Your punchlines are weak like overused teabags/ You get hit with punchlines like loxion street fight/ Tryina' battle just to get props from fake friends/ You wouldn't last have a round even if you took viagra/ Lines I spit leave you brain-dead tryina comprehend these figures of speech that leave your speech without figure/ Forget the Titanic you sink like damaged submarines/ You lost boy you break fast like Kellogs All Bran Flakes/ Like nursery rhymes your lines lack substance/ You trapped in the past like an outdated cover version/ I take your beef and I turn it into steak that I chop/ Just like teargas my presence will leave your eyes itching/ Whether you hate me or not you surely feel my punchlines 'cause they leave you screaming like you got permanent labour pain/ You tryina' step up to me like you got something constructive but you stuttering so bad you get stuck like wine cocks [/i]
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Punchlines for the open minded
Started by Guest, Mar 12 2003 01:18 AM
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#2 Guest_Exclusive_*
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Posted 12 March 2003 - 01:19 AM
Anonymous said:
Your punchlines are weak like overused teabags/ You get hit with punchlines like loxion street fight/ Tryina' battle just to get props from fake friends/ You wouldn't last have a round even if you took viagra/ Lines I spit leave you brain-dead tryina comprehend these figures of speech that leave your speech without figure/ Forget the Titanic you sink like damaged submarines/ You lost boy you break fast like Kellogs All Bran Flakes/ Like nursery rhymes your lines lack substance/ You trapped in the past like an outdated cover version/ I take your beef and I turn it into steak that I chop/ Just like teargas my presence will leave your eyes itching/ Whether you hate me or not you surely feel my punchlines 'cause they leave you screaming like you got permanent labour pain/ You tryina' step up to me like you got something constructive but you stuttering so bad you get stuck like wine cocks [/i]
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Posted 12 March 2003 - 08:55 AM
Your punchlines are hard but they all sound like "i heard them all before" they are all recycled sort of like"overused teabags". Finally, what struck me about your verse is that it does not even rhyme. i'm not a critic or anything, but you said that it was for the openminded. Well, that was a piece of my "open mind"
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Posted 14 March 2003 - 08:05 PM
ur a bitch . . whoever u are . . . but now u call urself guest. u cant even take an identity behind the pc. well go bite some names 2 use just like u bite rhymes from other spitters biatch
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