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[fikrah]

Of fond memories,sweet,young and strong
That's right,alive like deep secrets all along
I have harbored and labored laboriously
Ready to bear a new chapter graciously
What do you feel,what do you see outside your window?
Awaken your imagination from the pillow
Let your mind wander till it finds a shade
Where you can shade colors,shape a facade
Bright and warm,amazing to the eyesight
Within ourselves why don't we take a flight
Be high together,laugh consciously we may
Freedom nourished soul finding a way
Feel the heartbeat - beat,flow or sway?
Of stars n campfire, awake tonight you must stay

[Rikambura]

nice1

[fikrah]

thanks a lot, i appreciate the support coming through...word!!!

[Shun J]

you are an amazing poet.

[fikrah]

shun j...word much blessings in order, big-up!!!

[brooks]

nice write.... didnt really understand d message though. so i dont defer... can u explain?

[Benjamin Cross]

Concur with brooks nice piece, but its it about?

[fikrah]

the poem is about finding peace and happiness within ourselves...remember that ''you are not what you think you are but what you think you are''...awake your mind and see the power that lies within...thank you brothers!!!

[relic]

I really enjoyed this, I feel inspired and taught by it. I'll have to take a look at everything else you write.

[fikrah]

thanx relic, feel free and welcome!!!

[Couzifer]

...you flow with poetry jus like you do wit' your raps...n' that's a talent!...nourish it bro!

Peace.

[fikrah]

couz...pamoja sana cnt wait 4the -away with the blues- if -when the sun goes down- didn't come thru'. peace fam!!!