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[R.I.S]

2 rounds battle, 4 bars (8 lines) each...flipping's allowed, no recycling, no biting

Pls dont vote until both rounds have been completed...explain your votes too, tnx.

Consider this my check in...gd luck bruhv.

[Kizito]

flippings only allowed after your verse has been posted... in the second round!

[R.I.S]

yea, i knw that...was waiting for u to check in, i guess ill take that as ur check...bout to go put in work on 1st round verse. gd luck.

[Kizito]

This battle has its legs open & Ris is in the middle/*1
Hip hop is full of heads*2 and this "Kats got the fiddle"*3/
King's rhyme is choke slamming*8, a strangle in the windpipe/
Princess Dies*4, stroke pianos he's "the candle i the wind type"*5/
Goliath vs Newbee*6 u be looking like the amateur/
Another one disfigured, nameless looking like your avartar/
Kiz bust, Ris just, been beat fast like Kuti's jazz*7/
I just murked u back to back like your vertebrae and ass/

*1: He's pussy
*2: Head- Dick
*3: He's played, thus f*ck-ed up often
*4: Word play- princess diana.... candle in the wind. he's also a princess(compared to the king) and the kid dies.
*5: word play- Elton john- a fag (2) he is easily blown away
*6: only coz he has been here longer than me and has more posts
*7: Faceless avartar + R.I.P = the unknown dead- Femi kuti, on ur signature. . legend in my book too..
*8: Choke slamming... u'll choke and find it hard to retaliate.

[R.I.S]

I’m bout to tear this (w)rapper like it’s Christmas, I’m getting No-L/ /(noel..no-l(losses)..wordplay)
The day you beat me’s the day you hear of a cold hell//
Kiz been a fake, ay tell me, who’s style u bite on this one?//*
‘Cos u like a whore’s pussy – can never be tight, men u done//
You need 15 more posts to keep it 100 once on this site// (he’s at 85 now)
Struggling with writers block, me I stay with tons of recites//**
21 & still a text rapper, go do somin better wit ya career//***
You a bitch, I know it, I pull strings & reveal ya brassiere//


*copied BCOM’s style in his battle with Cornelius
**check his sig
***he’s 21 years old

[Kizito]

F* it, now u'r stranded, u shud'v built the Ark/*1
Escape plans to rabbie Rustla, niggaz got your tooth mark/*2
Aint heard of cold hell? I give these devils chills/
On the bridge with Salman Rushdie*3 u still licking on my heels/
This child's 20? far from your rhyme's they smell queer!/
Stop writing with your butt chicks do something better with your rear/*4
Echos of "candy ass rapper", now there is (w)Raps In your Soul for real/*5
u cant be the "best" after this "A" coz "A's" marks when u'r killed/*6

*1: Sh*t now Im flooding!!! "i dont flow i flood" _me
*2: the tear wrappers phrase was posted by Rustla in the freestles&cypher forum "freestyle my style..." Beat Biter?
*3: writer of the Satanic verses.. on the writter's block and im still kicking ur A#!
*4: You drop sh*t
*5: LL cool J being dissed i think it was by canabis "u a candy ass rapper with a candy ass name"
Word play "Soul for Real's" Candy rain song.. "Raps In my Soul"... his signature. Wrappers from the candy.
*6: A... the rating of the rhyme. The mark of the beAst!

[R.I.S]

Vote anyhow, just explain it...I still got to drop though, ill do that 2mr...it's 10:30 pm right now (S.A)

[R.I.S]

k, so i figured i wont have time 2mr with schl & ish so i just keyed this up right now

Fuck an Ark son, ill walk through ur flows, im rap’s Jesus//
Actually fuck that, masturbation’s the only time ‘Kiz bust’//
You gassed up, iam never gave u the thumbs up, it was the finger//
Half ur rhymes don’t even make sense, fuck off, don’t bother linger//*
Bitch ur rhymes are so 'plaid', now all u need is a kilt// (played)
Plus ur flow’s way off, ur rhyme structure need to be rebuilt// (did u recite that shit back 2 urself?)
U don’t ‘cook’, u just ‘bite’, that’s like a smack to the chef//
I’ll take the ‘A’, u get graded & marked with an ‘F’//

*if u gotta explain everyone of ur lines, then u doing something wrong ma dude


edit: Oh & i dont wanna sound like i'm bitching but that line u said i bit off rus-tla:

he said:

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It’s that kid that’s got a birthday daily cuz I get to reap (w)rappers-apart/

...i honestly never saw that post until now...but yea, it's almost like what i said except he's using b-day & im using christmas & noel.

