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[Kizito]

diss freestyles.. 3 bars

im not the best at this so.. lets kick it and practice

[cornelius]

dude i will open with this but i will counter from ya spit, cause i was skeptical over what to spit(i mean you set it up, so you have the concept)
here goes!

i spit flows that force you to rewind/ have you looking behind/
like a retard/
thats why a victory against me you can never archieve/
am iller than any verse you can ever concieve/
more deadly than any desease you can ever percieve/
so who is it you're tryin to decieve/
i spit poems that go across the penisula/
rhymes are spectacular/like a pyramid made rectangula/
dialog skills possess the bueaty of queen cleopatra/
i will leave in disarray and ruins like the city of alexandria/
am the powerhouse of this rap game like a mitochodria/
so dont compair me to any of your regular emmcees/
i leave battered and bruised like a mouse denied of his cheese/
you african hiphop critics and playa haters will never succed/
i will bring a state of anarchy till you internally bleed/
you will plead for breath like a suffocated man led to his death/
my approach is all minatory/cutting off your atteries/
intoxicating your body with chemicals from batteries/

[Kizito]

yea man thats the idea... too many bars though... make em 3... 6 lines

now let me try!

I abruptly stop your flow like Moses parting the sea/
then have u in mountains 40 days whilst learning laws of emcees/
rule one, i am extrodinary and am above what you see/
thou shalt not live to see the day that ur poetry crosses me/
my flow makes u retract like a rubber emcee/
then i bring heat that makes u think the suns related to me/

[David Mokitimi]

still on point as ever kizito i see! the Moses part bra!!!
well this is ma 3 bars...

brother you too soft like a kid with them rickets/
if hip-hop were bails,it would already been knocked-out straight,
coz you that bats-man who cant protect his wickets/
im a type of cat who already done did deals with the devil/
two-tymed the son of the night and smacked him with the bible/
i take charge,in this game im in charge,im recharged/
lines got more shocks than nike-shox/

[cornelius]

sorry fam, had to delete ma shit, cause i intend to spit it. am sure you understand, dont want to make the flow a public issue.word

[cornelius]

dudes am sorry i seem to exceed the barz limit every time ,but lets stretch this thread and see how far it can go.

[cornelius]

by the way what ever happened to mr breakinnews! dude you quiet, have you run ont of news?

[David Mokitimi]

U must be in need of your fam coz this are your last days/
that amo show you a nine and make you wonder your days/
lyrical head shooter show you what my lines do/
ufck with me,they carry you to your own tomb/
im gorry and black,got more slays than a reaper/
you cant catch me im too quick im in need of a silver/

[Kizito]

Im off creative too lately man!

writer's block Again!

[Rus-tla]

W.H.O sick?er? Contradictory statement/
Aint none iller I walk over these cats like they’re pavements/
You were born to die I’m fast tracking yah destiny/
I drop so much heat even Lucifer envies-me/
Where Im from Diva’s short 4 David AHH recruited a Drag-Queen?
I’m two in one NOW who’s next on yo Tag-Team?

[pro-dominant]

Rus-tla said:

W.H.O sick?er? Contradictory statement/ Aint none iller I walk over these cats like they’re pavements/
You were born to die I’m fast tracking yah destiny/
I drop so much heat even Lucifer envies-me/
Where Im from Diva’s short 4 David AHH recruited a Drag-Queen?
I’m two in one NOW who’s next on yo Tag-Team?

LOL!!!
that ish is nice rite there

[Kizito]

going after Rustla is not the best of things to do man!! I back! Ms Hill's flow anyday Pre * ur signature! i love the multis in that song!"

The f*ck, u lack a back up singer otherwise u'r childless destiny/
i frustrate, i castrate, checking, are u hip hop or just Beyonce?/
only unreal G.O.A.Ts will f*ck u up so i guess u be the latter/
i mess with minds my brainstorms explode and leave u with irreplacable splatter/
im out of this world i rock, u'r stoned, ur high's my low your baby moms my.. no/
i nailed this free, its Hummered vs Rustla, on comparison he's really low/

[cornelius]

i flow with force and pressure like water in xylem tubes/
take you to the ground like a tree without roots/
run through your body and kidnap your soul/
exfoliate the rap game peeling off wacks like you/
make you acknowledge ya shame like girls feel after being rapped/
you're disgraced/your whole image is displaced/kiz kid/
youre a week seed/fertility is not guaranteed/

[Kizito]

Cornelius u fucked up, ur rap is morning sickness/
U under estimate and thats ur strongest weakness/
im beyond M-sea level like Lauryn on a hill/
u not ill u just think so,like a pussy on the pill/
Corn born out of scorn angry sex makes fakes/
rape child, map the wild and bring this lion's beef steaks/

[cornelius]

dude, you touched my parents in ya verse. that shit aint funny!
i can also drop mama verse but for what? since she aint a part of this

[Kizito]

im sorry about that, didnt mean to offend!On the real.

[mceeQ]

you dudes is criss crossed like plaid fencing vests
on da mic ya last letter will be da Z on ya chest/
smoke cuban outta da box text's to slitting wrists
i am da blade or razor a chef with cuban linx
your wackness can't resist love potion verbal spits
break ya heart half heartedly spitting collosal hits/

[mimic truce]

this is dumb shit...n i dont need the stratascope
you could brown my palms bitch, with your mouth like lathered soap
why bother talk??? shove in your tongue,its how your mother broke
n you got her skulp, from this fat buldged, it couldve had yo father stroke
fuck a battle ill hang a rope, n tighten the knot....die to the beat.
this is the world wide web, and you worried about how you fucking dying on the street???

LMAO

[Kizito]

I tutor your rap, u mimic truth cat needs the transcript/
U'r action figure rappers that need to train scripts/
memorise how i hamonised your nose and my fists/
u ignore ill, and doubt skills like Ray Charles on my text script/
u a kiss emcee, its like my rectum's got ur spit/
then u pull back, spit with ur tounge... then "Oh Shit!"/


Its getting iller in here!!! Q and Mimic are killing it! Nice one dues!

[Kid Piru]

u dnt wanna see me in tha cipher
have niggas bitin my flow
followin me like im the pied pipper
there is none tighter
smokin big blunts
usin hells flame as my lighter
even satan gotta emit ima lyrikal fighter
i stay roolin like a biker
punchlines 4 days
so kall me a striker