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#1 Streetwise

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Posted 31 December 2009 - 02:01 PM

I sink into my mind where I see Reason and Rhyme/
It speaks as if to reason but Reason has no Rhyme/
Together they are one and the same/
A motion of sound and flames/
A sign of wisdom burning with colours of crimson/
Kept within is Him who is without sin/
In time it will redeem him/
Sex and Money scours his thoughts, a prolonged death/
slowly enveloping him but the saints prolong his breath/
though it may be his last/

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Posted 09 January 2010 - 03:37 PM

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I sink into my mind where I see Reason and Rhyme/
It speaks as if to reason but Reason has no Rhyme/

nice one but it feels unfinished. kinda like u cut it off after the last phrase.?





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