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[tha high priest]

In the state of sleeplessness
i stare into the empty darkness
crazy thoughts race thru ma head
as i toss n turn on tha bed
should i take a shot of alcohol
or would that be some sort of denial
so i pick up ma shovel
and scoop deep into ma soul
tryna find what lurks in the shadow
that makes me dread placin me head on tha pillow
please insomnia allow me some freedom
to enjoy a sweet dream
even though ghosts lurk everywhere
i pray i wont encounter nightmares

[Couzifer]

its seems u've been having problems sleeping man...but then it seems u've been making good use of your insomnia...

[cornelius]

poets check in, i too have a problem sleeping, i get the feeling life will pass me by. how many of your are going through the same phase.

[MC Qham]

Nice!

tha high priest said:

so i pick up ma shovel
and scoop deep into ma soul
tryna find what lurks in the shadow
that makes me dread placin me head on tha pillow

nice flow and the way you tackled the subject matter which we at times go through like me lately :D

[Poetic Seraph]

i think insomnia might be a side-effect of being a poet. at least from time to time

simple short poem. u probably wrote it more out of frustration than anything else, got this freestyle vibe to it