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#1 GodSon

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Posted 02 January 2011 - 12:53 PM

"Weeping may endure for a night"
But this night has no end in sight

They say: "Joy cometh in the morning"
But this year's brought nothing but mourning

Linda died from an overdose
We will never know why, I suppose

Jim followed her later this year
He fell victim to vodka and beer

Thomas finally broke free from his chains
With a shotgun he blew out his brains

Verner lost to the cancer at last
His brother did him less than a week outlast

The Bible reads:
"The Lord is my light and my salvation;
Whom shall I fear?"
I will tell you without hesitation
I fear next year

#2 Kizito

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 09:58 AM

hmm.. i like how you put it out there simply..
your almost tess sentences add to the somberness of the piece.
and lastly there is an air of indifference... your fear 2011.. so much you cant run from it.
a, so what.. its going to come anyway.

nice..

i like..

Honour

K





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