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[Skiz]

yo this is my first time is this forum...

im here to give ya'll the real definition of an emcee....
although im asian, i still bring fear to everybody like i was the bird flu disease...
i bring bad luck to my adversaries like it was written in chinese fortune cookies..
only wif 4 lines i can bring fear to many, and there's no product disclaimer saying 'results may vary'...

i know im still wack, but hey, im still learning...
so feel free to critic me,so i can come up with a better verse next time..

[is jus' me]

[quote name="kabSWORD"]I drink meta4s in a can of sprite

creative!!!! :lol:

[ghandi]

they say "maybe's" not definite/
my attention span is hip hop......................anything else i'm deficit/ :!:
we bank on rap and interest is a deposit/
write (right) music with feel' cuz' trash is whats "left" of it/ :!:
"say life's a bitch", she ain't let me hit the best of it/
so i bleed music and happen 2 breathe music/
and i don't just hear or listen i see music/
so if these eyes were shut.................i possess the blind's intuition..................trust me homie i'd feel music/ :idea:
"Maybe's" no promise thoughts crazy as my knowledge/
if music was religion then hip hop should be Mohammed/ :idea:
NO BLASPHEMY.............. :shock: /
feel threatened? u cud' ask for me/
father these thoughts then discard em' it's ba-stard-ly/
turning soldier's in casualties......
don't let the realness confuse u, please/
rap is all crack sales, and your scales and ya gat tales please tell me why the fuck crap sells/
pastelle dreams/
champagne & caviar..................benzes & ja-gu-ar's...........
lobster & shrimp/
niggas wantin' power turn 2 mobsters & pimps/
4ever in pursuit of what will vanish when they blink/
"niggerz" still slaves cuz' they do not wanna think..................dats why "hell" is petrified by the "fire" in my ink/ :!:
see i promised momma i won't stand over a kitchen sink......
this inner pride is like "therapy" something u'll neva "shrink"/
ONE!!

[Ripstar]

/they say the pen is mightier than the sword/
/but a knife used right would take a sucker's life/
/so imagine what could be done with my word/ :?:
/what i write could torture a soul in the next existense/
/so just try to imagine the destruction in a grusome sentence/
/what was written or what was spoken may be a blessing or a token/
/or may lead to the inevitible demise of an individual/
/ think about all the suffering of some nations/
/curses placed on generations/
/ the sword has never been seen to raise the dead/
/but that man rose up as soon as those words were said/ :idea:
/these words could raise a people up or drag em down/
/my people are still being put down just look around/
/but nonetheless what they say can't get in my way/
/i prophesy success for myself my name's written meaning is wealth/ :!:
/with all of this in place i will never fail/ attempts by all haters are futile to avail/
/look at martin look at malcom/ the outcome of the words they spoke brought hope/
/their words let a light shine in when things were looking grim/
/words motivate men when chances are looking slim/
/but the sword is 1 dimensional can only do one thing/
/and its just so retarded how men glorify it/
/i guess its all because of capital but i dont even try it/
/but me i glorify these words thats y i'm a real emcee/
/now i've painted a beautiful picture of words for ya'll to savour and see/

[ghandi]

Ripstar said:

/ the sword has never been seen to raise the dead/
/but that man rose up as soon as those words were said/ :idea:
/these words could raise a people up or drag em down/
/my people are still being put down just look around/
/but nonetheless what they say can't get in my way/
/i prophesy success for myself my name's written meaning is wealth/ :!:

i'm liking the line of thought, & how u "carefully" stuck 2 da' script!!
Nice One Chief!
Big Up's.......Naija
WELCOME!

[Smawlz' 2ruth]

Quote: " " " n a cn f spryt. [kabSWORD] dats a mul line nucka!!! fede

[Smawlz' 2ruth]

Steppin 2 me is worse den dying in ur sleep
Ma vocabulary so rich I spit currencies
I pass cyphaz like joints only difference is
I hit harder den erectionz on virgin penises
For you 2 be a hard MC u need more miracles den in Genesis






Shout out 2 ma nucka KabSWORD.....yir lil nucka is on point lyk X & Y coordinates..holla!!

