dudes can dropp some ubsurd stuff relavant to themselves

peace Origami out!!

[ghandi]

peepin' thru the windows of my soul~
i witness the sex slave trade and the victims of this hole//
this hell//
the torment of this corner that we dwell~
where law remains foreign, we don't know what peace en-tails/
we try to piece ourselves a piece of heaven but we fell~
from the graces in-to embraces of hades and we tell~
the little faces to follow, so in failure they excel~
dreaming of Apollo, playing ball or being hailed~
as the next Hov', next?...no~
free but we in jail/
pri-o-ri-ties are mixed purchasing whips that are de-tailed/
au-tho-ri-ties persist to crypt they actions with a veil~
we whipped and die in debt because we buy and never sell~
we love the word "re-tail"~
we hate the word "pre-vail"~
throwing "peace" and "gang" signs, u confused or are u frail??/
too many liquor stores//
too proud to let the past pass, so we too quick to pop & let the liquor pour/
Queens-turned-trash on the ave' where you pick a whore~
acknowledge tags of "bitch" and "hoe"// so what u bring the sticker for?
quick 2 grow//
into girls who have to pay a dude who thinks' he slick and so~ :arrow:
he hits them with his walking stick, his title rhymes with wimp i hope :arrow:
his limp becomes the genesis of steps to which he sinks in slow :arrow:
maturity's performing everywhere but they all missed the show//

[mceeQ]

let me learn you.....

i walk beneath skies shedding tears of sunlight/ U-V-/
-isualize words created above watering hells eyes/
welcome to my perilous path of frivilous wrath
john nashing clown's to balance ridiculous math/
gravity non existent only realness keep u down
so in ma world da upper echelon is da underground/
imagine picking flowers of cloud nine as da rain rise
no lupe but in my world u can touch da skies
u'll find a truth in a lie/
in as much da media's truth are a online web of lies
so jus grab a thigh wide hipped with intelligence
hopped with da relevance to spit shipped decadence
and dats jus da ladies u meet at da door
what more could a true revolutionary ask for??

[ghandi]

strutting on the surface of the universe~
flows well tailored and with purpose turn a puny verse~
into custom fits made specifically for ghost writers//
they fashioned for fall, i adjust your esteem to make ur flow tighter......
compare me to legends and measure my niceness//
stroking intellectuals, with pleasure i write this~
Anatomy of Rap//
see my class embraces the creative arm, but severs off the necks with the ice gliss~
labels selling flaws but our perfection is priceless~
i turn ur progression to regression don't fight this~
gi-ant in the sun//
not all heat projects light, fire i spit is in defiance with the sun~
the darkness i embody, hells alliances are formed~
u marvel* at skill// till ur in compliance with the Spawn//
the leader of the army//
armored u kudn't harm me~
ready to detonate so take cover and listen calmly..........................

[d2]

Body cells melt when my words discharge lyk a rocket shell/
am deep 2 da core wiv illicit ryhmes dat forsee times and liquidate minds/
mceeq,ghandi and D2 wreck havoc lyk militia rebels of indiamin/
we chocolate wiv taste just lyk supreme ice~cream/
lyk P.L.O style we form a calvary team laced in immortal bulletproofs
and ill~certified timbarland boots/
liquidatin any mcee dat war against us on foot/
leavin dem burnt 2 dust lyk soots/
we d roots of tha street so when police say freeze we break into
pieces and teleport lyk killa beez/

[ghandi]

Vibing offa' Bobby Womack// shawty throwback//
figure get limber from the pressure of my bozac~
vi-gou-rous this~nigger~is a killer & she know that~
prior to sleep and ci-ga-rettes, the "o" left her soul jacked....
third leg glock, pistol whip her where her dome at/ and she had enough of u lames, I'm "FIRMer" than a "Phone Tap"//
Dark & Beautiful//
tough market for pharmaceuticals~
"jerks" got played, "my seedlings" still in ur cuticles~
"smirks" got glazed, i'm dripping bitch it ain't new to you ~
work magic in sac(k) u sipping the juice i shoot to you//
Pornography at best//
Follow papi i bless//
DNA signatures, Autographs for ur chest~
laundry size loads get a water raft i suggest~
u bring wishes & "wills" becos i slaughter to "death"//
Quit fighting the feel//
spit right in her grill//
im-prov cream-pies fit the life of the pill
nasal shots, facial plots are the life of the kill
pearl necklaces help height excitement for real'//

