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Started by ghetto queen, Aug 23 2006 10:37 PM

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#1 ghetto queen

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Posted 23 August 2006 - 10:37 PM

ey everybody im new to the forum so as an intro i thought i would challenge everybody with one lines with 7 words for eg

death is trying to kill me quick

lets see how far we can get

love and peace blessed be

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Posted 23 August 2006 - 10:42 PM

ghetto queen said:

ey everybody im new to the forum so as an intro i thought i would challenge everybody with one lines with 7 words for eg

death is trying to kill me quick

lets see how far we can get

love and peace blessed be


love makes me stutter so listen closely

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 10:30 AM

love makes me stutter so listen closely
as i try to speak in tongues
I'M WORD ENGRAVED IN DA BELLIES OF CAVES. I'M WISDOM SPREAD ON A PAGE. MY THOTS ARE ELEVATED AND I AM UNCAGED..........

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 10:32 AM

my thoughts twist back silently cracking bones

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 10:51 AM

mind and heart wrestle for the wisecrack
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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:06 AM

i placed a noose round my neck
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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:15 AM

in deep silence i hear loud words

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:15 AM

YOUR LIFE IS YOUR OWN RIGHT

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:20 AM

NAKED THOUGTHS FEEDS NOTHING BUT NO HOPE

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:25 AM

STRIKE THE STEEL WHILE ITS STILL HOT

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:35 AM

in that moment of silence i strike
if poetry comes not as naturally as leaves to a tree, it had better not come at all...it should suprise by a fine excess, and not by singularity; it should strike the reader as a wording of his own hoghest thoughts, and appear almost a remembrance.

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:37 AM

meet the stranger behind the teary mirror
Death......is .......trying.......to .......KILL....me

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:38 AM

love makes me stutter so listen closely
as i try to speak in tongues
my thoughts twist back silently cracking bones
mind and heart wrestle for the wisecrack
i placed a noose round my neck
in deep silence i hear loud words
YOUR LIFE IS YOUR OWN RIGHT
NAKED THOUGTHS FEEDS NOTHING BUT NO HOPE
STRIKE THE STEEL WHILE ITS STILL HOT

I THINK THE FIRST FOUR LINES MAKE SENSE PLACED TOGETHER, EISH FROM
THERE ON HAAI, I DNT KNW!!!! WHAT DO U GUYS THINK?
I'M WORD ENGRAVED IN DA BELLIES OF CAVES. I'M WISDOM SPREAD ON A PAGE. MY THOTS ARE ELEVATED AND I AM UNCAGED..........

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:44 AM

Uncaged Thot said:

love makes me stutter so listen closely
as i try to speak in tongues
my thoughts twist back silently cracking bones
mind and heart wrestle for the wisecrack
i placed a noose round my neck
in deep silence i hear loud words
YOUR LIFE IS YOUR OWN RIGHT
NAKED THOUGTHS FEEDS NOTHING BUT NO HOPE
STRIKE THE STEEL WHILE ITS STILL HOT

I THINK THE FIRST FOUR LINES MAKE SENSE PLACED TOGETHER, EISH FROM
THERE ON HAAI, I DNT KNW!!!! WHAT DO U GUYS THINK?

yeah the 1st 3 lines are tight
Death......is .......trying.......to .......KILL....me

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:54 AM

is this like a neverending poem ?
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Posted 24 August 2006 - 02:49 PM

^^ that would be cool.

Nice thread GQ.
Welcome to AHH :wink:

bless

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 08:41 PM

AddictiveSoul said:

^^ that would be cool.

Nice thread GQ.
Welcome to AHH :wink:

bless

thanks :)
Death......is .......trying.......to .......KILL....me

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 08:45 PM

memories do nothing but stay the same
Death......is .......trying.......to .......KILL....me

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Posted 25 August 2006 - 07:44 AM

wish I could reboot reformat the brain
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Posted 25 August 2006 - 10:51 AM

Rearrange my mind state
emotions blocked for i to remain atleast sane
Perhaps we should not have encouraged
them to use cordless microphones,
for they have walked too far from the
source and are emitting a lesser frequency
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