[kabSWORD]

Ma vocabulary so rich I spit currencies
I pass cyphaz like joints only difference is
I hit harder den erectionz on virgin penises

Too ILL bra!!!!THATS WAT kc CALL HI-LEVL META4S...

[pro-dominant]

i write till im outta space like an astronaut/
my brain is often compared 2 the technology that nasa got
i never ask 4 props/when passin blocks
cuz i mastered drops so heavy it outweighs that of Nagasakis aftershock
so hush hush now... u never blasted glocks
these rap authors(Arthur) sayin they king.... meanwhile im takin they bitch like im sir lancelot
no man can box wit the human punchline that stun minds like a Tazer once ur ass get shot

[Smawlz' 2ruth]

Quote

i write till im outta space like an astronaut

Wooooo dats a hot one!!!!! write till u outt space like an astronaut!!! dats a killer pun

[linkris]

MUch love people, thanks for keeping this thread allive.

We will revive and rennovate this thread, forum and whole board soon.

One Love.

-Peace+Maximum Respekt!-

[dramatik]

its been slept on like a raffia mat,im keystylin 2 bring it back
mattuh'fact been reppin AHH since wayback,one of the legends
when i rhyme i bring an essene,read with deference
check the cyber refernce,my skills on point like learning how to Fence
brain cavities dense,so dey cant contemplate my skill
im coming of the head,like a trip to te barbers
tryin to make tha style sharper,spittin wit a knife to my tongue
the best there is,sure ya boy counted among ......

[BarStool]

Sup people?
Check this cipher!

Knockin on death's door: I'm gon' cipher til I die/
Am immortal &futuristic; the movie buffs'll love my sci-fi til I die/
I'm dyed-in-the-wool...an uncommon fabric/
I bust your thought bubble: how dare you call me dat prick?/
They didn't know you were a virgin til I got past your hymen/
Carpenters handle on a mic can't get you through the zone that I'm in/
Put your thyme in and start currying favours from me/
Best place to get a bandwagon is Avis or me/
Pay rental ( :idea: parental): ATTENTION...kids are not allowed to hire/
The Wordsmith on a barstool: you won't find another higher/
I been slept on for years like the ground under Rip Van Winkle/
Hip Hop for heads ( :idea: foreheads): the dumb think and wrinkle/
Superstar:I'm the Nigerian version of Lupe Fiasco/
Rugby-style; I "Kick, Push"...your loop is a fiasco/
Bulldozer: the old order's what I've been wreckin' since/
Hot ( :idea: hurt) 16's:I spit more than unwanted teenage pregnancies

[BarStool]

Sup Ghandi?
I loved your freestyle cipher (quoted below) and there were lines that reminded me of "Rap Game/Crack Game" off Hova's 2nd album! Your train of thought arrived at the destination of logic and delivered the goods!
Props to you, bro!


Your "HOT" freestyle cipher caught my attention and that's not easy to do!
I'm working on my album and I pictured a collabo between us that would be as hot as Biggie & Jay-z's verses on "Brooklyn's Finest" and "I Love The Dough"! It was fun thinking about it and while it may never see the light of day, you can get to see what it may have been like!
Wait til you get to the bottom of this (literally and figuratively)!

ghandi said:

they say "maybe's" not definite/
my attention span is hip hop......................anything else i'm deficit/ :!:
we bank on rap and interest is a deposit/
write (right) music with feel' cuz' trash is whats "left" of it/ :!:
"say life's a b***h", she ain't let me hit the best of it/
so i bleed music and happen 2 breathe music/
and i don't just hear or listen i see music/
so if these eyes were shut.................i possess the blind's intuition..................trust me homie i'd feel music/ :idea:
"Maybe's" no promise thoughts crazy as my knowledge/
if music was religion then hip hop should be Mohammed/ :idea:
NO BLASPHEMY.............. :shock: /
feel threatened? u cud' ask for me/
father these thoughts then discard em' it's ba-stard-ly/
turning soldier's in casualties......
don't let the realness confuse u, please/
rap is all crack sales, and your scales and ya gat tales please tell me why the f*ck crap sells/
pastelle dreams/
champagne & caviar..................benzes & ja-gu-ar's...........
lobster & shrimp/
niggas wantin' power turn 2 mobsters & pimps/
4ever in pursuit of what will vanish when they blink/
"niggerz" still slaves cuz' they do not wanna think..................dats why "hell" is petrified by the "fire" in my ink/ :!:
see i promised momma i won't stand over a kitchen sink......
this inner pride is like "therapy" something u'll neva "shrink"/
ONE!!

