smh ...
:roll: Senseless and Dee
I edited your posts (and now i've deleted them), reason being (like everyone's been tryna tell you) because THIS IS NOT THE BATTLE FORUM! you wanna spark a braai, you're in the wrong pozzie guys. Now do you wanna make history and be the first people ever to be banned from the spoken word forum?..... Thought not. So
ABIDE. I'm far too protective over this dome to let irrational kids like you disturb the peace. Now cease with the SPAM.
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Newbees, get in here :)
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Posted 16 March 2006 - 01:47 PM
You wish is my command oh great one...(bow bow)
Did i mention how pretty you are?
Did i mention how pretty you are?
2 rifles and a mic...The Lyrical Assasin...
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Posted 16 March 2006 - 02:29 PM
@ Deep"Shit" Boy it's enough now. You really crossing the line. Leave poetry if you can't relate to 'em poets. Actually, you remind me of a man who once said poetry is for poets, of which I doubted. But you makin' me change ma thots.
Suggestion/advice
Feed from what we feeding on and don't respond if you find that you lack the capacity. Place is elevating, place is true/real, so why put it down.
You have been already found wanting. So don't let us find you not deserving. Please. And you no where to find the meat, so go on bark, and run after it.
Suggestion/advice
Feed from what we feeding on and don't respond if you find that you lack the capacity. Place is elevating, place is true/real, so why put it down.
You have been already found wanting. So don't let us find you not deserving. Please. And you no where to find the meat, so go on bark, and run after it.
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Posted 16 March 2006 - 08:10 PM
Sanibonani, Dumelang, Molweni, Ndaa, Thobela, Avuxeni,
Greetings to one and all.
I dont know any African greetings except RSA, so i would like to apologise to my siblings that were not properly greeted..
Plz school me so that next time i will greet you respectfully.
Dont forget to tell me the language and country.
Its about time we improved our own customs as the natives of this continent, i'm not saying we'll improve by learning each others language but it's a stepping stone, one step at a time...
I'm new in this forum, i dont know how things r done around here but i'm always willing to learn that's if what i'm saying sounds offencive to others..
Anyway i was just introducing myself
1 LOVE
1 MIND
PEACE 2all my ppl..
Stay Black...
Stay Proud...
Greetings to one and all.
I dont know any African greetings except RSA, so i would like to apologise to my siblings that were not properly greeted..
Plz school me so that next time i will greet you respectfully.
Dont forget to tell me the language and country.
Its about time we improved our own customs as the natives of this continent, i'm not saying we'll improve by learning each others language but it's a stepping stone, one step at a time...
I'm new in this forum, i dont know how things r done around here but i'm always willing to learn that's if what i'm saying sounds offencive to others..
Anyway i was just introducing myself
1 LOVE
1 MIND
PEACE 2all my ppl..
Stay Black...
Stay Proud...
"I'll rather die for an idea that will live
than live for an idea that will die"........Steve Biko
than live for an idea that will die"........Steve Biko
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Posted 16 March 2006 - 08:22 PM
Welcome to it brotha. Don't worry, the ropes aren't much to get around... keywords are "respect" and "love" - its all in the "read before you post" thread.
looking forward to indulging in your pieces.
Lets elevate :wink:
bless
looking forward to indulging in your pieces.
Lets elevate :wink:
bless
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Posted 17 March 2006 - 07:19 AM
I'm sorry,i was merely introducing myself when he started.
ASKIES
thousand apologies
ASKIES
thousand apologies
senselessly i try to make sense of my surroundings,using words.Ihope i'm not confusing u while u read this senseless verse.i'm just a lyricist.at least i hope that part makes sense!
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Posted 19 March 2006 - 02:24 AM
JUST INTRODUCIN MA SELF...
SOME OF YA'LL HAVE SOME GOOD SH1T....SOME REAL TALENT IN HERE!
SOME OF YA'LL HAVE SOME GOOD SH1T....SOME REAL TALENT IN HERE!
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Posted 22 March 2006 - 08:28 AM
never really got a chance 2 introduce myself but dis already feels like home....
if poetry comes not as naturally as leaves to a tree, it had better not come at all...it should suprise by a fine excess, and not by singularity; it should strike the reader as a wording of his own hoghest thoughts, and appear almost a remembrance.
