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[thaddaeus]

I'm at the edge of all reason
these bended knees will never stray
from a ledge that's so deceiving
you'll second guess the mirror's face
while my mind is steady pacing
back and forth,this great debate
am i a prophet of evolution
or just a charlatan of fate

[Kizito]

i dont know how you do this..

but it rocks!

Dope

[Benjamin Cross]

Dope piece man, wish it was a bit longer. Its kinda like one of those tryna get outta writter's block type.

[thaddaeus]

I appreciate the feedback yall,but to be honest i don't think i can write anything longer than what i usually do.
I don't know how your thought process works,but i just sit down and write the first thing that pops into my mind,if it works then great,if not then..eh,whatever.Take this particular poem for instance,3 minute tops and once i had it scribbled down on paper,i tried to add more to it but it started to turn into a rant that went completely off topic.Now take a look at that poem from Spinflip Stand Tall,that took abit of thought and preparation,great work,but i just don't have the moxie for it. :?