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[arithmetic logic]

eish I think me and nevilbee really killed it...scratch our lines... let me continue...


Doesnt make sense... coz people just write the 1st seven word that come into their mind... U should try it again en after every 4 lines put them together so people appreciate the flow of the poem

Worlds and universes revolve around my spine
turn around and show me your milky way
God then rested on the seventh word
then women continued from there until infinity
I HIT THE KEYBOARD BEFORE THOUGHTS DISSAPEAR
and occassionally i choose to travel alone
i'm proud to wear the concious cloud
With radiations of a black rainbow
while
last word stays hidden, unframed by time
a rare love bestowed upon me hate...
exhausted, workload on back like spare tyre
when the madness lies within...return back
i imitate their whispers without hearing them
even walls talk MADIBA's solitary confinement company

[ghetto queen]

the wind blows my complexion away...forever

[mceeQ]

words are never enuff to express ME!!

[konko]

the battle for freedom, has just begun!!!

[gabitex]

You'll see Africa deep in ma bonez...


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Sup y'all? not enough said.

[ghetto queen]

Lord have mercy on the fallen Amen!!

[konko]

i am the truth that lies within...

[Young Fire]

These 'phat' lines have grown real thin

[mceeQ]

poetry echos in time challenging shadows to dance

[kudzie]

when i speak i heal and kill

[kudzie]

i can kill you with seven words

"taste of your own medicine"

[gabitex]

Two bodies...one mind...'blissing' in Heaven.

[Young Fire]

No love for the loney only hate

[gabitex]

why does taste do sound like Thirst :?:

[kaydee]

Race against time i can't stop now[/b]

[ghetto queen]

memories come back when i run away
i am flying now,sleeping between clouds

[konko]

desperate for love, i keep holding on

[Young Fire]

Theses desperate days have grown so long

[konko]

so long, too long.... but soon gone :wink:

[Young Fire]

And once gone, can't be... given back