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[theme elohim]

Inspired by Beesting...write as you post...continue from the last sentence and end with the first sentence on the post above you...unlimited bars..

African hip hop, it started with a naked drum and scarred feet/
undressed the secrets of the land on nature's improvised beat/
I am Tshaka's illegitimate son, intimate with the rising sun/
on cloudy days i radiate heat from the soul to leave minds sun-tan/
from imagination to implemantation we built pyramidic structures/
nomadic peoples,colonised then moved to greener mind pastures/
wrote to Spike to initiate a pan-african flick with the theme Elohim/
during shooting George Bush sent a 100 men strong CIA team/
but i done evaded the system ever since it stole my right to live/
reconstructed the ideology my ancestry was meant to believe/
i was told black slaves used to kick cyphers in slaveships/
instead of the beatbox they threw freestyles to the sound of whips/
I hope this thread receives critical acclaim like mandela's first name/
I wait upon other Mcees to throw conscious lyrics and follow the game/

this should be interesting

[Beesting]

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I am Tshaka's illegitimate son, intimate with the rising sun/
on cloudy days i radiate heat from the soul to leave minds sun-tan/

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i was told black slaves used to kick cyphers in slaveships/
instead of the beatbox they threw freestyles to the sound of whips/
I hope this thread receives critical acclaim like mandela's first name/

Word Theme. People lets elevate. Let do hip hop with a skill for a meaningful reason. Yeah.

[theme elohim]

word beesting...

let me show what I meant by starting with the last sentence and ending with the first...here goes...freestyle

wait upon other Mcees to throw conscious lyrics and follow the game/
we are chess pieces with different shades yet one and the same/
I claimed history and it refused that i was a part of it/
my skin's darkness was commercialised and distributed for profit/
I seen porn actors with thick dicks but lean minds/
light flashes on a scene but their brains shut the blinds/
the nakedness of our souls coludnt be dressed by fancy clothes/
thats like expecting Bush's antourage to travel on dusty roads/
the first man embraced the sun's music and danced to the heat/
African hip hop, it started with a naked drum and scarred feet/

so lets play...remember...conscious lyrics :wink:

[Beesting]

Yo Theme. I got the game going.


African hip hop, it started with a naked drum and scarred feet/
Word was dubbed revolutionary, but mind oppression is now in this rap scene
Kittens picking fake elements, for their ancestors abused this rap settlement
With confusion in the mind, they indulge in drugs, cos that what hip hop supposed to be
That’s why I’m the revolutionary spit kicker, for ma hood dub me the ill sweeper
Cos I got ma mind like a broom paving a way for this cognizant boom
It funny how beef get the limelight, while in this revolutionary class niggers don’t show sight
Maybe I should recite, that consciousness is the Theme,
But if niggers don’t fill me, I rather pray to the Eloheim to shared some light
Eliminate this odor in hip hop pollution, like Rastafarians burning incense as a solution
Bring back our ancestral education, sitting around this fire dropping stories of emancipation
Cos even my grandmother had skill, she dropped a methaphoric thrill, to paint a picture that’s really real
So let do this shit the way it suppose to be, let us not incarcerate but assassinate the lame
Still waiting upon other emcees to throw conscious lyrics and follow the game

[konko]

African hip hop, it started with a naked drum and scarred feet//
black people pouring out their minds to the sound of the beat//
words of wisdom being re-echoed from generations long gone//
recounting past victories and dynasties while gyrating in the sun//
it then evolved over the years..... taken abroad by slaves//
oppressed niggas venting out their frustrations and rage//
they took out the naked drum and replaced it with instruments of choice//
hip hop became the black man's tool, giving him a powerful voice//
fought hard against the system.... and suffered so many victims//
hiphop has come a long way, battered but still proudly existing//
THIS IS A MOVEMENT BROTHERS!...no longer will the black man be ignored//
Mother Africa finally rose up to the defence of her sons//
Sons of Kush ARISE!!.... its time to defend mama's name//
i wait upon other Mcees to throw conscious lyrics and follow the game//


i'm luvin this dawg,....but i think ur rules shuld be adjusted a lil. the next emcee shuld continue from the last sentence only. to avoid recycling of the same ol' lines. or whaddya think??...peace! :wink:

[konko]

uh-oh :roll: ....i guess beesting got his in b4 mine!! its all good tho'.... the next mc shuld just follow suit! 1!

