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[Rikambura]

ait we do it here cos ur swearin' got ma webmaster blockin' me from replyin' to your spits...bring your flow here if you want and put D*ick this way!

[apopyalips]

Rikambura

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Motha F*ucka got a very low IQ// He was shi*tted out no arque/
F*uck u Bi*tch,told u not to swear directly/ but all u do is sway hastly
i can squash u faster than i squash pastry..
lame nigga u cant comprehend a simple request//
fame will never graze within the circumference of ur pimplely A*SS//
ur a disgrace to the game it has been encrypted//
i mean scripted..sick nigga u need treatment//
U right its aint a Rivarly..its me travellin' through the navel m in
as they watch me doin' nothin' but mavellin' at the skills
now imma digest ur system from inside no distance. is it a small dissen'?(dissin)
nah,Y'all lisen..m hissin' this thang got me pissin' now imma kick him
wack niggas i feed 'em they own medicine//
Appopyalips nigga imma break yo joints.and then i pop ya hips
i poke ya feet,smoke a feed or joint..musticate u like loin
bitin' bit*ch today u bite nothin' but oil(crude)..
i spitt naturally while ur butt toil..for half a bar
u can hav a bark..cos u is ma f*ck*en rabbies infested dog
go play around wit ur f*ck*en baby's pregnant doll
now u shiverin' inside ur mediocre shack..nigga m the shark at yo door
so i bang the door..who u beefin' wit punk?,this man(me) is a don
now m junglin' smokin' your as*s like E'to o junglin' the ball
m dun wit u!

Apopyalips

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This ain't no rivalry, this is hellish torture PERFECTION/
as i land knees on his MID-SECTION, with razor blade perform hell razer C SECTION/
ya elevation is symmetrical to your d*ick SIZE/....
i despise THIS GUY's demeanor, so i set em up for his ILL DEMISE/
First i'll let em pray to his Saviour before i dissect his body with a saber/
his career will end prematurely like ejaculation in a porn flick trailer/
even with ma mastery in psychokinesis i still can't figure how to elevate RIKA/
so his chances of improving in this grudge bout is bleaker/
u can employ chit-chat dissin to make up ya battle forum irrelevance/
cos ya flow is evidence to whackness renaissance/
i'll enslave u in this verbal crusade with no SKILL DISPLAYED/
while u're STILL DISMAYED,i'll decapitate ya hamlet with blade just to FULFILL D RAID/
am FILLED WITH RAGE....like Google chrome non irresponsive tab, i'll kill this page/
the way this demented fag is spewing sh*t, i guess he's still stocked in anal stage
ya declaration for this battle was ya preparation for chagrin/
now taste defeat/the feet like catholic bishop's reparation for sin

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[vindictive-o]

:lol: rika you got paralyzed by a cat you dragged to ahh
the first half of your battle was okay, safe zone...8 bars

apopy.....punch lines
apopy.....rhyme
apopy.....metaphors
apopy.....an ounce of word play

overall apopy :mrgreen:

[Xblaze]

i'm not voting for obvious reasons, this is mismatched.

but for sake of constructive criticism, Rika ur more focused on flow rather than dissing and destroying ur opponent, which is the aim of battle rap(well in this case battle textceeing). and your verse actually looks like a freestyle, u dont come with a freestyle against someone like apop. anyway, keep elevating though.
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[Kizito]

I co-sign Xblaze mismatched

Apopyalips "Paralysed Rika"

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

Yep, apopyalips took this. But Rik didn't fare very badly. wasn't as far a call as a few heads are insinuating. But u gotta direct those hits, Rik mate. Seriously.

Well done to both contestants

Winner: Apopyalips

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[cornelius]

devastat :evil: ion