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#1 Nur

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Posted 05 January 2010 - 04:07 AM

Not for da A.D.D. cuz I don’t add please follow/
I subtract… 1 D n deliver like domino preceded by ano/
theres more rappers than there ever was, but u kno as I kno/
most o dem got rap lines with no points like snapped arrows/ snap I kno….da trax shallow/
to balance the major wacktivity the minor keep it wit more dept dan jack sparrow/
feel ma writings etched in ur chest Ala Zoro/
for da rest of the crowd yall really crave food for thought but u don’t swallow/ or u get left wit crap bowels/
ur mesmerized by the bad to da bone but dey bones lack marrow/
its only skin deep but his a rapper though/
nah hiz not, he just records words on record n claims to stack ammo/
demands respect or attack follows/
hehe da formula’s become such a stale tale, its subpar. No?/
Y-E-S, we ignore the truth while we guess/
Wats wrong wit it, the heart of it had a stroke n lies in mess/
Unhealthy treatment, junk food for thought burgers fries n ketch/ up
Predictable, we know wat yall r gonna say on ur album b4 it lies in shelves/ fuck
wat produced rapper off the conveyor belt line comes next/
they push them out the door as da aisle congest/ nah mean
The industrial competition luring products to come live da star dream/
factories overproduce, n da sharks n Whales are transformed to sardines/

#2 41Trippa

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Posted 06 January 2010 - 03:32 AM

You really need to move these over to the Spoken Word area ... awesome writes!!

#3 Nur

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Posted 06 January 2010 - 08:33 PM

arite yo.. jus moved it... how do delete dis?





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