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#1 41Trippa

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Posted 29 May 2010 - 04:23 AM

This is how it went -------------
you said ..
I don't know, I gotta let you go
-- i said, but baby .. i can grow
but this relationship has no flow
-- yeah, but when we hot we glow
like streams to rivers we define motion
like rivers we've opened seas into oceans
but you say you wanna let it all go
all my words are met with so
tell you what lets just do this for old times
one last hit of this thing this blackberry wine
ahhhhh there it is baby now i know
that's it love thats what you really wanna let go
someone creeping into your head saying say no
but deep inside you know the action like the word is yes
the mind and the body embrace the warmth and sweat
let's forget what you said if not forever then at least
not yet

#2 Rikambura

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Posted 31 May 2010 - 06:15 PM

nice simple flow,great rhymin' to it...

#3 unheard voice

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Posted 31 August 2010 - 05:23 PM

I really like this one

#4 fikrah

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Posted 06 September 2010 - 09:30 AM

yeah...kip doin it right bro...keep flowing...

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like streams to rivers we define motion
like rivers we've opened seas into oceans
but you say you wanna let it all go


#5 41Trippa

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Posted 17 September 2010 - 06:44 AM

fikrah said:

yeah...kip doin it right bro...keep flowing...

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like streams to rivers we define motion
like rivers we've opened seas into oceans
but you say you wanna let it all go

Good to see ya feelin' meh!! Shit is real and if it's not ... then what is it?!!

#6 brooks

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Posted 18 September 2010 - 12:41 PM

nice flow ...
hope you got wat u wanted outta the piece.
not yet? ....i guess!

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 02:05 AM

41Trippa said:

let's forget what you said if not forever then at least
not yet

i think dat should be "at least just yet" not "at least not yet"...dats if we put it narratively :)

#8 41Trippa

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Posted 19 November 2010 - 08:04 PM

brooks said:

nice flow ...
hope you got wat u wanted outta the piece.
not yet? ....i guess!

@ Brooks .. And ya know that!!
@ GodSon ... please IM me at your earliest! Sounds like some "schooling" for me ... I'd like to hear more!!





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