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Posted 22 March 2006 - 02:20 PM
:oops: I'M NEW TO THIS SITE BUT I'M INTERESTD IN FINDING OUT BOUT WAT DA "world" THIJNKS BOUT HIPHOP
aDDICTIVE sOUL THANKS 4 DA INTRO 2 DIS MAD TITE SITE MUCH LUV SISTA
aDDICTIVE sOUL THANKS 4 DA INTRO 2 DIS MAD TITE SITE MUCH LUV SISTA
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Posted 25 March 2006 - 09:34 PM
:D hey...name = Illegally Grown. I was searching around for some inspiration last night while i was writing and found this site. love the talent. <3
Mind Arresting
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Posted 29 March 2006 - 03:39 PM
I bring darkness to the five radiations of the stellate properties...
Show your love to mr new please :lol:
Show your love to mr new please :lol:
http://www.myspace.com/athsense
"I stopped combing my mind so my thoughts could lock" - Saul Williams
That's my DAD on the Avatar... Mojaki
"I stopped combing my mind so my thoughts could lock" - Saul Williams
That's my DAD on the Avatar... Mojaki
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Posted 30 March 2006 - 01:08 PM
I'm home on this
Until we know who created & why us we'l fulfill our purpose on earth.
A relationship with our creator is with finding out about
He who created the internet didnt do so for nothing right,
twas for a purpose
THe same with our God
A relationship with our creator is with finding out about
He who created the internet didnt do so for nothing right,
twas for a purpose
THe same with our God
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Posted 03 April 2006 - 06:46 AM
^^Wassup peoples. welcome.
Shit, Varsity's takin its toll on me :roll: I've been pulling allnighters for the past couple of weeks - work is starting to pile up because the term's almost over and for a coupla moments there i felt i couldnt stay afloat... I did though :D Typing the last assignment now then i'm going home tommorow morning... Once i'm back in Durbz i'll pay more attention to the poetry domain. Sorry for neglecting the forum for so long fam.
MuchLove :wink:
Shit, Varsity's takin its toll on me :roll: I've been pulling allnighters for the past couple of weeks - work is starting to pile up because the term's almost over and for a coupla moments there i felt i couldnt stay afloat... I did though :D Typing the last assignment now then i'm going home tommorow morning... Once i'm back in Durbz i'll pay more attention to the poetry domain. Sorry for neglecting the forum for so long fam.
MuchLove :wink:
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Posted 07 April 2006 - 01:03 PM
I have been guilty of the same thing because of work commitmentsa but I know poets are not people to supervise anyway, they are their own masters and empresses....it just flatters me knowing that fact. You come back to the site and there is no confusion at all. but bear with Addictive coz i know she really is into this thousand percent...
Do your thing Empress Soul
Do your thing Empress Soul
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Posted 15 April 2006 - 09:02 PM
From the Heart
Need more friends with wings
all the angels i know
put concrete in my veins
I'd always walk home alone
So i became lifeless just like my telephone
There's nothing to lose
when no one knows your name
There's nothing gain
But the days don't seem to change
never played truth or dare
I'd have to check my mirror
to see if i'm still here
My parents had no clue
that i ate all my luches alone in the bathroom
There's nothing to loose
When no one knows your name
there's nothing to gain
but the days don't seem to change
there's nothing to loose
My note book will explain
There's nothing to gain
And I can'tfight the pain
I want to get the .9 millimeter out from under mah bed and blow out mah fuckin brains
Cuz mah life is too hectic
Mah parents is too reckless
I wanna grow up to be somebody
But Young Fyah thinks he ain't gonna make it
I'm layin my heart out to y'all naked like Marques H.
Mah loyalty to Pink will never ever fade
And mah feelings toward Head Niggas N Chrage will never ever change
So let's see how you think
It is to be me
Need more friends with wings
all the angels i know
put concrete in my veins
I'd always walk home alone
So i became lifeless just like my telephone
There's nothing to lose
when no one knows your name
There's nothing gain
But the days don't seem to change
never played truth or dare
I'd have to check my mirror
to see if i'm still here
My parents had no clue
that i ate all my luches alone in the bathroom
There's nothing to loose
When no one knows your name
there's nothing to gain
but the days don't seem to change
there's nothing to loose
My note book will explain
There's nothing to gain
And I can'tfight the pain
I want to get the .9 millimeter out from under mah bed and blow out mah fuckin brains
Cuz mah life is too hectic
Mah parents is too reckless
I wanna grow up to be somebody
But Young Fyah thinks he ain't gonna make it
I'm layin my heart out to y'all naked like Marques H.
