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[MC Qham]

In the beginning, a Spirit roamed above still Holy waters of empty space –
….in the beginning, even before the madness began!
Two Spirits yet all battered in one entity –
….two Spirits, even before the architectural art began!
Despite the nearly-vivid biblical records,
It all happened so fast.
….first the light and darkness then me and you exactly like His face,
The love was born – an element quite corrupted by the slogans borne from the body of man & woman!

As far as my eyes could see the heavens,
He appeared on the face of the earth –
Not in the tabernacles nor in His proverbial manifestations,
I see God in the waters of the fishes of the sea,
I see God in the flowers of the garden, the bees & butterflies!
.. I see God in the Mara of East Africa, The Atlas of North West Africa
And the snow in the poles of the world.
I see Him whirling angrily in the deserts of the Asian continent

I feel God deep inside my sinful soul
The God of Abraham, Isaac and Jacob
I see the God in you, and you plus you;
I saw His Glory in the free life you have today!
The abundance of breath and the far distance from death and the Hades!

God;
Yahweh, Jah, Enkai, Ngai, Mulungu, Gott, Dios, Dieu, الله, Bóg, Θεός, Бог, Dio, Duw..
He’s rightfully honored to have His name printed in all the dialects of the world!

The God that let John write the scrolls of Revelation of the end times
In spirit of course!
And today I saw Him rise up shining with utmost brilliance in the sun of the morning…
Saw Him guide His flock with the moon of midnight…
Where the dreams of men always drift in the mists of afterworld for immortality!

When the seals shall be opened by the chosen lamb,
The Master and I shall fall into a endless debate over my inheritance in heaven –
Or hell!
When the hands of time move fast to wage a new day and a new war,
I can’t evade God, the architect of my soul and inspiration of my poetry.
The first and the last
Who is and who was and who is to come the Almighty!!!
And His sons & daughters on earth – brothers and sisters in heaven,
Shall uphold the essence of wisdom & knowledge found in heavenly prose,
In the scrolls of His Holy Book.

[Couzifer]

I see u' MC Qham...I see u' bro' elevatin' consistently on this Poetry shit...I love this piece...words well chosen n' that Eden feelin' before sin jus' feels right!...the flow is also on point...damn man its like my mind detached from my bodily frame n' jus' made a journey to the spirits world and back....

n' u' kno' why this piece also blew me off?!...because it reminds me of a piece I did sometime back here on this board called "The Afterlife part I"...i was to do a part 2 but it slipped away n' I forgot about it..

check this link...

viewtopic.php?f=7&t=17414

....I might go back in time and finish it...now that's wut I call inspiration...

Thanks man

Peace.

[b boy]

YEAH COUZ IS ON POINT...PLUS I COULD FEEL THE WHOLE SPIRITUAL VIBE MEN.....I FEEL LIKE I JUST WENT 2 CHURCH...LOL

[MC Qham]

Couzifer said:

I see u' MC Qham...I see u' bro' elevatin' consistently on this Poetry shit...I love this piece...words well chosen n' that Eden feelin' before sin jus' feels right!...the flow is also on point...damn man its like my mind detached from my bodily frame n' jus' made a journey to the spirits world and back....

n' u' kno' why this piece also blew me off?!...because it reminds me of a piece I did sometime back here on this board called "The Afterlife part I"...i was to do a part 2 but it slipped away n' I forgot about it..

check this link...

viewtopic.php?f=7&t=17414

....I might go back in time and finish it...now that's wut I call inspiration...

Thanks man

Peace.

thats inspiring man, i think we'll just doa joint project bout the afterlife (got this spiritual vibe in me lately) Lol i appreciate the compliments...i checked yo piece, its the synonym of 'GOD', gotta drop a feed and wait for part two (guess you've also inspired me to do a part 2 :D
i'ma check it out again n drop a comment :wink: word!

[vnorm]

Dam Qham. This is some great elevation.
The piece is great. Your structure matches the writing. Sentence breaks are more thought out and you are using punctuation to your advantage; to enhance meaning.

''When the seals shall be opened by the chosen lamb,
The Master and I shall fall into a endless debate over my inheritance in heaven -
Or hell!''
these were some dope lines. Most outstanding for me.

Definitely Poem of the Week.

[Kizito]

MC Qham said:

When the seals shall be opened by the chosen lamb,
The Master and I shall fall into a endless debate over my inheritance in heaven –
Or hell!
When the hands of time move fast to wage a new day and a new war,
I can’t evade God, the architect of my soul and inspiration of my poetry.
The first and the last
Who is and who was and who is to come the Almighty!!!
And His sons & daughters on earth – brothers and sisters in heaven,
Shall uphold the essence of wisdom & knowledge found in heavenly prose,
In the scrolls of His Holy Book.

Good coming Qham.. well written. i agree with Vnorm.. well put together! my favourite lines r above.

honour

K

[MC Qham]

vnorm said:

Definitely Poem of the Week.

:D

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Good coming Qham.. well written. i agree with Vnorm.. well put together! my favourite lines r above.

honour

vnorm said:

Dam Qham. This is some great elevation.
The piece is great. Your structure matches the writing. Sentence breaks are more thought out and you are using punctuation to your advantage; to enhance meaning.

''When the seals shall be opened by the chosen lamb,
The Master and I shall fall into a endless debate over my inheritance in heaven -
Or hell!''
these were some dope lines. Most outstanding for me.

Definitely Poem of the Week.

:D


all y'all make a nigga elevate so fast n sure...can't forget to show em props to AHH..couldnt have been better without you (AHH love for sure)

make sure you vote for the ongoin battle btwn Kiz n Brooks

vnorm lookin 4ward for the honor of battlin you :)

peace!!

[Couzifer]

MC Qham said:

all y'all make a nigga elevate so fast n sure...can't forget to show em props to AHH..couldnt have been better without you (AHH love for sure)

No doubt...AHH is like a breeding ground for street poets!

MC Qham said:

vnorm lookin 4ward for the honor of battlin you :)

Qham, I suggest u' go ahead and make a call out in the poetry battle section so we can have two battles on...we tryna make that place as active as possible...wut u' think?!...vnorm iz u ready for this?!...check!

[MC Qham]

Couzifer said:

Qham, I suggest u' go ahead and make a call out in the poetry battle section so we can have two battles on...we tryna make that place as active as possible...wut u' think?!...vnorm iz u ready for this?!...check!

check! :D

[vnorm]

check, homeboy.