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[b boy]

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"All but describe one thing,
Of beauty and of a smell so sweet
Our duty to a plant so unique
Is to burn it in a blunt so slick
Properly selected sticks and seeds
Smoke it peasants we were as if we were kings".....

..............I sat there for a second as i reminised into days past. Travelling through the lower sanctums of my minds portal through timelessness, a far path.............
To that place where my sojourn began,
as i devised my plan,
buying 5 precious seeds from a nephilius being
bargaining my words as money speaks
never did forget those words by the old nephilim

......."Blood clat boy the portal fi reality lays within a floating mind,
like guilt to iniquity , this seeds aguan soak ya mind, "............reality was my reply......

What ever that meant only time knew, and time wasn't my friend.
So i sowed this little 5 pops
If pops were sperm, buds were zygotes
If buds were zygote, stems were embryo
If stems were embryo, my plants were my 5 little babies
"Rudeboy" was the first, his younger brother "Me Herb", i called the third "Benzino" because he looked cozy in his little clay cot, then the last two "Breathless" and "Reaper".

"JUICE TIME !!!!"
Yeah i juiced them, but not like any other mum, nah!!!
I juiced them like an overlacting 26 year old with 3 bulging breasts and 5 major nipples. I watched every single leaf grow, every single stems length, every single roots depth, they were my pentaplets....

[Couzifer]

b boy said:

..............I sat there for a second as i reminised into days past. Travelling through the lower sanctums of my minds portal through timelessness, a far path.............

1st of all...that line made me smile at the beauty of the poetry in it...the use of simple words to go so deep into poetry!

Your personification here is really on higher levels;

b boy said:

So i sowed this little 5 pops
If pops were sperm, buds were zygotes
If buds were zygote, stems were embryo
If stems were embryo, my plants were my 5 little babies
"Rudeboy" was the first, his younger brother "Me Herb", i called the third "Benzino" because he looked cozy in his little clay cot, then the last two "Breathless" and "Reaper".

I got to love this here...wherever u stood while writing this!!!

The longer lines kind of disrupt the reader tho'...so you got to check on the structure
it feels more of a spoken piece but all in all I enjoyed reading it...

[Kizito]

deep bboy.. very deep.. i love the different elements you used to bring all your points to the fore.
appropriate.

honour

K

[vnorm]

hahahahah. Should i say this was dope? maybe there are 20 other names for 'dope' which only my man b boy would know.
This was decent man. I felt it, though Im not exactly a ganja fanatic (lol)

This poem was crazy. (literally) from the word go. The wierd-ass structure was remeniscent of the actual concept so no qualms with that.
Definitely among your best writes ever.

[Couzifer]

b boy said:

......."Blood clat boy the portal fi reality lays within a floating mind,
like guilt to iniquity , this seeds aguan soak ya mind, "............reality was my reply......

BLAAAAAW!!!

b boy said:

"JUICE TIME !!!!"
Yeah i juiced them, but not like any other mum, nah!!!
I juiced them like an overlacting 26 year old with 3 bulging breasts and 5 major nipples.

WORD!

[b boy]

thanx yall.......and yeah im talkn bout it....cos i love it.....lol......and just like d smoke u guys are all dope.........seems AHH is a clean spot....ain 2 many stoners out here........:)......but u gotta know.....STONERS RULE!!!!.......by my pen ofcourse.....:)