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[pro-dominant]

she was raised by divorce parents…. it seemed like a forced marriage
judged by the screaming of a hoarse larynx
the arguments ..confusion, where harboring abuses
from a father who never bothered to acknowledge his new kid
the truth is,
she never seeks attention….
couldn't prevail in math, always failing class or received detentions
to beat depressions in lessons, she'd reek of weed and cigarette ends
thinking whys her life always feeling like it needs direction
but no blessings for Jewel Hunts..see,
she was a school flunky known in hoods as the loose junky
who gave head to any fool in public stools that produced money
too cunning, her pimp fueled the hungry beast at the end of the pipe
arms injected with white till she rests her eyes
hoping for a dope over dosing that'll end her life
she just wants to be free……….

[unheard voice]

Wow! That was a really touching piece! Deep...

[pro-dominant]

Im glad u enjoyed it and i greatly appreciate ur comment. ill be sure to give a look at ur work.

peace...be easy and keep safe

[thaddaeus]

i forgot how inspiring this place is. nice, pro-dominant.

[pro-dominant]

Thanks kin...peace and be easy

[Couzifer]

Man am loving this piece, its jus so real...this kind o' stuff is happenin' for real in our society, it aint fiction n' I love the fact that you managed to capture the right picture.

Great ink.

[pro-dominant]

Thanks Fam..im looking forward to some of ur new scribes. Dont keep us waiting.

Peace

[apopyalips]

Dude, this piece is awesome. it flows smoothly. not so much abstract, the imagery put it to motion.

[pro-dominant]

Thanks bruh...dont leave us thirsty i hope 2 be reading something of urs soon.

peace

[Krash Korse]

who couldnt prevail in maths....? lol damn, is this a distant friend somewhere. Krash Korse