Hi all, am just a newly planted seedling in this poetry garden
Allow me to enter the living rooms of your minds with my thoughts,
My feet are a little muddy from walking through my dreams
But i promise not to drag filth across your headspace..
They call me the RedSpot, from Jupiter I descend
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Newbees, get in here :)
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Posted 22 April 2008 - 02:12 PM
Great minds think alike, or so they say
But who say free minds think that way
Willpress here to free great minds
Make you hate me and love me back through them rhymes
Dont tear at my soul coz it aint mine
Tis how Purgatory express itself through time
peace!
But who say free minds think that way
Willpress here to free great minds
Make you hate me and love me back through them rhymes
Dont tear at my soul coz it aint mine
Tis how Purgatory express itself through time
peace!
"Spark the izm, my expertism is lyricism
My flow will take you over, like I was hypnotism.."
Hit me up:
http://willpress.blogspot.com
My flow will take you over, like I was hypnotism.."
Hit me up:
http://willpress.blogspot.com
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Posted 13 May 2008 - 03:21 AM
HI everyone just joined even gave myself a whole new namw for this little adventure... I'm loving the WOrds ... beautiful poetry Africa ... here is a lil bit abt me
i'm a a diva..... in the making that is
born and raised in the dusts of the Kgalagadi
Reared to fear not the midday sun
The heat that rips through the soul of when sun stands
In all her glory and glares at the barren land
speaking begging pleading imploring
asking ears to listen
as she shouts.... I AM The SOle DiVa Wa Kgalagadi!!!
born and raised in the dusts of the Kgalagadi
Reared to fear not the midday sun
She is the sole diva of the Kgalagadi
The soul,sole diva of the Kgalagadi
Shining divalike..... as the bright yellow turns
Into a murky orange and the diva goes out to play
her work is done for today
i'm a a diva..... in the making that is
born and raised in the dusts of the Kgalagadi
Reared to fear not the midday sun
The heat that rips through the soul of when sun stands
In all her glory and glares at the barren land
speaking begging pleading imploring
asking ears to listen
as she shouts.... I AM The SOle DiVa Wa Kgalagadi!!!
born and raised in the dusts of the Kgalagadi
Reared to fear not the midday sun
She is the sole diva of the Kgalagadi
The soul,sole diva of the Kgalagadi
Shining divalike..... as the bright yellow turns
Into a murky orange and the diva goes out to play
her work is done for today
#144
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Posted 17 May 2008 - 10:59 PM
Who am i?
I am but a woman who has lost her way in life but is finding herself through words
who am i?
I am the only star in the sky brightening up ur lives with syllables of salvation and sacrifice
who am i?
In essence im a lil like you alot like me but nothing like them
who am i?
just a ghost on a board with seekers searching for an identity.
THATS WHO I BE.
I am but a woman who has lost her way in life but is finding herself through words
who am i?
I am the only star in the sky brightening up ur lives with syllables of salvation and sacrifice
who am i?
In essence im a lil like you alot like me but nothing like them
who am i?
just a ghost on a board with seekers searching for an identity.
THATS WHO I BE.
Im not sure what im looking for, so maybe ive found it and cant see it.
#145
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Posted 19 May 2008 - 04:31 PM
welcome to all the newbees. i been trying to catch up on here and already found some great pieces from the new poets. keep inkin, keep commenting (very important to keep this board alive!!!!) and keep posting
This time, love doesn't hurt, nor is is complicated
Find me on facebook, soraya deb
Find me on facebook, soraya deb
#146
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Posted 11 June 2008 - 03:59 AM
ETERNAL-EYES HERE...
I'M 18 LIVIN IN THE CITY OF SIN (VEGAS) THAT IS...
KINDA GREW UP ON A BAD PAST SO MY POETRY IS REALLY AN OUTLET.
IT HELPS GET RID OF THE HURT..
I LIKE THIS SITE AND HOPE TO GET POSITIVE FEEDBACK FROM ALL YA'LL...
I'M 18 LIVIN IN THE CITY OF SIN (VEGAS) THAT IS...
KINDA GREW UP ON A BAD PAST SO MY POETRY IS REALLY AN OUTLET.
IT HELPS GET RID OF THE HURT..
I LIKE THIS SITE AND HOPE TO GET POSITIVE FEEDBACK FROM ALL YA'LL...
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Posted 18 June 2008 - 03:10 PM
I am a newbee here and i have read poems from great poets,what we need is for the regulars to read our work ,we need motivation from the regulars. :idea:
#148
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Posted 19 June 2008 - 06:59 AM
squid I got u. and thank u for following the rules, I noticed that u have been giving feedback too. I'm gonna get to ur poem right now
This time, love doesn't hurt, nor is is complicated
Find me on facebook, soraya deb
Find me on facebook, soraya deb
#149
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Posted 19 June 2008 - 05:59 PM
uhm! i joined this forum ages ago, but iM still classified as a newbee. what does it take for me to be an oldee?
I'm only a shadow of this image you see in the light
#150
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Posted 19 June 2008 - 06:01 PM
activitity! apparently you haven't posted that many messages. the more active you are on the forum, the quicker you'll move to something else than 'newbie'
This time, love doesn't hurt, nor is is complicated
Find me on facebook, soraya deb
Find me on facebook, soraya deb
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Posted 25 June 2008 - 06:06 PM
Mahipi & Mahipigadi madume keo.