[nii]

nice concept...y'all cats gets ma blessing..

[tha high priest]

Aight cats ammo bless it

I WAIT FOR OTHER MCEES TO THROW CONCIOUS LYRICS AND FOLLOW THE GAME/
as i proceed to pen my thoughts and preserve the name/
hip hop the culture shipped to new york in slave ships/
they tried to contain it but it out lived all their whips/
retraced it's roots now it flourishes in the mutha land/
all those mentally weak better be warned beforehand/
it takes more than a rhyme to become emcee/
yo mind gatta be elevated as all can see/
to plant the seeds(of hiphop) overseas they toiled in the heat /
BUT AFRICAN HIP HOP IT STARTED WITH A NAKED DRUM AND SCARRED FEET/


Yo hope its nice had to write that in 2 minutes sorta freestylin
but yo Theme damn yo piece is to dope ,thikin u shoud put that verse on a beat ,this is elevation
peace to the black gods ,word hiphop.
next emcee step up

[TeeZeR]

WAIT FOR OTHER MCEES TO THROW CONCIOUS LYRICS AND FOLLOW THE GAME::
we then grow with the blame--as rhyming physic splits the breaths in the devil's domain::
more commited than the followers of the Holy Quran::
it's westerns bullying the waves:: for we're flaming holy spirit like a match stick in the New Testament::
facing the wrath of the elohim, we gettin rappers to jump start burning in hell::
it's the threat of the hip hop martyrs...thoughts escape through the pyramid passages to rest on godly platters::
fear gets the dumb to rub their balls in hand::
takin sedatives and hopin for open-minds, as they avoid gettin slain ::
watch the feelings get steep like code 10 trucks::
hold hands and search for first word rhyming with moses::
from the garden of eden, our sistas chose the madam and eve thang::
it's remininsce BUT with AFRICAN HIP HOP IT STARTED WITH A NAKED DRUM AND SCARRED FEET::



Trying my thoughts...havent written anything in a long time! Word word! Theme, Beesting...are you cool people?

[markedos]

With African Hip Hop it started with a Naked Drum and a Scarred Feet
Bitten thru by shackles in slave ships~sailin to lands of sugar and wheat
Not that they could eat~all was meant for their masters' meat
White supremacists who tot they had our forefathers in defeat
But in the trips~wit~whips they danced to the beat with their feet
Made rythm with their cries rhyming wit the beat of their hearts
"U can kill the body, but never the Soul" the unspoken mantra till flesh became earth
Heads never bowed in defeat even wit eyes glarin at death
A song of hope and victory forever remained in their sights
Knowing that another Motherland's Child (MC) will continue the fight
Thus I was introduced to Revive Africa's Pride (RAP) n Stay true to same
While I wait for other emcees to throw conscious lyrics and follow the game


wondaful concept...I hope I'z on track...

Yo TeeZer, where u been @ dawg. Missed ya Mayne! No homo tho...

Peace.

[J-Dogg]

While i wait for other emcees to throw conscious lyrics and follow the game/
i learn from the past, bask in the present and brace myself for tomorrow's pain/
when a one world government is established where will you be?/
N.korea is about to start something, they could push the button for world war three/
will the revolution be televised right in front of our eyes?/
or will the struggle go on long after we have all died?/
Melanin packed, Asiatic Black Man with divine features/
breaking down the science behind the 120 lessons with Poor Righteous Teachers/
when i die, mix my ashes with black sand and splash me in Lake Tanganyika/
World Powers snatch Mama Africa's black gold while her children helplessly toil/
my physical location may change but my mind state will always remain grounded in African Soil/
peace is the absence of confusion, and health is wealth/
fuck religion, wisdom is developed from the knowledge of self/
Western nations robbed our aura, the base of their foundation are hypocritical laws and deceit/
with African Hip Hop it started with a Naked Drum and a Scarred Feet......

peace to the Gods and Earths.

