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[tha high priest]

Am on the cliff edge of sanity/
contemplatin jumpin away from reality/
i take a few tots/
wishin to erase naggin thoughts/

but the mist will clear/
n the truth is still here/
no option but to soldier on/
grabbin the bull by the horn/

lifes a constant bout/
theres no easy way out/
sometimes i emerge victorious/
other times i suffer a loss/

but guess i aint alone/
we all taste joy n pain/
wats needed is acceptance/
that theres diversity in our existence/

[Couzifer]

tha high priest said:

Am on the cliff edge of sanity/
contemplatin jumpin away from reality/
i take a few tots/
wishin to erase naggin thoughts/

Those openin' lines did catch my attention...well thot!

I like this poem because its full of encouragement...and although the first verse portraits some despair the what follows is really pleasing!!!

Yo man...I think u' should pay moar attention to your poetry coz u' really good wit' it !

[tha high priest]

Thanx bro.yeah i think al try n do mo writing.peace