MR OB ke ene o, Lehipi la Pitori
I got in today...eya, setempe se sale metsi.
Ah ke amogetswe??
MR OB ke ene o, Lehipi la Pitori
I got in today...eya, setempe se sale metsi.
Ah ke amogetswe??
"Ke mogale fela gake galefele batsogapele"
#152
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Posted 17 July 2008 - 12:52 PM
you're all welcome
maybe i'm stupid
maybe i'm not
maybe i'm not
#153
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Posted 22 July 2008 - 01:54 PM
'Sup all! Just another newbie.
I'm 19.
Just outta school.
Trying to get by.
Writing,
reading,
listening,
speaking.
Standing,
shouting,
fighting,
doubting.
Sums it up. I guess.
Peace
TWW
I'm 19.
Just outta school.
Trying to get by.
Writing,
reading,
listening,
speaking.
Standing,
shouting,
fighting,
doubting.
Sums it up. I guess.
Peace
TWW
But swimming alone in the ocean isn't the sort of freedom you want is it?
#154
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Posted 08 August 2008 - 01:29 PM
Whatup pips!!
I'm new 2 da site 8) I go by the name of NEMESIS1, but i have a coupla aliases in my rag-bag :wink: I'm a female who's in art, hiphop n all that jazz ( xcuse da pun)...
Hows this 4 starters...
BLOG THE SPOT
words form to ink flows
in cyber space they reach the globe
to broad the way of minds still narrow
the masses to see reason and
speak without fear of treason...
this spot's blogged
blog your own.
I'm new 2 da site 8) I go by the name of NEMESIS1, but i have a coupla aliases in my rag-bag :wink: I'm a female who's in art, hiphop n all that jazz ( xcuse da pun)...
Hows this 4 starters...
BLOG THE SPOT
words form to ink flows
in cyber space they reach the globe
to broad the way of minds still narrow
the masses to see reason and
speak without fear of treason...
this spot's blogged
blog your own.
#155
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Posted 08 August 2008 - 04:26 PM
TWW, NEMESIS, n' tha' rest, ya'll welcome to AHH, stay active.
Fuck wit' me n' I'ma break u' skull, expose u' brains to reality/
jus' to make u' think outside that box u' call a head/
* I don't only think ahead, but ma' thoughts surpass those of a single head * |Couzifer|
jus' to make u' think outside that box u' call a head/
* I don't only think ahead, but ma' thoughts surpass those of a single head * |Couzifer|
#156
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Posted 19 August 2008 - 02:13 PM
Ek verwyder alles
alles is verwyder
niks kan bestaan
ek bestaan nie
die kraaie dans
rond my, die pad is donker
ek loop alleen...
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alles is verwyder
niks kan bestaan
ek bestaan nie
die kraaie dans
rond my, die pad is donker
ek loop alleen...
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#157
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Posted 26 August 2008 - 11:50 PM
whats good everyone!!!
ralph stone here to enjoy the words of the geniuses here on this sites. hope u enjoy my stuff to
peace.
ralph stone here to enjoy the words of the geniuses here on this sites. hope u enjoy my stuff to
peace.
PEACE
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Posted 01 September 2008 - 03:04 AM
The voices and noises approach in distortion
The devoted annoyance continues the torment
Your words sound like meaning disabled but screaming
Can't you feel the pain from the beating
I hold my breath with these thoughts but I'm speaking
An artist that's weakening now a part of a weakened thing...
And That's writers block for me - I'm Dark Prince More of a battler but working on writing
The devoted annoyance continues the torment
Your words sound like meaning disabled but screaming
Can't you feel the pain from the beating
I hold my breath with these thoughts but I'm speaking
An artist that's weakening now a part of a weakened thing...
And That's writers block for me - I'm Dark Prince More of a battler but working on writing
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Posted 04 September 2008 - 02:50 PM
CHE
Bang, bang
There goes the gun
At daggers drawn, stones have been flung
He must be heard, he can't be mum
It's no bible verse, it can't be sung
He riots for freedom but freedom to riot, there's none
It's 13 o'clock, the black veil's been lifted, it's done
He bears the cross, his conscience bleeds
Red ink that flows is better than black ink that's cold, it is his creed
He takes up arms against those of greed
On his honour the truth be revealed
Within an ace of glory seeked
He'll hang, hang
His number is up
Beat the drum
His name is freedom! 8)
Bang, bang
There goes the gun
At daggers drawn, stones have been flung
He must be heard, he can't be mum
It's no bible verse, it can't be sung
He riots for freedom but freedom to riot, there's none
It's 13 o'clock, the black veil's been lifted, it's done
He bears the cross, his conscience bleeds
Red ink that flows is better than black ink that's cold, it is his creed
He takes up arms against those of greed
On his honour the truth be revealed
Within an ace of glory seeked
He'll hang, hang
His number is up
Beat the drum
His name is freedom! 8)
#160
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Posted 23 September 2008 - 05:17 AM
sup im moii.
"i wrote myself out of the womb with a poison pen that broke my mother's water, grounding my feet like roots.
iam the chosen one fortold to open thy third eye with sentences like branches that reach angelic highs..."
-moii
"i wrote myself out of the womb with a poison pen that broke my mother's water, grounding my feet like roots.
iam the chosen one fortold to open thy third eye with sentences like branches that reach angelic highs..."
-moii
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