Mah loyalty to Pink will never ever fade
And mah feelings toward Head Niggas N Chrage will never ever change
So let's see how you think
It is to be me
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Posted 18 April 2006 - 04:02 PM
Hey yall,
Diggin the spoken word angle here, bumped in from the nigerian hiphop forums but I write poetry and do spoken word too.
Been writing for a couple years now, its a pity there arent more avenues to vent our poetry in Africa.
Holla at the bwoy!
Hang Over - Oct. 19, 2005
Pulsating waves of heady nothingness,
Alcoholic for a glass too many.
No,.. I should have had that long long piss,
wet the earth in the corner,
let the one eyed snake spit and hiss.
I should have told a few more stories,
spun a few more yarns
and walked away.
Away before the Devil wreaked his harm,
conned away my senses with his liquid charm.
I should have taken that phone call
and left saying, "duty calls".
I should have poured a long libation
to the lost souls under my seat
and whispered prayers to escape
drunkeness's clean sheet.
But alas, none of these I did,
a victim of pride and prejudice
compromised at intoxication's precipice.
"How I go run?, Haba"
Now here I lay, dinner thrown and error prone,
unable to lift my eyes or my limbs,
unsure of where I am or the state of my things,
bile mouthed and fouled,
devoid of thought or comprehension.
A perfect study of human self-destruction.
A panorama of drunken dysfunction.
Nah,...I shouldn't have had those last few bottles.
I wrote this carrying the worst headache of my life, so its a lil off but u get the picture abi
Diggin the spoken word angle here, bumped in from the nigerian hiphop forums but I write poetry and do spoken word too.
Been writing for a couple years now, its a pity there arent more avenues to vent our poetry in Africa.
Holla at the bwoy!
Hang Over - Oct. 19, 2005
Pulsating waves of heady nothingness,
Alcoholic for a glass too many.
No,.. I should have had that long long piss,
wet the earth in the corner,
let the one eyed snake spit and hiss.
I should have told a few more stories,
spun a few more yarns
and walked away.
Away before the Devil wreaked his harm,
conned away my senses with his liquid charm.
I should have taken that phone call
and left saying, "duty calls".
I should have poured a long libation
to the lost souls under my seat
and whispered prayers to escape
drunkeness's clean sheet.
But alas, none of these I did,
a victim of pride and prejudice
compromised at intoxication's precipice.
"How I go run?, Haba"
Now here I lay, dinner thrown and error prone,
unable to lift my eyes or my limbs,
unsure of where I am or the state of my things,
bile mouthed and fouled,
devoid of thought or comprehension.
A perfect study of human self-destruction.
A panorama of drunken dysfunction.
Nah,...I shouldn't have had those last few bottles.
I wrote this carrying the worst headache of my life, so its a lil off but u get the picture abi
7 days of bullshit make one Weak...
This thing called rhymin//aint different from gold minin//
we all on assignment// to unearth the diamond//
I BLACK OUT like DOS/how u gon BACK OUT/there's no BACK DOORS/like PORSHE//
This thing called rhymin//aint different from gold minin//
we all on assignment// to unearth the diamond//
I BLACK OUT like DOS/how u gon BACK OUT/there's no BACK DOORS/like PORSHE//
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Posted 19 April 2006 - 06:52 AM
Young Fire and Auxygyn, I already anticipate the richness of your poetry and I hope you will fully participate in the activities that the poetry family engages each other on.
God bless..welcome home
God bless..welcome home
I do R.A.P (Reflect And Prophesy)
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Posted 19 April 2006 - 11:21 PM
Hey whats up Guy My name is Ian aka Emcee E
Ghanian-Canadian if there is such a thing.
I am so happy to find this site
Ghanian-Canadian if there is such a thing.
I am so happy to find this site
If you Wanna Floss Ice put your Dentist in a Freezer!!
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Posted 20 April 2006 - 07:28 AM
Welcome home soldier :wink:
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