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my poetry in motion (my first work though)


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#1 apopyalips

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Posted 19 March 2012 - 05:14 PM

stepping into the realm of literature
rhyming purposefully, inserting poetic signatures
beautiful piece flowing through my mind eyes
burning endless night candles till the sun rise
the fragrance of imagination fills the air
u could hear the enchanting artistry as u peel your ear
writing on a tablet of stone to preserve my thoughts
flooded with aesthetic imagery, connecting endless dots
asserting less control to what my ink scribbles
complex streams of imagination, yet simple
for the minds that could connect to the plane i draw from
trust me, i often marvel whenever i recite this beautiful art form

#2 pro-dominant

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 07:22 PM

i see u still haven't lost ur touch there Apop.. dope piece, i like ur choices of words it made the poem flow smooth.. keep it coming and dont let the ink dry up on u.

Peace fam

#3 Cloudrunner

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Posted 22 May 2012 - 08:20 PM

Wow, wish I can get this good, nice work though "the fragrance of imagination fills the air"-that is a very nice line

#4 Krash Korse

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Posted 28 May 2012 - 07:45 PM

This window if came to life what id see to. haha. Krash Korse





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