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[Rikambura]

homies lets do dis..haus rules and its a open battle no any otha rules! amma drop soon

[911]

o.k.

[Rikambura]

lemme slaughter these 2 birds wit a single-stone
step 1 into the death-zone was these cats acceptin' ma mere-call
Dlinkwent went-on,no tactics,got out wasted more-lactic... acid
comparison,m so firm and dlinkwent is so flaccid
if this was boxin' i be knockin' ur teeth into the back of ur skull
lost-kid in selection u will be a cull
ma flow is shinin' while yos is dull
i bet ur punchlines will be harmless, as the boy is str8 from the hamlet
this the streets nigga u will learn the hard way.. no pamphlets
yes u can make it as an MC,mr of ceremony
imma make u ma benchmark..ma testimony
cos i f*cuked u in ths one and m still horny
imma cut strechmarks accross yo whore-body and u gon only see them next mornin'
a big fish now wit them champions m rollin'

m causin bereavements all-over,next mournin' is for the retarded,911
rest in peace bro before i murder-u
ur like a stretched P*ussy,yo job on earth is finished
i feed on fear and cowardness to me those shit are ticklish..
this is a one-sided battle its like i got gimmicks
acceptin' ma call-out u and Dlinkwent co-signed ur own death-warrants
m rulin' over this space man m the tyrant..
niggas wit no talents,today imma be the reason for ur eventual silence
nonesense u cant beat anythin' wit ma blood on it m the pirate
huntin' u thru the jungle till u succumb-down
suckin' u in ma vacuum of pain m sicka then fully blown ,class A AIDS
no first aid will be able to revive u back imma make sure u dont git out alive
ur hapharzadly all over lemme align..u back into the right-path
by that imma leave u in pure,red blood-bath

[Rikambura]

amma give boys until sunday to drop yo weak ish....lmao!

[911]

O.K Am Goin IN...

Some1 Call D Ablance,Cuz Am About 2 Lyricly Murder Dis Bitch..
Diz Imitator Ain't Gettin Any Better,Imma Do ( Dlinkwent ) D biggest Favor Whn I R.I.P Dis Bitch..( Rikambura ).
Been Away 4 Years, So " Welcum Me Back".I'll Play Wit Mase & By D Time Am Finised It Wil Be "BAD BOY" That's Safe 2 Say.
U Will Never Fucc If Ur Pantz Are Pure (No Dick). Don't Fake Just Answer True,& Admit U Failed Like Many Who Tryed & Never Found D Cure 4 AIDs.
Man U Should Jus Strt Duckin My Spits,But Ur Girl She Cops Spits After "SUCKING MY DICK".
I BLAZE & BRING HEAT.U Couldn't Bring Flames If U Were a Flamming Torch.
U See,U Againtz Me Is Stupid.We Far From Equal.Ur Punches Won't Hit Me Like "UPPERCUTS" From Armless People.
Ma Rapz Servez As A Muder Weapon, Punch U So Had Wit Ma Punch Lines,Liv U Shot Of Blood,Like After A Fimalez Period Is Done.
I Don't. Thnk We Need Votes 2 Settle D Score,Cuz U Beating Me Ain't Happing Like U Making A Sex Addict Horny.
Whn Am Done Wit U,I'll liv D Auddiens Beggin Me For More,Cuz They Have Never Seen A Style Like This Perfected Before.All D Ryhms In D World Cldnt Settle D Score..HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA

O.k Am Goin IN..

U A Fuckin Immature.Ur Rapz Need A Cure.
I Read Ur Post,Dat Shit Made Me Sleep, More Like Dying In Ma Sleep."I DON'T FEEL IT "..HAAA.
Hey Yal,Dnt U Thnk 4 A Second Am Done Wit This Bitch..Jus Watch Me I I Proced To Kill Him,(DKW).
Knock His Nose Off The Sphnix..
Am Allergic To Wacker MC's,(DKW)..So I Automaticaly Sneeze.
DKWent Watch Ur Girl Blow Me Like Another J-Low Blowing Diddy,With Out Throwing Punches..Hahaha.
Imma Lyricly Woop U.Hey Y'all Watch Daddy Beat Son..
Like A Misbehaving Kid..lol.HA..

O.K Am Goin IN...

Yah Dingle Nuts..? Really Gat em Stackd In D Air Witout Throwin A Pringle Once..Haa..
Get U A Conrit Shoe & Dump U D River..
Liv People Sayin D Story Of Seein A Gost Swmmin In D River..
Diz Shit Ain't No Battle,Itz More Like Fat Joe Against Pappose..(Nuthin)..
Ur Girl Lik Me Telin Hr Wat 2 Do.,Datz Y I Dictate.Talk Dirty 2 Her & Ask Her How Ma Dick Taste..
How Dare U Battle Me,Bring My Blade Out & Cut Ur Throat..Punch U & Rich In For Ur Ghost..Bring A Long Brum Stick And Force It In Ur Ass..
Tie U Up & Make U Watch My Dog Fuck Ur Bitch...

[911]

U Don't Need 2 Wait To Sunday..Cuz Unlike U..I Dnt Need To Prepare For A Rap Battle..I Replied As Soon As I Saw It..Well Let's Wait & C Wat D lil girl *Dlinkwent* Has 2 Say.. :lol:

[Rikambura]

lol alrite Dlinkwent havent drop yet..votin' for the battle can start Dlinkwent will come in later

[911]

PLZ yall,we need votes to no who won the battle..vote..

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

Damn!!!

How on earth do u lot expect votes on this?? I read it and there's no way to declare a winner. All participants were way below rookie level. Clean up your verses and target the opponent. Forget all that self-hype rant. Also, check vet battles and learn. Damn!!!!!

[Rikambura]

hey Skeptic thanks for the input bro..we can always try to learn and improve but u need to take it easy on us as well we are all learnin' bra,we aint proffesional rap battlers and we are not trying to become ones either,we just tryna elevate our writin' skills ait?

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

^^ I know u aren't, mate. I'm just a little frustrated at how long u've been doing this but refuse to elevate.

For starters, use rhyme schemes in each bar or line e.g

single rhyme
No one is a snitch here, we hunt and kill for fun
So when it gets violent, no one thinks of of 911!!

or multi-scheme
We reckon he lives on computers, so before his ink vents...
I'll pull out the battery from his pc and ask where d-link-went!!

That makes it easier for ur audience to appreciate your lines and the impact is felt immediately. Lemme know if you need further help

[Rikambura]

Ait Roger that! word!