Shift in perspective
Delineated reason
Illusion of time
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Meditated calm
Talisman of the Godhead
Fabricated angst
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Methodical lore
Levelheaded communion
Harmonious pact
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Invisible hand
The presence of only one
I am eternal
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Obtuse medium
Underhand exhibition
Acclimated ruse
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Started by thaddaeus, Mar 27 2011 08:45 PM
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Posted 01 April 2011 - 06:45 AM
Damn... Wats happenin 2 AHH, where is couz n seraph. I mean this forum use 2 b so hot that hell looks lyk the iceland. How we gon let a piece lyk this go without commenting. Thaddeus am luvin the imagery. Rilly nice piece.
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Posted 01 April 2011 - 06:45 AM
Damn... Wats happenin 2 AHH, where is couz n seraph. I mean this forum use 2 b so hot that hell looks lyk the iceland. How we gon let a piece lyk this go without commenting. Thaddeus am luvin the imagery. Rilly nice piece.
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Posted 09 April 2011 - 09:15 AM
interesting take on religion and how our chosen "mediums" and pastors guide us in all sorts of directions such that it gets confusing who is who and what is what.
scattering flock in all directions,
tools being emotional erections
blinding sight so we don't question
where is God?
I wish i could make half much sense as you do using two words and three lines.
Honour
Pfungwa Kizito
ps: are the three line stanza a reflection of the trinity or of the three main religions?
scattering flock in all directions,
tools being emotional erections
blinding sight so we don't question
where is God?
I wish i could make half much sense as you do using two words and three lines.
Honour
Pfungwa Kizito
ps: are the three line stanza a reflection of the trinity or of the three main religions?
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Posted 10 April 2011 - 03:42 PM
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ps: are the three line stanza a reflection of the trinity or of the three main religions?
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Posted 14 April 2011 - 12:07 PM
i thought the threes where an interesting dynamic to your piece!
With the hope that we can get some activity back on the site.. please comment on at least two other pieces.
Blessings
Pfungwa
With the hope that we can get some activity back on the site.. please comment on at least two other pieces.
Blessings
Pfungwa
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Posted 15 March 2012 - 01:47 AM
This might help. www.near-death.com
English language is so abstract. Though this poetry might appear witty, but I think the abstract words are its impediment. Not enough imagery which I think is what makes poetry interesting. By the way, Before you jump into conclusion, you might want to let your inner self find the truth instead of allowing your ego do what It knows best.
English language is so abstract. Though this poetry might appear witty, but I think the abstract words are its impediment. Not enough imagery which I think is what makes poetry interesting. By the way, Before you jump into conclusion, you might want to let your inner self find the truth instead of allowing your ego do what It knows best.
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