[Kizito]

Sh*t talking huh? Don't have time for that... do the work with ur verse..

my flow's style is not generic... look in all my posts! rarely are the lines even. i can spit what i write and it sound ill. i dont need to explain that!

Looks like u casting votes already Ris...

Votes!

[R.I.S]

It aint shit talking ma dude, im just explaining so u dont have to ask me what i mean when i said half ur lines dont make sense...but wtv, its all parta the battle...no beef though, im not on the site to make enemies, votes up & gd luck. May the better lyricist win.

[Kizito]

Word up Corn..

this is how the battle is defined:

R.I.S said:

2 rounds battle, 4 bars (8 lines) each...flipping's allowed, no recycling, no biting

Pls dont vote until both rounds have been completed...explain your votes too, tnx.

they'v been completed

On voting there is a whole FAQ on that but they defined the following criteria:

Punches
Personals
Multies
Flow
Metaphors
Wordplay and
Creativity.

Hope that helps.. One:

[R.I.S]

Yea Kizito, that works...& if anybody has got a tie...you can use 'Overall Enjoyment' as a tie breaker.

[iam]

good battle both
truth speakin kiz had the first round well but ris came hard as well and its a draw at the second round.
Punches-no real punches
Personals-ris
Multies
Flow-tie
Metaphors-tie
Wordplay-kiz
Creativity-none
it was suppose to be a tie but kiz had a step ahead
so if u guys gi me a third round i can gi a clear judgement
but wit these two rounds kiz has a hard vote

[wreck-a-damus]

Nah this is a bad Match-up.

Vote: RIS all the way except Nameplay goes to kizito. Kizito you wanna up yo game a bit? yeah better.

fave lines

Aint heard of cold hell? I give these devils chills/
On the bridge with Salman Rushdie*3 u still licking on my heels

and all of ris's bars.

[R.I.S]

Thanks iam and wreck...it's 1-1

[IDEALIST]

Nice Battle

RIS - Flat out, yo pieces got more :D :P :lol: out of me and
I felt U did a lil better job of countering some of his lines

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I’m bout to tear this (w)rapper like it’s Christmas, I’m getting No-L/ /
The day you beat me’s the day you hear of a cold hell//
f*ck an Ark son, ill walk through ur flows, im rap’s Jesus//
Actually f*ck that, masturbation’s the only time ‘Kiz bust’//
b***h ur rhymes are so 'plaid', now all u need is a kilt// (played)
Plus ur flow’s way off, ur rhyme structure need to be rebuilt// (did u recite that shit back 2 urself?) :lol:

Kiz - some cool lines..also nice effort on strike backs

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Goliath vs Newbee*6 u be looking like the amateur/
Another one disfigured, nameless looking like your avartar/
This child's 20? far from your rhyme's they smell queer!/
Stop writing with your butt chicks do something better with your rear/

But it mostly left me feeling :| :? ..only cuzz I had to keep going back to yo notes to understand half of what you were saying.

Please understand..I vote on text battles as much as I can as if I was watching them live.

My Vote - R.I.S

[Kizito]

Word AHH! 2-1 to R.I.S. i guess u came stronger than i thought!

Thanks Wreck, iam and ID

VOTE!

[Rus-tla]

I think both cats killed it and came harder than I expected nothing could separate the verses on most aspects of text battling but Kizito had an upper hand on Creativity…. Loved the way the ark line was reversed by Ris but that wasn’t enuff to take the battle

Vote Kizito

[R.I.S]

coolio...2-2, close battle uh? Still Uppin.

[SKEPTIKSTYLEZ]

IDEALIST hit it right on the head. Kizito's flow was real effy and half the stuff needed me to go back and forth and try to make sense of it. R.I.S didn't come as strong imo but was enough to edge this.

Vote - R.I.S