Gandhi, you got the wisdom of the ages; talk of the sages/
Gandhi ain't dead: you alive ( :idea: are live) like performin on stages/
I feel your line:
"my attention span is hip hop: anything else i'm deficit"/
Record in the company of me and they gon say "Def is it"/
Jam..let them label us and spread the word like the product on bread/
We a cross breed ( :idea: vicious)
C'mon dawg: we stack chips til Forbes nod at our bread/
Turnovers;gross on mics, no taxis ( :idea: taxes): yeah the net cease/
We ain't no false profits ( :idea: prophets): we're 2 of the best net-cees/
I'm hip hop: critics say there's a dearth of me/
I make a Hitman ( :idea: video game)
The Godfather; I mother ( :idea: murder)til the death of me/
I kick and beat a team the number of this bar/
More verses than the Bible: I got "Judges" that have you dis-barred/
I murder by "Numbers" so they "Exodus" before "Deuteronomy"/
Pay your dues: niggaz queuing on line ( :idea: Internet) to honour me/
"Revelation" of my greatness is important for their "Genesis"/
I'm on top of the game like I'm standing on a Sega Genesis/
I play the station ( :idea: Playstation):
my songs gettin more plays than Pro Evolution Soccer/
Watch my space ( :idea: MySpace.com) to see a pro in evolution, sucker/
I am the "End of Days": say goodbye to your "Last Action Hero"/
I squash a nigga (Schwarzenegger):sue me, NAH; I am a class-action hero/
We done took over the world and it's not a monopoly thing/
We got the goods and when it's a wrap, it's not polythene/
Gandhi and BarStool: lightin up the place like Michael Faraday/
Certify this as the bomb; show this to Mohammed El-Baradei/

[ghandi]

ey what up Barstool? Appreciate the appreciation son (so to speak) :mrgreen:
Solid drops mehn.....::
I kick and beat a team the number of this bar/
More verses than the Bible: I got "Judges" that have you dis-barred/
I murder by "Numbers" so they "Exodus" before "Deuteronomy"/
Pay your dues: niggaz queuing on line ( :idea: Internet) to honour me/
FIRE!!

so ghandi's cre-a-tor is screaming "He's Alive"~
no Lazarus or Frankenstein, a genius never dies~
the stone's been rolled away ur saviour has arrived~
work-fire, no circus still u see me in the skies*/
still a b-boy i make u spin on ur head~
the "new topic" of discussion i'm beginning a thread~*
u play pro with ur play-dough i been on my bread~
i'm paid hoe, u on pay-roll i'll grin when i'm dead/
while u rapping i'm emceeing, i ain't in if u led~
we part of the same, but differ like the shin and the leg~/
so fuck the body-part-talk~
corporate rapper get ur body-guard-chalked~
in the jungle where my body-got-marked~

*WRITERS BLOCK + SLEEP =*
s'gud Barstool?

[Travelling_Man]

No change is ever good if there's lowshedding involved~~
power cuts got us shook, we have a major crisis to solve~~
dealing with criminal activity in the dark, thorough breads revolve~~
that 38 more freely,~~automatics making ways on streets hungry for blood greedy~~
metal slugs thru ur chest, knife in ur back no guilty consience on these btches sht became easy~~
after the first life they took, looking for a fast way out of poverty so they firght the books~~
never willing to learn registrated in the college of crooks~~
travelling man breaking it down for yall my pops life they took~~
those faggot ass still roaming the streets if they aint dead police couldnt find no proof~~
no withnesses, no finger prints nuthing like that look~~
if i had the opportunity i'd have their devil ridden souls took~~send em to hell~~

[BarStool]

Ghandi, sup?
Just got back from church and a then a business meeting and saw your reply. Thanks for the aprreciation. Like Hov say "I place my hand on my heart, that means I feel ya; real recognize real and you're looking familiar"!
Nice post, no kidding and I'm loving the "Lyrical Exercise"...and this goes out to all the other lovely peeps in this forum, "y'all niggaz ain't tired, right?"

