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[apopyalips]

aiight. all rules apply. am spitting 16 bars,t hat's 36 lines. u can do whatever if u're not comfortable with 36 lines.

shout out to all AHH battlers. the class of 2006. thanks shun for making me do this onces again, BEEN A LONG TIME

meanwhile, y'all can listen to ma beats here www.soundclick.com/drillbeat

i'll drop tomorrow.....

[Shun J]

Wow. its an honor dude. ill drop when you drop. looking forward to it.


Edit: please stop free posting. ask the admin to remove the irrelevant posts. Votes only.

[apopyalips]

www.soundclick.com/drillbeat

okay, here's ma 16......


The complexity of ma sentenses got u diggin up words in thesaurus/
u can't match this "def" emcee even if u are a decendant of Lazarus/

it's hazardious to play ignorance to this LETHAL ATTACK/
i know cats who come off like u are always LABELLED AS WHACK/

this REBEL IS BLACK disgorgin words forged in ma deep thought/
just to slay this bastard newbie i mistakingly bigot/

this fag is claiming thug cos he got a ticket J WALKIN'/
move's effeminate....his flows reminds me of GAY TALKIN/

i'll excuse ya GRAVE MISTAKE cos this is ya funeral//
blast holes in casket and displace the cathedral//

ya flow's a disaster like a stammerer's effort to rhyme faster//
i see how u want to prove your're learning, tryna battle a master//

now watch me inscript incartations that will hunt u thru the paper//
with a verbal sword slicing thru anihilate this faker//

this is like BARCA vs L.A GALAXY the way am dominate effortlessly
ma blows rain/raign on this heathen like the PAPACY //

with fisticuff, i'll shatter ya walls of jejunum//
punch ya collum till ya eye ball starts swingin like pendulum//

am serving em punchline curriculum in this bout
knock off the CALCULUS in his gum by tryin to figure em out//

i break time space contenium just to kill u in the future//
enlighten ya mind by sliCin a TITANIUM BLADE thru ya suture//

this is a set up, u've been conered in this WAR PATH//
i don't need to dig up fills in so so def to prove he's a POOR "BRAT"//

this is a VERBAL BLOOD BATH...i'll treat ya body parts as individuals in this combat//
give ya back more wiping than doormat//

ma flow *IS REAL/ISRAEL* so i must be pharaoh when am freeing//
must be a psychopath cos am used to murking netcees when am keying

i've outlast many//now u bout to follow thru
like a dumb couple adopting, i don't need words to own u//

have to let tyra banks know there's another MISS J//
now exhibit the characteristics of a newbie: punchlines, all CLICHE//

[Jeezle]

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: oooooooooooooooooooooo weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee , waiting waiting waiting

[Shun J]

Damn, was hard putting this up. mind block. :-)


suffix/ topics, nonexist/punches, launches/cock pits
look bitch!!!! i spot this, yo flows garbage, suffix nonsense

OK , f it, LOOK!!!!

Move along your diction, you forget you an african person
with half his back def and dumbed dissing

this should be like a james bond mission,
but we all know your weapons dont go beyond the kitchen//

so stop confusing my literacy....yo word's a tyrant delinquency,
you'll need a body extention, to even come close or try n get to me//

So fuck flows, get some water to bathe
...i can see em now at arsenal park with an african drum display

you think you rock the set,
but id rather be rocket sent just to make sure the detonator's correct

Fuck ahh Pop,
you the only guy that combine his name with a question and altenate soft rock


Ill answer him with a hard rock,
Fuck appopyalips, ill pop yo internal sorroundings... cos its as-phalts//

So brag loss, like you hand those,
suprised you havent noticed your physical stature's//

reppin internet rave, stepping into this grave
with your eyes open ill pound coldest stomp you into it with an insolents rave.


im dead in your face, you ghosted,
infact you are MY SPACE like the Triple W COM is//


in fact listen....Dont get ahh-head of yourself!!
like running into blades, throat first, bodys dropping ahead of your self.//

you'll died n try to ressurect yourself,
reconnecting your valves akward, breathing through pixels thats holes to your health//


look...Ahh pop ya..and break yo name,
these guys will say Ahh stopped ya and put a dot to ya FAME //

they'll "gogle" your flame, you hardly sparking
you a fizzy spit the way dick riders carbonate your oxygen

kid, ill wrinkle your face with a dick's slippet
when i scatter your life ripping...they'll wonder how many continets i tossed this guys riplets

Ill fuck you gimmicks, rape your slang, trash and see if you recycle feelings
so what my bars dont sound like yours, i hate rhyming bars in a suttle sentence//

Newbie sure, but i fuck nookie too just not with you,
fuck it, all we heared from the broads witchu was "grrrrt" and "t'you!!!!"//

[Rikambura]

opener-Shun J
wordplay-Shun J
punchelines-Apopyalips
metamphors-Shun J


flow- Shun J
multies-Apopyalips

Vote: Shun J,this kid is on fire! eish!

