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[MC Qham]

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I fell in love with Africa, saw her tits erect before the sun set,
Her tits the shape of the crescent moon, kept principled men salivating and abandoning celibate,
She was ripe with the onset of summer her hips swaying right and left
And so, on the black first world soil of a third world country – in the suburb of my city
When the blue uniformed men in their regular patrols were still active on duty
I knelt before her – in the contemporary ways of the first world and put a ring on her finger -
asked her to bed and she accepted!
Lay with her and sons and daughters I ejected,
Scatter ‘em all over the world revolutionaries, black panthers – the future world liberated, (visions)
When the moon was high up in the sky, when hormones were high, wild passion hit the limit and I ejaculated.
Nine months later she gives birth to a beautiful young princess
The heir of my throne successor to my emperor – name her after the gods of old - Sophia.
According to the dialect of Greek, meant “wisdom”
Brains meant psychological freedom,
The perfect light/sanity in this world of psycho pathetic liaisons –
Telepathetic influences!
From the horn to the gold coast, lay scattered pride, beauty and splendor; that spark with effervescence
Her tears rolling down in the valley and rivers where the Pharaohs quenched their thirst,
Where the white man’s pigment were drained with lust – reminiscent from the past
Riches scatter in areas that are vast, before the foreigner robbed
But these stinking thoughts superseded by the pride of the Zulu’s Great Battle of Isandlwana![attachment=1]african.jpg[/attachment]

[cornelius]

Africa home of the sacred

[Poetic Seraph]

I like the pride in this poem. Yet I'm kinda uneasy about the whole sexual tone of it. I understand the reason for it. But it seems that, in most poems about mama africa, there is this sexual undertone and at this moment it kinda disturbs me (might be my mood though)

[Couzifer]

Seraph...I know how this feels and I Co-sign you on that...this poem is bold enough jus' the way I would like it to be...but something about the sexual context of it doesn't seem right and hence it kinda sways it from the reader's concentration.

MC Qham if you would re-do this piece on same concept but minimize of the sexual tone, the you would come up with one amazing piece of poetry...

Keep doing your work poet.

[fikrah]

hahahaa!!! great, its like u traveled places...tight imagery...

home made...