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[Dbbl RR]

IM SUPERIOR WITH THIS RAP SHIT ITZ EASILY DONE/ YOUR INFERIOR WITH THIS RAP THINKN YOUR NUMBER ONE/
SO BE CAUTIOUS/ FORE YOU STEP IN THIS GAME/ IVE SLAYED TITANS/ EXPOSING THEY WERE MENTALLY LAME/
IM TRING TELL YOU WEAK ASS RHYMERS /THIS AINT WHAT YOU THANK/YOU RAN UP ON THIS KING/ LIKE YOUR SHIT DONT STANK/YOUR METAPHORES AND SIMILIES ARE CHILDISH/I SPIT FIRE THAT BURNS YOUR CORE LIKE A WHORE SMELLS LIKE FISH/I GOT NO TIME FOR A GAME OF MONOPOLY/STOP SOBBING TO ME/DRY YOUR TEARS AND GET THE FUCC ON/RECOGNIZE YOU WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME IN YOUR WILDEST WET DREAMZ/ALTHOUGH I KNOW IT SEEMZ/ YOU HAVE DEFEATED ME/YOU AINT SHIT TO ME/ BUT A MERE ZIT ON MY NUTZ POPPN TILL YOUR PUSS OOZES/YOUR USELESS WORDS RESONATE LIKE A EMPTY SHELL WITH NO INTERIOR/AM THAT CREATURE THAT LURKS IN THA DARKEST OF CORNERS/I LEAVE CAVITIES FOR CORONERS FOR MOURENERS TO MOURN/SO BE WARNED/ I AM A MANIAC WITH A STRAY JACKET/ON WEAK RHYMES I PREY/THA SMELL OF BLOOD GETZ ME ERECT/LIKE A KLLA THAT FIENDZ ON DECAPITATION/NO HESITATION OR RESERVATION ON DESTRUCTION/LET THIS BE MY INTRODUCTION TO THA REDUCTION OF YOUR MENTALL CAPACITY/IT IZ ME THEE OG FROM DAT LONG BEACH/LIKE A SERMON I PREACH IM HERE TO TEACH ALL EMCEES THAT WANT TO SEE/THA WAY I WILL CRUSH YOUR TOMMOROWZ...PARTING IZ SUCH SWEET SORROW.....

[IDEALIST]

I think you missed your calling.....You should have been a serial killer ..or maybe writing movie scripts for Samuel L. Jackson.

You should be calling rappers out wit dat killer mentality
:twisted:

You changed up the flow half way through the piece. I almost got lost for a sec. but I got the point....tight

[d2]

sum dope ish here...
THA SMELL OF BLOOD GETZ ME ERECT/LIKE A KLLA THAT FIENDZ ON DECAPITATION/NO HESITATION OR RESERVATION ON DESTRUCTION/LET THIS BE MY INTRODUCTION TO THA REDUCTION OF YOUR MENTALL CAPACITY/

[Dbbl RR]

Well I certainly like the feedback...Thank you both very much..Much Respect 2 u both!

[Kizito]

Tripple D R Squared and an L in the middle/
That was sharper to the baby than a needle for measles/

Ill script, well write too... Welcome man.. sad it took this long... ASI NICE SCRIPT AGAIN

[Dbbl RR]

Thank You Kizito...Much Respect