[iz_phizzy]

I wait upon other Mcees to throw conscious lyrics and follow the game/
cuz all i feel is sorrow n pain/n ashamed of most mcs in da game/
rhymin so shallow n lame/man,where is da deepness dats all im sayin/
it might im hatin/but dawg u really outta ya lane/
so im kickin hiphop back 2 its original tracks,where it shd remain/
cuz really u catz have changed/what happened 2 da facts,
da struggle,da pain/b4 da money n da fame/
b4 there ever was a plat 2 claim/i remember it was there/
i dont c it,cant c it no more,i mean its not here/
or im blind?no im not i think it has dispeared/
cuz of da fear u might not have someone 2 share ur thoughts n ideas/
but i no in da hearts n minds of great poetic mcs is still here/
they still ask where did it go?i tell u where/
to millions of dollars they recieve/n millions of dollars on reciepts/
no more beliefs but i believe wit african hiphop
it started wit naked drum n scarred feets/

hope y'all feel me cuz im feelin y'all 2 da max.
this da best post ever no whack rapper or whack line here.
respect n much luv 2 da cat who started this post n respect n luv 2 every mc here.
UNITED STATES OF AFRICA.
UNITED WE SHALL BE.

YO PEACE.
THEO-PHIZZY.

[TeeZeR]

markedos said:

Yo TeeZer, where u been @ dawg. Missed ya Mayne! No homo tho...

Peace.

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Been travellin a lot...work. I want to give myself more time to write cos it buggs the creative-hell outta me!

[theme elohim]

Beesting

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Cos I got ma mind like a broom paving a way for this cognizant boom

Konko Below

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hiphop has come a long way, battered but still proudly existing//

tha high priest

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hip hop the culture shipped to new york in slave ships/
they tried to contain it but it out lived all their whips/

Teezer
:shock:

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it's the threat of the hip hop martyrs...thoughts escape through the pyramid passages to rest on godly platters::

:D

Markedos :D

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Bitten thru by shackles in slave ships~sailin to lands of sugar and wheat
Not that they could eat~all was meant for their masters' meat

J-Dogg

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when a one world government is established where will you be?/
N.korea is about to start something, they could push the button for world war three/

Iz_phizzy, for shizzy

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it might im hatin/but dawg u really outta ya lane/
so im kickin hiphop back 2 its original tracks,where it shd remain/

I love the way cats caught up to the idea...I feel it also that the whole thing would be monotonous if the rules dont change...so this time, when another MC starts with the last line and ends with the first, you should start with his second last line and end with his second from first line, then the following MC starts with the MC above him's second last line (or third if you feel like it, then third from first, but please point this out so that we dont get confused)

but yo, its wonderful that this was stickied...it has shown me the other side of most of you gorillas on this site...lets keep it going...peace
:D

[theme elohim]

From Iz_phizzy's second last line

to millions of dollars they recieve/n millions of dollars on reciepts/
although I'm cashless, i'm not sense(cents)less, got rap 4 keeps/
my storeroom of freedom has sharp implements which dont rust/
thrust a pick into the heads of unjust devils we dont trust/
Israel attacks Lebanon and of-course the US is quick to okay it/
when the master applies a rule, the weak are known to obey it/
but I'm no slave, you can ask the Elohim for the evidence/
I'm heaven sent, formally declared Freedom's life president/
they bombed Iraq for oil to drive their cars to the dark side/
throat sore from sucking the master's d*ck, cant swallow their pride/
I see a US soldier clutching his mother's rossary praying silently/
asking God to forgive him for raping an Iraqi mother violently/
coz that could have been the same that could give birth to him/
the boiling pot of unity now seems to have run out of steam/
someone loses to gain, and its a shame there's none to blame/
cuz all i feel is sorrow n pain/n ashamed of most mcs in da game/

[nii]

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they bombed Iraq for oil to drive their cars to the dark side/
throat sore from sucking the master's d*ck, cant swallow their pride/
I see a US soldier clutching his mother's rossary praying silently/
asking God to forgive him for raping an Iraqi mother violently/

man this lines got me thinking WTF..very deep...props to u man..

