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[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

SKEPTIKSTYLEZ

This is taking forever.....

He's herb and I crave plant... hopes of victory is depraved rant
I asked for the best and y’all don’t think it contradictory 'Sinis Save ant'?!!
(Sinissavant)

He aint battled for ages! Plus sleeping dogs lie so Sinis only wins in fable
Seriously, unless it’s ‘dog mating period’, you won’t find him holding heat or ‘see-Sin-able’!!
(Seasonable)

I bade the onus; you beg entire sites to come aid your slowness!
‘The wages of Sinis death’ and in fair trade Skep has paid plus bonus!!

I'm a bossy commuter, buzz in and land this dutch like clumsy bomb shooters
Look, you no gangster; you only keep a ‘Mac-in-touch’ on fussy computers!!
(Macintosh)

From Long Bitch? Well, you gotta learn the catwalk...homie stand well
Or punches will show this bitch the 'aggressive model' like Naomi Campbell!!



Sinissavant

yo

When it comes to throwing punches? You aint half as hard
Ill knock you out 'Bare Lee swinging' like my fucking Avatar
(barely)

Fillet his bars! When it comes to creative text skeptic cant portray it smart!
just watch the way SiNiS 'Laystyles out' While voters say it’s like mosaic art
(lays tiles)

Need a Mop for the mess when he’s Dropped to his Death with-out-any-Question
Cuz I’ve had Skeptic running off a cliff… since the second he-doubted-this-Ledge-end

This hooligan doesn’t have a talent I cant school em in, ill make a fool of him
he has got to be full of it... that verse will get 8 quicker then Nadia Suleman

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I just find the word plays on that site more forced than anal sex!! ...case for argument...the verse against IAM. Soooo forced
theres no dispute your site’s horrible & I'm not talking bout your vision in the worst case
Verse slayed, you END UP in a dirt grave... so hows it feel getting raped by Rapdogs Wordplays?

[iam]

this dogs are truly bitches how did sinis get a vote here,with his weak verse made up of fillers
pssh

[Kizito]

In all honesty... Skeptik took this. let me explain my vote

Rhyme: Skeptik.. why? Sinis: hard/ avartars -Smart/ Art/ -Question/ Legend.. skeptic did better..
Multis: Skeptik..
Metaphors: Sinis
Wordplay: Skeptik's attempts (some flopped though) compared to non at all (somebody prove me wrong)
Punchlines: Skeptik... or atleast he came close... wasnt a fun battle. Skeptik you killed me with harder stuff than this.. you still got it though...

AHH 1-0 RD

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

Thanks.

And yeah I came harder in my battle with you cos I actually had some dirt on you whereas I was just making blind attempts in this here battle

1-0

[cornelius]

your dont get it,
most people will be inclined to vote for the emmce repping the site even if his bars are weak
its called loyalty, and thats what you getting, i wonder if any ahh will win thier site. :evil:

[iam]

cornelius said:

your dont get it,
most people will be inclined to vote for the emmce repping the site even if his bars are weak
its called loyalty, and thats what you getting, i wonder if any ahh will win thier site. :evil:

co-sign

[N.u.d.i.v.a.]

o.k lemme view this for a sec...first off..
SKEPTIK'S VERSE

He's herb and I crave plant... hopes of victory is depraved rant
I asked for the best and y’all don’t think it contradictory 'Sinis Save ant'?!!
(Sinissavant)

HE'S HERB AND I CRAVE PLANT was cool.But dat 'sinis save ant' line ruined it right there.the nameplay wasnt in effect cos SAVE aint rhyming with SAV.


He aint battled for ages! Plus sleeping dogs lie so Sinis only wins in fable
Seriously, unless it’s ‘dog mating period’, you won’t find him holding heat or ‘see-Sin-able’!!
(Seasonable)

ok,i seen the SLEEPING DOGS LIE which u ended with the WINS IN FABLE.then the DOG MATING PERIOD is definately seasonable but u wouldnt SEE-SIN-ABLE.(on point dawg).felt the personals in both lines

I bade the onus; you beg entire sites to come aid your slowness!
‘The wages of Sinis death’ and in fair trade Skep has paid plus bonus!!

just a normal punch i'd say,but BADE THE ONUS with AID YOUR SLOWNESS and PAID PLUS BONUS was on point plus i respect ur in-rhymes, WAGES and TRADE.they automatically fixed the flow right there.

I'm a bossy commuter, buzz in and land this dutch like clumsy bomb shooters
Look, you no gangster; you only keep a ‘Mac-in-touch’ on fussy computers!!
(Macintosh)

now these lines would hav been my fav lines but TOUCH and TOSH made it impossible.

From Long b***h? Well, you gotta learn the catwalk...homie stand well
Or punches will show this b***h the 'aggressive model' like Naomi Campbell!!

a good finisher.i luved the Naomi Campbell line especially.





SINIS'S VERSE

When it comes to throwing punches? You aint half as hard
Ill knock you out 'Bare Lee swinging' like my f**king Avatar
(barely)

that was a good start

Fillet his bars! When it comes to creative text skeptic cant portray it smart!
just watch the way SiNiS 'Laystyles out' While voters say it’s like mosaic art
(lays tiles)

the first line was just a normal punchline(nothing special).the second was a waste cos RULE NO.1 when in battle says "NEVER WASTE A LINE TALKING ABOUT HOW DOPE YOU ARE.ALWAYS HIT YOUR OPPONENT AS HARD AS YOU CAN".eventhough u might want to believe u used a nameplay there(laySTYLES),but it wasnt a hard punch thats if i was a punch in the first place.it would hav been better if u never forced wordplays(laystyles/lays tiles) in the battle and just used a SIMPLE but HARD HITTING PUNCH and/or PERSONAL.u could just say "HE'S SKEPTIC ON A STYLE ,HE WOULDNT WIN COS I'LL LAY THESE STYLES LIKE MOSAIC ART" simple.

Need a Mop for the mess when he’s Dropped to his Death with-out-any-Question
Cuz I’ve had Skeptic running off a cliff… since the second he-doubted-this-Ledge-end

the only line that was close to anything was this skeptik running off a cliff line

This hooligan doesn’t have a talent I cant school em in, ill make a fool of him
he has got to be full of it... that verse will get 8 quicker then Nadia Suleman

weak..


overall, i gotta vote SKEPTIK.He took dis like snatching a candy from a little girl.
if RD won other battles,they definately aint win this one.and dats word.

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

That's 2-0

Uppin to knock this clown the fuck out!