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[b boy]

hate love
fuck sex
but respect
that money
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make love
take pecks
safe sex
pimp money
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fuck love
spray techs
who's next
drug money
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fake love
cut necks
rich jerk
blood money
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talk love
fix necks
preach best
church money
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no love
all cheques
invest
stock money
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blunt love
card decks
treasure chest
runs money
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go study
find a job
work hard
SHIT MONEY......
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dont care how i get it
dont care where its from
but if its more money
to me its all money
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[Couzifer]

I noticed this piece almost slipping away into overlayin' pages but had to pull it back up coz I feel it got some' great in it...its all about money and how we get it...every stanza of this peice got alot in it...then the closin stanza sums it up!...I like the style, brief but deep!

[vnorm]

lol.
this is completely awesome! On first sight it looked all crazy structured and haphazard, but as i read through I realized this is straight dopeness.
i love the stanzas and how they describe the many ways to get it. very creative man. must have took you some time to complete it while maintaining the initial pattern.

nuff respect.