"Weeping may endure for a night"
But this night has no end in sight
They say: "Joy cometh in the morning"
But this year's brought nothing but mourning
Linda died from an overdose
We will never know why, I suppose
Jim followed her later this year
He fell victim to vodka and beer
Thomas finally broke free from his chains
With a shotgun he blew out his brains
Verner lost to the cancer at last
His brother did him less than a week outlast
The Bible reads:
"The Lord is my light and my salvation;
Whom shall I fear?"
I will tell you without hesitation
I fear next year
2010
Started by GodSon, Jan 02 2011 12:53 PM
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Posted 02 January 2011 - 12:53 PM
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Posted 04 January 2011 - 09:58 AM
hmm.. i like how you put it out there simply..
your almost tess sentences add to the somberness of the piece.
and lastly there is an air of indifference... your fear 2011.. so much you cant run from it.
a, so what.. its going to come anyway.
nice..
i like..
Honour
K
your almost tess sentences add to the somberness of the piece.
and lastly there is an air of indifference... your fear 2011.. so much you cant run from it.
a, so what.. its going to come anyway.
nice..
i like..
Honour
K
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