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Substance of a hug


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#1 oxytim

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Posted 20 November 2010 - 09:22 PM

i need a hug,
not to circle my hands around someone,
i'd like a full embrace,
where our faces meet,
passionate kiss...
exchange of happiness
exchange of misery,
exchange of bliss
words of empathy,
actions, ecstassy
i'd like to once again feel,
to cut lose this madness within,
i'd like to feel free...
the peace

i need a hug,
not to entangle our lips in that passionate bliss,
i'd like our hearts collide,
blood pumps through your arteries,
flows through my veins,
our bodies mingled,
what your hands touch,
my mind knows,
our lungs in unison,
you inhale,
i blow,
our bodies flow,


i need a hug,
not just the mingling of our bodies
and the exchange of passionate energies
i need our thoughts to float together
same state of meditation,
misty subconscious shapes,
smokey formless ideas,
the space between our minds,
no more yours, no more mine
to walk in space,
two substances connect,
a soul embrace...

#2 fikrah

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Posted 14 December 2010 - 06:12 AM

you bring chemistry to poetry....lovely piece no lady can deny this n this is what every gent sh'd be sayn to his lady!!!





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