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[thaddaeus]

diaphanous perch devours the unsteady
such is nature that ungracious host
i lie censored in the garden of exile
sight lost in the filament of a fevered pitch
my skin splinters as my hair draws brittle
teeth crumbling under a fluorescent sky
the flesh gives way to reason, alone
i now abdicate hope, for life plays most unfair

[pro-dominant]

the imagery.....is it safe to say your describing the venus fly trap?

[Couzifer]

Nice piece of art...heavy words well placed!