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[s0g0ku]

8 barz-16 lines...
Category votes...

Ur up Rus

[s0g0ku]

Waiting. . .

[Rus-tla]

My bad Goku the IT mngr is on my freaken case bout this net sh*t anyway lets do this....

Welcome to Miss AHH you’re the number one contestant/
I be that rich dude with a fat belly waiting to molest-sum/
Freak yah “blows” son- U couldn’t “strike” if you was a “protester”/
Cuz Yah style is Old Testament yah aint got no act(s)/
Im like A.R.V tablets if you was sick its now an unknown fact/
Im Live wanna touch me I remove (you off) Earth/
This Freightliner is on the highway sogoku dun faced-me/
Lionel is on the bench B*tch I’m showing no Messi/(Mercy)
More Game* in my system than Black Wall Street*s C-D-Player/
You Control Vapour My flow solid like the other 2 states of Matter/
So off the hook, u shoot(call) Im like please-try-later/
F#ck yo frown b*tch! Always bleed wen u got a real-high-temper/
Yous a whack*actor your lines are lame*and*rehearsed/
I serve 2 much beef on the main meal to leave you desert(ed)/
If You sleeping on this Yah die-a-dreamer/
Suite to be a rapper, wet no threads (no flow) like dry-cleaners/

[s0g0ku]

Just saw that..itz a stressing period 4me so i myt be late droppn othawise i ma drop the soonest..

[s0g0ku]

This gay dude loves TESTICLES...ya take so many ^BALLS IN U^ itz like they SCORING Ya Bro/ ya Boring On Flows and wudnt even ^Keep UP To Me^ by HOLDING MY DOME!//

I own heat, my wordingz mad while he's Packing Nothing On His Plays/ and got the dude ^looking like a FIST AIRPORT^ the way i'm LANDING PUNCHES ON HIS FACE!

Leave ya partz misplaced, im fast on gunz while he lost his Life From Stall/ coz "i armed the gun first" so he waz ^Next To COCK^ LIKE IMPLYING DA BALLS!!

My sick stylez are old! Rustla? ^i dont need to try hard^..my Knivez Choppin' Kids/ so itz natural, when u see me ^Taking The RUST OFF^ I MIGHT DROPPING WEAK!!! {!}

Im Poppin Sh!t on this cat coz this Mothafuka's Fool/ i mean beating me? U wudnt ^GRANT IT^ refering to ur MOTHA'S MAMA BOOB!! {gran' tit- grandmotha tit}

Blast A Fool popping trickz with the tec...im an Inspired Gunman/ u'll see me pop and ^DROPPING RUS'^ like a RETIRED HUSTLA'! {dropping Rush}

Im Coming Atcha! My lines sick!....to some am Bomb And Great To Othaz!/i'll drop the kid and if he standz up? I'll ^MAKE HIM FALL BACK^ like EMINEM GOT A GREAT SWAGGA!! {!} {make KIM fall back}

So ya best quit coz my skillz be leathal or rather Bitter Partner/ ull end up gettng shot or just ^SHOOTING YOURSELF^ like PETER PARKER!! {!}

[s0g0ku]

Uppin 4votez.. Lil Kim iz eminem's X gf and peter parker is spiderman..takng picturez of himself...ask if u dnt get smthng

[iam]

s0g0ku said:

Uppin 4votez.. Lil Kim iz eminem's X gf and peter parker is spiderman..takng picturez of himself...ask if u dnt get smthng

lil kim is eminem ex gurl friend where did u get that sonny neva knew that

[iam]

sogoku ya flow pissin me off.rustla that messi line was off and force u started of well but fell at the end but u gat the cat on flow.sogoku u had sum good shit to pull this one off nice opener and punches good concepts.sogoku gemme vote
nice jobs guys

[s0g0ku]

Haha yea i aint liein u can google it bro

And yeah oh well my flow coulda been betta..anyway 1-0, uppin

[Rus-tla]

Damn... I really luved the Messi line but anyway

VOTES PLEASE

[s0g0ku]

The messi line waz actually nice

[jemairon]

the strike line was tyt but that was about it the messi line was mad forced flow-rustla puns-sok mets-sok wordplay-sok vote sok ...

[iam]

Rus-tla said:

Damn... I really luved the Messi line but anyway

VOTES PLEASE

sorry man but IMO that line wasnt good but i dont know bout the others

[Kizito]

Chekutanga ndinoti kufara kune vese vari ikoko... [just a greeting-shona]

Here is my two cents...

Wordplay: Sogoku... showed me a new dimenion of word play on this... last letter of the previous word + the next word = new word

ey guys i though the Messi line was ayt, it just didnt diss... shud've tried
"Im MERCILESS*1, unlike this Barca*2, im champion breaking this spain*3/"*1 Messi, *2 Bastard, *3 spine
hmmmm.... cud stil be made better if thought through...

Flow: Rustla.... Sog maybe you shud start putting your rhymes at the end of the sentences then the /

personals: Sogoku he made an effort... nothin came from Rustla... Category was weakly represented though

Disses: hmmmmm

rhyme: Sogoku... + Multis<< they won this categ 4 u

Meat4s: Rustla... Live-Earth... off the hook please try later
what else? umm

Punchlines: ummmmmmmm.... Sub-zero landed more blows, but Raiden did his best... aka NOBODY in this Combat
[b]
Overall: Our garden boy's blue item.... jox... Sogoku took this. it was VERY CLOSE though.. Just that some of Sog's lines looked like just fillers... you too Rus... some diss attempts were vague... Sog was worse just coz... some lines i totally didnt get.... like

s0g0ku said:

eave ya partz misplaced, im fast on gunz while he lost his Life From Stall/ coz "i armed the gun first" so he waz ^Next To COCK^ LIKE IMPLYING DA BALLS!!

ha ha i just got it... :lol: ... should've been writ better though... it took too long. its not sposed to be poetry... or am i slow...

I spent a whole hour on this battle.... and thats my two...

[cornelius]

openner: sogoku
punches:rustla
multies:none
complexity:none
similies:none
flow: sogoku

Rustla is good but this just was not his, sogoku took it. word

[s0g0ku]

Thanx 4the votez, i won tko close this..

And my every line waz making sense and had multies and no fillaz..u can still ask me if u dnt get a line...i think i did more than enough 4this battle..and my stuff are sum alil complex but easy to get if u know..

Kizito ARM a gun also means COCK a gun...cock waz wordplay in this case..i ARMED FIRST so he waz NEXT TO COCK(arm) like the BALLS!..cock-dick...anyway..nice battle Rus-Tla word.

And plz ask me if u dnt get sum, coz id be happy to explain..shot

[Rus-tla]

Well done bro....

[apopyalips]

i guess y'all ain't tryna start a gay movement here. i enjoyed rustlas' battle than nii's, sorry s0d0ku. that eminem line was off with that peter shootin himself. i know u are tight dude and u can do better. most of ya lines were forced. i see a future in rustla, more power to ya elbow.