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[mceeQ]

ghandi said:

Vibing offa' Bobby Womack// shawty throwback//
figure get limber from the pressure of my bozac~
vi-gou-rous this~nigger~is a killer & she know that~
prior to sleep and ci-ga-rettes, the "o" left her soul jacked....
third leg glock, pistol whip her where her dome at/ and she had enough of u lames, I'm "FIRMer" than a "Phone Tap"//
Dark & Beautiful//
tough market for pharmaceuticals~
"jerks" got played, "my seedlings" still in ur cuticles~
"smirks" got glazed, i'm dripping b***h it ain't new to you ~
work magic in sac(k) u sipping the juice i shoot to you//
Pornography at best//
Follow papi i bless//
DNA signatures, Autographs for ur chest~
laundry size loads get a water raft i suggest~
u bring wishes & "wills" becos i slaughter to "death"//
Quit fighting the feel//
spit right in her grill//
im-prov cream-pies fit the life of the pill
nasal shots, facial plots are the life of the kill
pearl necklaces help height excitement for real'//

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dopeness!!

[mceeQ]

da most lethal with da mic flows hated on da pay roll
we simmered under mexican waves swayed by Pedro
our illegitimate servant who stayed on calico's
and tip toed beside stiletto shadowed windows
glass heeling it with midget prostitutes on valium
pimping with a change of clothes for every colored spectrum
i see da pocket ripped letter box fixations
pay cheque neva came in like virgin's unmention-
-nables/quite credible blue collar wet brows
african trying to get with da white like dry elbows
u see da point like da urbsurd ain't neva meet you
while we stay underground like any precious METAL!!

da urbsurd!

[ghandi]

As pens charge spits, i'm drawing on large sips//
Cigars lit, lights is dim, guitars riff//
my mind flips, broads give mind and part quick~
so i find me a Surah to leave ash on Allah's Scripts//
The nature of my character's to murder of these amateurs//
pop Xanax for stress, results are like my avatar//
plot damage unless you exult me as a savage I ~
rap with the "focus" of "fords" equipped with a "ca-me-ra"//
keep ya' candle up ~
my thoughts seeing tri-an-gu-lar//
2 stars of David of course I got the mantle bruh'//
suicidal in verse so u easy to dismantle uh'? ~
I sculpt your destiny with a simple stroke of my spatula//
Skilled mass murderer~
share caste with none-of-ya'//
amass cash, outlast cats my raps numbing ya/
perhaps thats my life's path, the rats running I ~
gave u center stage so i could pull the rug from under ya'//
.....................

Urb-surd

[Rikambura]

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As pens charge spits, i'm drawing on large sips//
Cigars lit, lights is dim, guitars riff//
my mind flips, broads give mind and part quick~
so i find me a Surah to leave ash on Allah's Scripts//
The nature of my character's to murder of these amateurs//
pop Xanax for stress, results are like my avatar//
plot damage unless you exult me as a savage I ~
rap with the "focus" of "fords" equipped with a "ca-me-ra"//
keep ya' candle up ~
my thoughts seeing tri-an-gu-lar//
2 stars of David of course I got the mantle bruh'//
suicidal in verse so u easy to dismantle uh'? ~
I sculpt your destiny with a simple stroke of my spatula//
Skilled mass murderer~
share caste with none-of-ya'//
amass cash, outlast cats my raps numbing ya/
perhaps thats my life's path, the rats running I ~
gave u center stage so i could pull the rug from under ya'//
.....................

exciting tru MC Shit right der!! word