[Xblaze]

hope i lived up to it...

someone loses to gain, and its a shame there's none to blame/
the way they chase it, like money is all there is to gain/
we here to lyrically paint the scenes, read between the lines u'll feel our steam/
glacials can't even cool the heat we bring, yeah, we here to scorch the cheats/
with the mind capacity of an 18th century analyst/
we've evolved better than Darwin's analysis/
though i rep the Green-white-Green/
in this thread we all soldiers in the same team/
Africa, green with strong minded blacks and fertiles soils/
yet, this african leaders grap power for the sake of the spoils/
through the screen our readers gon' feel how our blood boil/
we refuse to keep still and watch them treat us like toys/
so many new Idi Amins and Mobutus, whatever happened to the Mandela's and them Shaka Zulus/
walked through the woods barefooted, i've worked for this/
although I'm cashless, i'm not sense(cents)less, got rap 4 keeps/

[TeeZeR]

Xblaze said:

hope i lived up to it...

someone loses to gain, and its a shame there's none to blame/
the way they chase it, like money is all there is to gain/
we here to lyrically paint the scenes, read between the lines u'll feel our steam/
glacials can't even cool the heat we bring, yeah, we here to scorch the cheats/
with the mind capacity of an 18th century analyst/
we've evolved better than Darwin's analysis/
though i rep the Green-white-Green/
in this thread we all soldiers in the same team/
Africa, green with strong minded blacks and fertiles soils/
yet, this african leaders grap power for the sake of the spoils/
through the screen our readers gon' feel how our blood boil/
we refuse to keep still and watch them treat us like toys/
so many new Idi Amins and Mobutus, whatever happened to the Mandela's and them Shaka Zulus/
walked through the woods barefooted, i've worked for this/
although I'm cashless, i'm not sense(cents)less, got rap 4 keeps/

Nice verse bruh


walked through the woods barefooted, i've worked for this::
worshipping my ancestries footsteps where a black child is deep-rooted, these times were missed::
for we’re walking on the concrete with bodies bruised by rockstar guitars::
tattoos covering flesh as concords between likenesses get expanded into evil synergies::
time varies, cos it’s interesting “what” one marries::
with silent verses sparked in the cathedrals of the African “Roman Catholics”::
It’s splinters of dark cultures piercing infants as mothers sleepwalk without lingerie::
Children minds become obese:: what is natural is now obsolete::
travel cheques given to the minds of the drugged colleagues..no more goal planning::
children of the shadows depend on computerized learning::
see the universe was destroyed the day adam got laid and judas got paid::
cos the way they chase it, is like money is all there is to gain/

[linkris]

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cos the way they chase it, is like money is all there is to gain/

Money To GAIN,fuck it im Resorting To BLOOD STAINS
cos certain fools only seeing the "watermark" inside their BRAINS
still i REMAIN,a coloured MAN,Formulating MASTER PLANS
DISASTER DEMANDS me to act wild like TALIBAN
AFGANISTAN, similar to my town CAPE_FLATS where FAKE CATS
get laid out like 8 MATS,madiba's BIRTHDAY,fuck him I HEARD THEY
built him a bridge but DIRT REMAINS,on my people HUNGER PAINS
sniffing glue,smoking CRYSTAL METH alcohol in ARTERIES
FARTHER PLEASE,help my people diagnose this POVERIZED DISEASE
GLOBALIZE the PEACE so we ALL can walk the FUCKEN STREETS
last WEEK they shot my cousin pENTRATE his SPLEEN so there he LAY n BLEED
blood leaking out HIS TEETH,
all of a SUDDEN,i got support frm gangsters BLOOD RUSHIN
supplied me with a weapon still why aint I BUSTIN
the answer i aint ignorant,IN GOD IM TRUSTIN...

2be continued...leavin work now...quick off da dome like that!!!


BTW TRUE STORY!


Peace.

[Xblaze]

TeeZeR said:

Nice verse bruh


see the universe was destroyed the day adam got laid and judas got paid::
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thats dope men. linkris, u keepin it real men. peace