29 replies to this topic

[s0g0ku]

I never null their votez..i just askd 4oldcatz votez too..bt s'whatever

[cornelius]

very disrespectful guys! we took time to read ya shit,
now our votes aint good enough, fuck your!

[cornelius]

very disrespectful guys! we took time to read ya shit,
now our votes aint good enough, f*ck your!

[Xblaze]

alrite, dont start the punches yet, (i mean the physical ones),i've been busy, u know some peeps actually have a life outside internet boards, here's my coveted explained vote, geez, its just a battle dudes, its actually for the love of the art, there aint no trophies...

[quote name="SKEPTIKSTYLEZ"]
He’ll be embraced with claws while locked in this cage war
Cos there’s nothing to prove to a b***h with an under-age score *
[/quote]
nice opener, but i'll say its a tie with Goku's cos of that hard hittin COPE worplay line.
[quote name="SKEPTIKSTYLEZ"]
Check your name, its lore, U softer than pyjama flannels
Only time we witness Goku fight is viewi ng Manga channels
I got llamas handled, soon as I bang he falls to his knee
It’s not just cartoon TV; Goku usually 'drag-on balls' for a fee :roll:
[/quote]
nice personal kool, at least stronger than Goku's S'S line which was just too forced.
i mean skeptiks verse is filled with personals, and good ones.
[quote name="SKEPTIKSTYLEZ"]
Got stacks tall as the sea; each day copping a newer save
But s0g0ku will never see 0s unless logging his username
[/quote]
a filler line but a nice setup for that next punch
[quote name="SKEPTIKSTYLEZ"]
Blows got this loser slain; I’m ending the slime hoe’s career
Cos "boring queue lines" never meant your rhyme "show’s premiere"**
the last lines was ok to me,nothing spectacular.
[/quote]



[quote name="s0g0ku"]I'll bring nthng new...defeat iz Something You Know/ drop and leave ya like ^hard-working Party memberz^..just STRUGGLING TO COPE..// im Stomping This Bro...fronting me? this Folk Carries Troubles!/ Coz my urge'll make him ^feel trapped in this RING^ like MOST MARRIED COUPLES!!..// Im Busting Knuckles...lame lad ull get "fuked on rap" since u AINT GETTING PHYSICAL!/ And i'll raise HEAT to have ^S.S. IN ASHES^ like im
BURNING CRIMINALS!!
the criminal line--forced

// ya Death Be Lyrical...he ddnt have GUTZ..my puns SMASHED THIS BRO'S TESTICLES!/plus ya like "tennis referees", MAKE A LIVING ON THE 'NET' as an Af.HipHop REGULAR!
Nice..

//like 'coke overdose' my lines had This Silly Cat Suffocate/ and my SCHOOLING made this chump ^pass away^ like an IMMIGRANT CANDIDATE....//

[/quote]
explaining ur lines aint ideal, but i got most of the lines without the explanations.

opener-tie
meta4's- this ones tough, tie.
worplay-goku(unarguably..)
multis-goku
creativity-goku
punches- Stylez u came hard but i prefer Goku's punches.
[quote="s0g0ku"
ya Death Be Lyrical...he ddnt have GUTZ..my puns SMASHED THIS BRO'S TESTICLES!
[/quote]
flow- tie
personals --Skeptikstylez
structure-skeptik

vote sogogu


this is just my opinion, i respect everybody else's, its not a blueprint regarding the battles, i cant say which textcee is better, i just prefer a certain verse, thats all, they are both impressive textcees, everybody votes on how they feel, Goku's verse felt better to me, it was more complex, stylez was str8 to the point, which is nice too.

battle was dope. peace out.

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

He got me on multies??? OK!

Anyway, thanks for taking time out to break it down.

3-1

[s0g0ku]

Thanx 4the feedback

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

Votes please

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

U
P
P
I
N

[wreck-a-damus]

He’ll be embraced with claws while locked in this cage war
Cos there’s nothing to prove to a b***h with an under-age score *
3/5

Check your name, its lore, U softer than pyjama flannels
Only time we witness Goku fight is viewing Manga channels
4.5/5

I got llamas handled, soon as I bang he falls to his knee
It’s not just cartoon TV; Goku usually 'drag-on balls' for a fee
3.5/5

Got stacks tall as the sea; each day copping a newer save
But s0g0ku will never see 0s unless logging his username
3/5

Blows got this loser slain; I’m ending the slime hoe’s career
Cos "boring queue lines" never meant your rhyme "show’s premiere"**
3/5

Average 17/25


I'll bring nthng new...defeat iz Something You Know/ drop and leave ya like ^hard-working Party memberz^..just STRUGGLING TO COPE..//
2/5 punch didn't connect well for me

im Stomping This Bro...fronting me? this Folk Carries Troubles!/ Coz my urge'll make him ^feel trapped in this RING^ like MOST MARRIED COUPLES!!..//
4.5/5

Im Busting Knuckles...lame lad ull get "fuked on rap" since u AINT GETTING PHYSICAL!/ And i'll raise HEAT to have ^S.S. IN ASHES^ like im BURNING CRIMINALS!! //
3.5/5 structuring made this weak i meant the words in bold hit better if reworded or substituted for better ones. get it?

ya Death Be Lyrical...he ddnt have GUTZ..my puns SMASHED THIS BRO'S TESTICLES!/plus ya like "tennis referees", MAKE A LIVING ON THE 'NET' as an Af.HipHop REGULAR!//
2.5/5 i appreciate the pun / w/p but Net/ umpires/ ahh regular didn't connect well ,wording again was off but your structuring is very good.

like 'coke overdose' my lines had This Silly Cat Suffocate/ and my SCHOOLING made this chump ^pass away^ like an IMMIGRANT CANDIDATE....//
2.5/5 nothing much hitting

14.5/25

Flow tie
multis Sogoku
wordplay Sogoku
Punches SS
Personals SS was better
complexity SS
creativity Sogoku
Enjoyment SS

Skeptikstyles by the breadth of an hair.

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

Thanks Wreck.
I win by 4-1.TKO

Thanks S0g0ku. Was worth it

Closed