Quote

"so ghandi's cre-a-tor is screaming "He's Alive"~
no Lazarus or Frankenstein, a genius never dies~
the stone's been rolled away ur saviour has arrived~
work-fire, no circus still u see me in the skies*/
still a b-boy i make u spin on ur head~
the "new topic" of discussion i'm beginning a thread~*
u play pro with ur play-dough i been on my bread~
i'm paid hoe, u on pay-roll i'll grin when i'm dead/
while u rapping i'm emceeing, i ain't in if u led~
we part of the same, but differ like the shin and the leg~/
so f*ck the body-part-talk~
corporate rapper get ur body-guard-chalked~
in the jungle where my body-got-marked~"

Quote

Ghandi, start reelin in the lines! This is no small fish ish you got here!

O.K, lemme kick a few...

You said "the "new topic" of discussion i'm beginning a thread"/
Watch me weave it and go where even angels fear to tread/
Peter Parker with the Web ( :idea: Internet), flow peddled like hashish/
Censor the head lines;2day's Sunday,not on your life: don't u dare rehash ish'/
AHH is my church; take my tight ( :idea: tithe) and my offering/
Hip Hop Religion: download my Gospel and start buffering/
I saw the future, you hungered for my bread til you got served/
I got more moves than all the b-boys in "You Got Served/ :!:
Nas say money is a bitch, I tell her: "you better doff your hat, ma"/
BarStool and Gandhi's gettin more famous than Mahatma/
An asthma patient say "BarStool is deadlier than my asthma/
My flow is breath-taking: I am more noxious than miasma/
Hang yourself, I give Europe ( :idea: you rope) a very Black Death/
Niger-Deltan kidnapping the game cos the U.S owes us a "Black" debt/( :idea: reparation)
Your "corporate rapper get ur body-guard-chalked" barely made a mark on my blackboard/
Idle mind's the devil workshop: you dont wanna see this Black ( :idea: African) bored/


Gandhi, I know you'll love this, bro!
Real recognize real and you're lookin' familiar!

Hola at The Wordsmith!!!
ONE!!!

[Travelling_Man]

I love life, love mics, i love the battle sight, rhymes ignite, sparking tragidy to the lousy rhyme parasites, like lise they ich me on bomb ur squard shedding lite, that in verbal fights with travelling man theyr the loosin type , dont stand a chance, cant pose a threat these cats, this aint a catwalk, they r like kids in beaches on seasons greetings they easily get lost,

[Niggascope]

war or peace that's what we all about
feel me over and over like u rotatin da roundabout
i came,i saw, right now am about to conquered
maximus conquered, so niggascope have to conquered
da rap industry is bullshit and full of shit.
give me an elbow room where i can put my own shit
underground hardcore wit da lyrikal hit.
don't mess wit me cos am frm da southside
u fuck wit me, i kidnap u like da militant frm da southside.
when u thru with tis joint u betta turn 2 da other side
and watch me as i move side to side with da slug.
am as bad as da murth4kin cryin freeman

[dramatik]

Niggascope said:

war or peace that's what we all about
feel me over and over like u rotatin da roundabout
i came,i saw, right now am about to conquered
maximus conquered, so niggascope have to conquered
da rap industry is bullshit and full of shit.
give me an elbow room where i can put my own shit
underground hardcore wit da lyrikal hit.
don't mess wit me cos am frm da southside
u f*ck wit me, i kidnap u like da militant frm da southside.
when u thru with tis joint u betta turn 2 da other side
and watch me as i move side to side with da slug.
am as bad as da murth4kin cryin freeman

my guy yu don dey rap,das a nice development check

back in the roc,me and scope hustled dat green
where on schemes to achieve cream,tryin to remain seen
mad shining,at mama's store dining,in YUPPIES wining
leech niggas got perfect timing,something like jeff atkins
im rappin sumthing like gettin a good joint
forgive my keystyle,typing witout my eyes on font


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