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[occipital]

:? uhm!! do I have to introduce myself with a poem or can I just say; "hi ppl, im 17 female, poet(not new to poetry but new to this sight)"? Im confused

[Poetic Seraph]

do it ur way girl, best way to introduce urself is first commented on poems that have already been posted and then u can start posting ur poetry, so we can get familiar with u and ur work

welcome to AHH

also: feel free to add ur ID in the poetry chain 'my id' and jump in on the poetry collab 'in the back of my mind' :)

[occipital]

K, I'll wait for recent poems to be posted

[poeticchills]

Name: Poeticchills>>>>>I'm new to spoken word but in luv with it already....I luv the talent in this forum and hopefully in time I and with many of u as my inspiration I will grow and my poetry will blossom to become somethin more than wat it is now...1

[Ms-Kelly]

Hey y'all

Well, I am new and hope I am welcomed

[AddictiveSoul]

Poeticchills and Ms Kelly, welcome to the forum.

Looking forward to checking out your material.
Have fun, Stay elevatin' and stay ACTIVE :wink:

bless

[Poetic Seraph]

ow yippie, my nickname is changed!! thanks to the guy who did this for me. i'm no longer knows as Serious Jokers Ent, but by my real poet name: poetic seraph!

[Soulflo_holic]

peace n love to y'all


well........wink wink, i'm not a poet tho, but i enjoy being around y'all coz u r just amaizing, i do rap, but wouldnt mind posting a"poem" if i happen to be inspired.

i'm Soulflo_holic, spit sulfuric and rip Deeportid/
for comin to the wrong forum and spittin stupid/

oops!!! Addictive Soul, nice name, thanks for allowwing me a liittle space in this corner, dont worry i am comfotable, lol

blessed love.....

[Soulflo_holic]

peace n love to y'all


well........wink wink, i'm not a poet tho, but i enjoy being around y'all coz u r just amaizing, i do rap, but wouldnt mind posting a"poem" if i happen to be inspired.

i'm Soulflo_holic, spit sulfuric and rip Deeportid/
for comin to the wrong forum and spittin stupid/

oops!!! Addictive Soul, nice name, thanks for allowwing me a liittle space in this corner, dont worry i am comfotable, lol

blessed love.....

[Soulflo_holic]

DeePortiD said:

I'm Deeportid, and I'm deported,
My mom was a whore and I'm a result of an abortion,
Dad use to smoke horse shit,
And he's guilty of extortion...
I dont give a f*ck cos I'm an emcee spitting raw-shit...
Parents divorced since their marrige wasnt flawless...
Now I'm forced to act hard and show this world no re~morse!
And I'm sick of all this ~ people trying to be all this...
Why cant we stand tall and all be normal since we all are...
blah blah blah...
I can spit till you bored and still remain f**king Deeportid...

Dear :D Deeportid


fist tangs firs' you got urself in the wrong house, dis here be a "house of harmony, love & peace"/
the house of inspiration, a house where you get mind expansion, sharpen your knowledge/
and get your horizons widened/
its not a battle field of cyber sex/
where you get your d** sucked on the net/

to the Soulflo_holic's eyes and the rest in here you are just a bitter, a fake, a hardhead little punk. you sound like a clone.

your post is horrible, i got my nose covered , i could puke anytime, lol. it makes you really dumb.
you are trying to sound like someone from t.v, am i right? i tell you what, those cats you see on t.v are not hip hop artists, they are phoneys, same as you are. real hip hop is b-boy word smith ish you musta have heard bout it, like what my boy "Wonder" says, he is right. cats that can scan a scene and break every part of it into fractions,,,,,,cats that see between the lines, dudes with the hidden knowledge.

i dont see none dat in you. i think you need to put those two rifles of yoz , one to the left and the other to the right, pull the trigger and blow your brain out/ thats just a joke,,,
calling your own mother a whore, that was funny, very funny. :shock:
having crawled ot of your mother's home abortion bucket dont mean nothin to nobody.
you need to xamine urself psychologically,

this is hiphop, Deeportid, de ish er'
an art,, more a refined weapon as compared to your two rifles on the avatar and your silly post.
that gotts everyone, farting of laughinh too too hard.
find your self once more, until you find that little boy behind Deeportid and groom him to an amazing big boy. **** I AM NOT HATING , okay****??? this is called constructive critisism and i would take it if i were you,

p.s dis er' be a joint for peots so i think our posts have room here meet with me at the Yay.

