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[FoOtNiNjA]

Fuck all of yall , dont give a shit about you/ Its Anubis and I know I came out of the blue / When I battle ,leave these cats with a couple of Q's/ Where he been , where he from , am I scared of him too / When somebody say he's iller then u know it aint true / Im the don , if u dare , I murder you and your crew / One of the few , who got a clue of how a MC should flow / **You missin the point like a lost hooker stuck in the coast / don't boast , she WAS a looker , but she now like toast / these cats fuckin with me , I aim right for they throats / Everyone of my rhymes , my lines addictive like coke / Even weed smokers listen to my rhymes to be high / The dopeness that I release , makes my rhymes be a crime / You bring your pic for autographs , so u can feel that u signed / Im so ill that when I rhyme , even the mic wanna bite /


**the Point is a notorious place in Durban where druglords and Hookers do their trade

[mimic truce]

i like the confidence and realism to it. it shows somebody who like to involve with real shit. anyhow this what hiphop is about man. the heads want complexity.higher calibre words, simmillies and metaphor dose. all in all.i feel the heart of what you coming with. 1.

[FoOtNiNjA]

Cool man , more complex syllables then .

[D-LINKWENT]

yup men, thats what the standards have been fah the longest. How far can u elevate???

[FoOtNiNjA]

What ya mean bro

[D-LINKWENT]

FoOtNiNjA said:

What ya mean bro

Nah men am not sayin u weak am just sayn whut everybody else said. It's about elevating, no matter how dope u can get there is always room for elevation. Thats whut hiphop is about.

[FoOtNiNjA]

Ok bro , I get wat u sayin

[FoOtNiNjA]

Bright lights , limo stretched out , red carpet out
/ Then Anubis comes out ,man what a fine night
/Black suit ,nice shoes ,Im hogged by the spotlight
/ My dudes , my fam..everybody lookin real nice
/ I worked my whole life to finally grace the top flight
/ My whole life to be here , to finally grab the gold mic
/ Now I got that one award , dudes takin high fives
/ To risk is to get reward , thats what he did his whole life
/ he's the man , the crowd love him , and they say he too tight
/ funny how the wack dude , now reachin new heights
/ He was an architect , he knew when to draw the line
/ he took life by the horns , always won the bull fights
/ then that one cold night he realised he weren't right
/ one thing kept playin in his mind the whole night
/ In the dark night he kept seein bright brown eyes
/ female figure silhouette kept starin in his eyes
/then dude started screamin no sounds came out
/ started prayin in his mind and soon started to doubt
/ If the lord was really there, he felt dry in his mouth
/ Just as the figure showed her face , then dude passed out / he couldn't scream , then the eyes kinda started to gleam
/ woke up and realised , the whole ordeal was a dream

[MC Qham]

nice man! :D

[thaddaeus]

FoOtNiNjA said:

f*ck all of yall , dont give a shit about you/ Its Anubis and I know I came out of the blue / When I battle ,leave these cats with a couple of Q's/ Where he been , where he from , am I scared of him too / When somebody say he's iller then u know it aint true / Im the don , if u dare , I murder you and your crew / One of the few , who got a clue of how a MC should flow / **You missin the point like a lost hooker stuck in the coast / don't boast , she WAS a looker , but she now like toast

Rather enjoyed it.

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these cats fuckin with me , I aim right for they throats / Everyone of my rhymes , my lines addictive like coke / Even weed smokers listen to my rhymes to be high / The dopeness that I release , makes my rhymes be a crime / You bring your pic for autographs , so u can feel that u signed / Im so ill that when I rhyme , even the mic wanna bite

Feels like an after thought.