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[eljodi]

one round, 16 lines, 3votes, shuld do. well here it goes.

[eljodi]

kick a verse kick a verse kick a verse sixteen, kick a verse thats polite and a verse thats mean, you little prick thinks its the best way out, cant read the sign exit, the way out is my mouth, so listen kizzy go change your name to lizzy, cuz i might live you stung like a new bee(newbie) ,i got more action than a verb, the dictonary came asking me for new words, if you want some amo render,eljodi i'll be the battle ryhme bender, nobody's offender, we only got two but am the fourth gender, you can be the third if you got ish to render, try not to waste time like a clock without batterys, this is just a pistol you shuld come with an artillery,you say you down to earth go mingle with the worms, this battle is like you taking a wrong turn..

[eljodi]

categoryz vote, first 3 wins

[Kizito]

well a call out would have been polite..

i been idol for a while now so ya.. i'll jump on it..

thats my check... will post either later today or... early tommorow..

i hope

[Kizito]

El.. do u vote? put up ur link.. please!! also.. if u may.. revise ur verse...

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[eljodi]

www.africanhiphop/forum/viewtopic.php?f ... 1&start=40
r.i.s vs kizito

[Kizito]

I'm hotter than hell, probly/
we beefing you brought brokly/
MC is to AHH so is Losing to L jodi/
Kick 16 i dont need to, i do 8 & still eat you/
my bars so rich, u'll eat ths & shit crystals/
f*k it? wats that a meta4? clock without batteries?/jeez :oops:
how abt ur rhythms lifeless like ur heart is witout arteries/
u already f*ked up saying fuck you wud be adultery!!/

i kept forgeting to hit back.. so i just freestyled this 8 bar.. to get it done with.

[eljodi]

nice one brof,, lets see 4d votes though its obvious who won

[vindictive-o]

eljodi said:

so listen kizzy go change your name to lizzy, cuz i might live you stung like a new bee(newbie) .

humorous diss!

okay
eljodi rhyme

el similes

el said:

you can be the third if you got ish to render, try not to waste time like a clock without batterys & this battle is like you taking a wrong turn..

el metaphores

el said:

you say you down to earth go mingle with the worms

non wordplay

kizito aggression
the whole verse was directed to el (nice)

overal el....(CLOSE ONE THOUGH)

[R.I.S]

I would definitely have to say Kizito took this on most if not all cats. Eljodi's structure made it hard to even know where a line began & ended.

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you little prick thinks its the best way out, cant read the sign exit, the way out is my mouth

no homo?

This woulda been a set up for a dope flip, i'm just saying.

but final vote: Kizito

[41Trippa]

Vote ---> Kizito.

Eljodis' drop is mediocre at best, more nursery rhyme than battle. There is no flow, disjointed, non-direct. You can do better!

Kizito ... well, lines 2, 4, and 5 have a familiar ring to them ... but I guess it's hard to be "totally" original these days. Otherwise it's pretty simple beatdown!!

[eljodi]

men definitely a new bee verse,, its a lyk a year old.. yall vote n get it over with dis shit has been to long....

[vindictive-o]

vote for vindictive-o 1st. lets move to the next one. :P
close the votes to make way for new ones.

[Kizito]

Agreed! Voting done i took this topic locked!