Soulflo :wink:

[patroba]

I am Patroba, a poet from the land kenya
I also feel HipHop, that's how ended up here
Been writing poems for slightly over a year
my inspirations come fom Tupac "the Black Messiah",
KRS-One, and some poets in kenya like Imani woomera
I hope to get more inspirations from here
Don't want to be made or make paople scared
So I add a nail to the coffin of the rough player
but I feel doomed, for I am part of a society that didn't care
For such troubled souls, and now it pains me to see it fall.
more of me will be told, through my style SOUL TO ALL
Which is philosophical, spirtiual and poetical
peace to you all.

[san]

Quick shout out to CAGED THOT sup girl i made it!

SAN here a.k.a Miss Keli but still the same...
I WALK TO THE RYTHMN OF THE MUSIC IN MY MIND
WITH NO UNTIMELY SUPRISES AND PUNCHLINES
I SPEAK OF THE FIRE THAT BURNS
FROM PEN TO PAPER WITH
ENERGY THAT CAN GO ON FOR MILES...

[MathThortza.k.a.Meta]

Dear Poets

Definition of MathThortza.k.a.Meta


I define my self as: a common reaction to different situation:
---------------------- yet, different to the same situation:
---------------------- coz I deem my roots born to spell molecules of spoken words:
---------------------- hard to comprehend to scientists with thick glass lens when it occurs:
---------------------- I mold my thorts with musical frequency when I speak:
---------------------- Tight are my verses like cement between the bricks:
---------------------- See,
---------------------- MathThortz used to be what is forgotten:
---------------------- Meta is what will be spoken, off like bin ladon.
---------------------- An emcee takin a leap to the unknown of stanza patterns:
---------------------- Familiar with a verse, but eager to learn from what will happen:

---------------------- I believe most know, Methamatical Thorts:
---------------------- But i know most will never encounter the odds, that:
---------------------- Meta-Fakt the beat architect has got:

---------------------- I was born for expression, and i will die for perfection:


--------------------------------------= Its good to be back to the forum =---------------------------------------

Yours,

Mathematical Thorts a.k.a. Meta Fakt the beat architect

[kast1]

word math thorts, its been a long time, i remember you kinda disappeared when i cam to this site, and that alone was a long tome ago, welcome, hopefully you can breath some life back into the forum

[Young_Pup_740]

Hi, my name is Young Pup, I just heard about this place from somebody I met in jail. I'm 18 and am going through some hard times. I've recognized that I can make rap songs out of poetry and I love writing poems. Most of them are too deep to turn into rap songs, though. Is this place pretty active?

[endwayz]

Young_Pup_740 said:

Hi, my name is Young Pup, I just heard about this place from somebody I met in jail. I'm 18 and am going through some hard times. I've recognized that I can make rap songs out of poetry and I love writing poems. Most of them are too deep to turn into rap songs, though. Is this place pretty active?

where d fuck do u reside?

[I.Prince]

I'm only 21yrs old but my spirit was dicovered Solomon's stone
I've been a witness to all the freakin lies that have been told
i'm sorry for the malleable who rattle under Da Vinci's code
the intelligent code was just joke.
thanks for asking to introduce me
recognise that it takes a lot to just induce me
It's only the rebuke from God that will mute me
Fortunately the Devil had decided to puke me.

HEY EVERYBODY

[Mdaave]

I am Mdaave a.k.a. D Avid which stems from David. I say I am avid because if it is a commercial rap, I've heard it. I read ebooks for social sciences my degree is about marxists. You might even ask this: why I am the average learnered learner. It's because I am not the hacker on the server, I am not that clever. I am just a writer out of theories my poetry is the feaces. I might study up to write a thesis about discourse analysis of Immortal Technique's use of English. I read avidly but, still graded an average D.I am average and I am learnered because I know all the practicalities I should know for my age of post-puberty. The next stage is the life of poligamy. I could go on and on like I keystroke on a Madlib beat.

[endwayz]

Mdaave said:

I am Mdaave a.k.a. D Avid which stems from David. I say I am avid because if it is a commercial rap, I've heard it. I read ebooks for social sciences my degree is about marxists. You might even ask this: why I am the average learnered learner. It's because I am not the hacker on the server, I am not that clever. I am just a writer out of theories my poetry is the feaces. I might study up to write a thesis about discourse analysis of Immortal Technique's use of English. I read avidly but, still graded an average D.I am average and I am learnered because I know all the practicalities I should know for my age of post-puberty. The next stage is the life of poligamy. I could go on and on like I keystroke on a Madlib beat.

nigga u tight men....,just keep it up cuz the hood is frustrating still d genre ain't resting till we hit d pla

[Mdaave]

I write what I like (poetry) -- Steve Biko