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[LyricalCompanion]

Since when am I an IVR?
Stop contantly pushing buttons
I'm trapped behing your cold 'house bars'-
I'm the 'criminal' all of a sudden

Since when do you think you can put me on mute?
Yielding the truth from my lips
I'm a gun with no ability to shoot-
my personality beginning to split

Parting my mouth-
nothing comes out-
Just silence
bit
by
bit

Since when did i age in reverse?
Forbidding and judging me
I'm the last although i cautioned first-
The one seeing reality

[Couzifer]

Mind boggling!

Are you talkin' about suppressed thoughts?...like "caged thoughts" those you try to air out but some forces hold you back?!

May be you shed some light on this...

[fikrah]

this is deep though...as couzifer said it leaves the reader in a maze...so are u talking about the mind and its thoughts as i think or...anyway i like the flow and the serious tone in it!!!

[SILENT CHAMP]

Parting my mouth-
nothing comes out-
Just silence
bit
by
bit

Since when did i age in reverse?
Forbidding and judging me
I'm the last although i cautioned first-
The one seeing reality


thats exactly what im talking about! well putl
sometimes its not about what you say, its about what you dont say.
even if you just cant say it.