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[d2]

Freezin lyk hell thru tha pain/
conjested,re~collected and broken into grains/
they cheat the masses in this jet age/
still we cry, not thinkin dat the present day we die/
the good we had designed/
there no tomorrow to a willing mind/
corruption shines into the mind of a greedy goverment/
they leave the masses broken like glass plates/
how do i get sex/
situations lyk arbortion/tommorrow is a threat/
searching for daily bread, my pipe lungs breaks.

[Couzifer]

Word up d2...I'm diggin this piece right here...it carries alot of quotables...makes alot of sense;

d2 said:

they cheat the masses in this jet age/
still we cry, not thinkin dat the present day we die/
the good we had designed/
there no tomorrow to a willing mind/

thats heavy

d2 said:

corruption shines into the mind of a greedy goverment/
they leave the masses broken like glass plates/

...it truely does shine...too bright that it leaves the masses blinded and in confusion...

d2 said:

how do i get sex/
situations lyk arbortion/tommorrow is a threat/
searching for daily bread, my pipe lungs breaks.

I find this line a coincidence of that debate goin on here in my country about the right of life n' some other stuff...

keep writing poet!

Peace.

[MC Qham]

d2 said:

how do i get sex/
situations lyk arbortion/tommorrow is a threat/

very familiar,

i dig this piece right thurr

d2 said:

they cheat the masses in this jet age/

:idea:

d2 said:

there no tomorrow to a willing mind/
corruption shines into the mind of a greedy goverment/
they leave the masses broken like glass plates/

my favorite lines right here..!!

[fikrah]

straight from the start you go 4 their necks

d2 said:

Freezin lyk hell thru tha pain/
conjested,re~collected and broken into grains/
they cheat the masses in this jet age/

the vices reigning our society...from the big offices to the village as people go on with their daily lives uninterrupted but slowly wasting and fading the society's moral fabric...

d2 said:

orruption shines into the mind of a greedy goverment/
they leave the masses broken like glass plates/
how do i get sex/
situations lyk arbortion/tommorrow is a threat/
searching for daily bread, my pipe lungs breaks.

enlightening short piece!!!

[d2]

thanks 4 the comment,coufizer,fikrah, mc Qham thanx 4 the appreciation.