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#1 tha high priest

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Posted 08 November 2010 - 01:31 PM

For you I had a special place
but your memorry now I have to erase

I loved ffrom deep in my heart
but you left me hurt

I guess in life there are many set backs
but we gatta have the will to fight back

as in im gon keep livin
till I cease breathin

I transfer my emotions with my pen
hopin to ease the pain

this is jus one more heartbreak
but i still keep my feet on the track

can't quit the race
I'll just run it at ma own pace

#2 Couzifer

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Posted 09 November 2010 - 06:33 AM

...emotional piece, and I like the simplicity in it.

tha high priest said:

can't quit the race
I'll just run it at ma own pace
...ooh damn!...I loved that ending...really encouraging.

#3 fikrah

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Posted 14 December 2010 - 07:22 AM

simple and well told...love

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I guess in life there are many set backs
but we gatta have the will to fight back
thats how we should face situatons of this nature!!

#4 brooks

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Posted 25 December 2010 - 06:08 PM

heart breaks... terrible thing init? nice piece





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