[apopyalips]

1-0 for shun j aka Logic


@Rikan. next time when voting, do a break down, like wordplay: you qoute the wordplay or write the bar that has the wordplay. also, when u vote for opener, u should also vote for closing. carefully read thru and don't be thrilled by words that doesn't mean anything, it might be trick to lure u into believing it's deep and dope when it doesn't mean anything, eg "slippet". when u read a battle, chill and read it again.

[Rikambura]

ait..

[Shun J]

Im taking it that you have read my battle call out thread. First you must break down my verse and give it a point or each bar you feel is worth a punch. add up your score at the bottom, then we will discuss indepth if need be for review. Give your input, we did 16 bars so there are 8 points to allocate for each 2 lines. here is your first 2. i gave it 0 points and here is the explanation. post your reply to my suggestion.proove me arong to get your point.

apopyalips said:

The complexity of ma sentenses got u diggin up words in thesaurus/
u can't match this "def" emcee even if u are a decendant of Lazarus/

1st 2 lines]

as your opponnent seeing this, i thought WHAT the fuck??? Complexity...please. Second line i figure you meant a tomb. but id have to be alive digging up a mummy to a match stick light...you!!! lol. i didnt feel this. No points

POINTS: 0

[apopyalips]

your total point is 4.


i sent my review to ya inbox. this is for us to elevate more and nothing else. i like the idea but it might be misunderstood so check ya inbox for my review on your verse here. i know you've done better than this though. salute!

[Sike The God]

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The complexity of ma sentenses got u diggin up words in thesaurus/
u can't match this "def" emcee even if u are a decendant of Lazarus/

Lazarous was blind?


Apopyalips, whatsup? You're suppose to be burying these new cats.:wink:

[apopyalips]

@sike. Sup with ya? Been long. I was dusting off myself with this one. Check my battle with Rikambura and cast ya vote. Lazarus died and resurrected. Def also means death in hiphop slang, it's not deaf. Look it up in rap dictionary and slang. http://www.rapdict.org/Def

[apopyalips]

Plus shun jay is not a Newbie afterall, registering with a new name doesn't make one a newbie right? He told me who he was though lol.

[rhymetodie]

:o

[rhymetodie]

:D

[Kizito]

He he he... Apopyalips!! its an honour to have you back here sir!

my vote!

Opener: Apopyalips

"The complexity of ma sentenses got u diggin up words in thesaurus/
u can't match this "def" emcee even if u are a decendant of Lazarus/"

is definately waaaay better than

"suffix/ topics, nonexist/punches, launches/cock pits
look b***h!!!! i spot this, yo flows garbage, suffix nonsense"

Metaphors: Apopyalips

didnt get half your metaphors Stan! eg. James bond mission. the ones i got where cliche ...Flow... water to bathe
the set up to the Running head first line was weak.. Ahh-head of urself... nah playa.

on the other hand if apopyalip's metaphors where blood.. it be enough to wash your sins away... plenty more than you had and they where relevant.. incomparable to his past.. but better.

Diss... hmm... i'd make this a tie

punchlines... Pop

flow... Both of you guys lost it at some point.. Pop recovered... Logic.. Stan.. not really

multies... Pop from the first line on...

Vote: i-pop-ya-lips.... peace.. good to see a good battle after being AWOL myself..

Honour both of yo'll

Kiz

[Shun J]

i respect what you say. and i respect it if you feel it.
to me, i battle rap to content my real life intuition.
and when i look at the shit you guys like. its unapplicable to my lifestyle.
id have to be a fiction novelist or a cartoonist. lol

Not to take away from the fun of it. if its a diss, you can diss beyond dimension but ...i was just trying to say, he is prolly part of the administrators boys, or a teenage cat at home with his parents, or some guy lying about james bond equipment and he barely can write a programming statement let alone get ahold of anything to cost him over 5.99.lol
but i guess in the end you didnt like my way of bringing it to the table. so i respect that kiz. i have no sins to wash.

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

Yo folks, keep the free-posting to a minimal. I'm deleting any free posts after this, cos it takes away from the voters enjoyment. Thanks!

[cornelius]

opener-Apopyalips
wordplay-Shun J
punchelines-Apopyalips
metamphors-Apopyalips


flow- Shun J
multies-Apopyalips

Final vote Apopyalips.

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