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[mimic truce]

I watched you close, you matched your clothes
i heared... you spoke, and i batched your quotes.
i liked your walk, Your limbs motions tweaked to fit almost petit,
a graceful unique'nd whole

I saw you elite......
i woke from beneath a cloud that
my hopes could only dream to know as a bridge
you swole in life, i started to believe
i walked in your light, it never could dim

I praised and worshiped, this contorterd lordship
but you were some gored luring horse shit.
i got bored, you left holes in my enduring courtship
nothing i wanted more than just to walk along with
but you left me scarred,
aborted my emotions with pure ignoring torchin
you scortched in all my senses with worthless prentencess
and lead forces of my most honoring portions
to a death unworthy and it is no exception.

what i was , was a lie,
just a lost version of what i am now.
it was unconcious,

ive woken from sleep,
in currency the worth is this token i have for you to keep.
its the truth.
the meaning and purpose i barely even noticed.
it was you.

I envied you....even fit myself centred in within of you...
like a spine, or nervous system with each measure you moved
i realise, I hated you...you're everything im not, its true
and now I enjoy the marr in your personality and character too
when i char your patience with my vanity, i know Im better than you

im fueled with pleasure,
seeing you loose edge, you'll tilt ledge forever
n grieve vandetta, but i exceed where your lesser
n you'll bow a heath, and only breathe on gestures
You're nothing to me...ill wade off your savior
n keep thoughts thats yours to savor
just to eat off each piece of worth you have thats tender
you'll miss all you wish for and behold your sancture.
you'll burn a rampant torch exposed to know better.
Ill never be taken advantage of .... EVER !!!!!

[MC Qham]

mimic truce said:

I watched you close, you matched your clothes
i heared... you spoke, and i batched your quotes.
i liked your walk, Your limbs motions tweaked to fit almost petit,
a graceful unique'nd whole

I saw you elite......
i woke from beneath a cloud that
my hopes could only dream to know as a bridge
you swole in life, i started to believe
i walked in your light, it never could dim

I praised and worshiped, this contorterd lordship
but you were some gored luring horse shit.
i got bored, you left holes in my enduring courtship
nothing i wanted more than just to walk along with
but you left me scarred,
aborted my emotions with pure ignoring torchin
you scortched in all my senses with worthless prentencess
and lead forces of my most honoring portions
to a death unworthy and it is no exception.

influence by the vice perhaps, at the moment you followed in its footsteps

mimic truce said:

what i was , was a lie,
just a lost version of what i am now.
it was unconcious,

ive woken from sleep,
in currency the worth is this token i have for you to keep.
its the truth.
the meaning and purpose i barely even noticed.
it was you.

you realize you're not who you are and that you're someone-else in the making...

mimic truce said:

I watched you close, you matched your clothes
i heared... you spoke, and i batched your quotes.
i liked your walk, Your limbs motions tweaked to fit almost petit,
a graceful unique'nd whole

I saw you elite......
i woke from beneath a cloud that
my hopes could only dream to know as a bridge
you swole in life, i started to believe
i walked in your light, it never could dim

I praised and worshiped, this contorterd lordship
but you were some gored luring horse shit.
i got bored, you left holes in my enduring courtship
nothing i wanted more than just to walk along with
but you left me scarred,
aborted my emotions with pure ignoring torchin
you scortched in all my senses with worthless prentencess
and lead forces of my most honoring portions
to a death unworthy and it is no exception.

what i was , was a lie,
just a lost version of what i am now.
it was unconcious,

ive woken from sleep,
in currency the worth is this token i have for you to keep.
its the truth.
the meaning and purpose i barely even noticed.
it was you.

I envied you....even fit myself centred in within of you...
like a spine, or nervous system with each measure you moved
i realise, I hated you...you're everything im not, its true
and now I enjoy the marr in your personality and character too
when i char your patience with my vanity, i know Im better than you

im fueled with pleasure,
seeing you loose edge, you'll tilt ledge forever
n grieve vandetta, but i exceed where your lesser
n you'll bow a heath, and only breathe on gestures
You're nothing to me...ill wade off your savior
n keep thoughts thats yours to savor
just to eat off each piece of worth you have thats tender
you'll miss all you wish for and behold your sancture.
you'll burn a rampant torch exposed to know better.
Ill never be taken advantage of .... EVER !!!!!

the rhyming made it even more interesting and the flow was on point to suit a clear execution


generally the vividness of the imagery made it super-worth

nice reading somethin new from you mimictruce,i like it. :wink:

word!

[mimic truce]

Its how i felt at the time. Glad you with it.

[vnorm]

this poem had so much emotion man. I enjoyed that.
It sucked me right in from the word go. I guess it was written to vent out emotion but regardless, style was all over and the rhyme flowed smooth and were very sensical.
Great poem man.
I liked this.
Is it about a condescending figure in your life e.g Guardian or friend?

[thaddaeus]

You'll walk this hand and foot forever,the pattern is too ingenious to analyse and you know it. :twisted:

[mimic truce]

Rare piece. even from me