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[Kizito]

Style originated by BCOM.. one of the kings of the AHH golden era past!

Constipation, im heat bringing, your blood is boiling its simmers/
Oragami army child, wild whistling whilst bringing you hiroshima/
Read the scrolls, this is the part were i rip and dismantle/
Nile flooding, blood baths, you'r the next rappers example/
Evolution skipped your tounge, you drop monkey rhyme schemes/
Like "goo goo ga ga, u ma dada" no ur mother just dreams/
Invalid. no shots its amazing how u'v been murdered at a click!/
Undisputed chickens want beef, they r tired of their cock diets/
Sad sermon saying, Simon says i slaughtered this sucker!/

Sad that they promise rappers beef then we feed on these salads/
Umbilical cords hanging, they are still born babies belting balads/
Cornelius versus me, texas meat that he shall be/
Kizito !/
Silent descriptions, i'll quote Wreck, u'r "finito"

Deadly dust, ur daddy bust, son, ur ears are attentive/
Incredible hulk attitudes u'r jealousy's expensive/
Carefull, manolo rhymes come with "handle with cares"/
Kurupt the rest of your career child, reply if u dare!/

[breakingnewz]

daaamn somebody aint comin back :lol: :lol: :lol:

[cornelius]

i plug the heart out your chest and script rhymes to the sound of its last beat/
you little prick/am so sick/ i kill with one spit/
your whole style and image is comedy/
wackness so deep their isn't a remedy/
listen you boyscout/you claiming to rap is an insult/
you're a rifraf dookface/the type of emmces i detest/
i sript rhymes to impress/they undress and expose your nudeness/
you public sham/you below my resornig and plan/
you're bloody gabbage/and coming agaisnt me has exposed you to carnage/
soon you will sustain injuries and be wrapped like a mummy in a bandage/
fuck what you about/you weak and senile soul/
what you even battling for?
am hot/you not/am deep/you shallow/
you're fag in a skirt/ a bitch who forgot he got balls inbetween his legs/
now i blast your ass off and hang your neck like cloth with some pegs/
am the real image/you are a deflected shadow/
so face it son/you're a lightweight son/
now i discad you like a monthly viginal discharge son/

[cornelius]

help us with some votes,but please let them be free and fair.breakdown if you can!like the southafricans say, sharp sharp mfetu.first four take it homie.

[mceeQ]

cool battle but left me wanting more ...lol
anyway on a real both emcees represented and shout to both of u dudes.
My breakdown of the battle goes like this:
Kizito was on point with some dope complex lines wordplay was cool and a few nice metaphors and the like. I dug da techniique and contruction of your ryhmes especially da internal ones peace
Cornelius also came out wit some dope lines nice sharp internal ryhmes almost rapid fire,short but to da point like no punches pulled u wanna get at this cat lol.But yeah your similes where cool and precise word!!
personally i liked Kizito verse a lil more coz without wanting to sound condescending it didn't read out generic. Cornelius's verse was ok but its seemed like a verse u can find on da freestyle forum in battle u need to take it out of da box and jus bail with it. I felt Kay did dat his verse was astute original in places but ultimately it held my attention. So my vote is : Kizito
metaphors kizito
multies kizito
flow cornelius
wordplay kizitio
complexity kizito
similes kizito
punches cornelius

[cornelius]

nice one eemmceeQ,and thanks for reppin.your Kiz,you got one on the deli.folks keep them votes coming,cause we even workin extra hours to make sure the ballots are in place.

[Kizito]

66 views, and only 1 vote/
now i feel like McCain going gainst black folk/

EXERCISE YOUR RIGHTS, VOTE FOR YOUR CANDIDATE!!!

[Rikambura]

metaphors kizito
multies kizito
flow cornelius
wordplay Corn
complexity Corn
similes kizito
for me its a tie!!

[David Mokitimi]

All i can say is im non-plussed by u ougz,bt i think kizito merked cornelius on this one coz i fell in love with his strategy"C O R N E L I U S" Lettin evry letter xplain its own state and ish s well s his metaphores nd. punches 2 the guts.but i gotta give props 2 ma cornelius coz he came out strong wit some gory word-play like talkin bout sustaining injuries nd bein wrapped wit bandages lyk a mummy nd rhymes xposin kez's nudeness nd stuff. KEZITO got the vocab on this one. WORD!

[cornelius]

david and rika, nice one. thanks for dem votes.the countin goes on mr mccain

[iam]

metaphors kizito
multies kizito
flow cornelius
wordplay Corn
complexity Corn
similes kizito
it when sum like dis kiz got ma vote
but kiz tha corn spellin i didnt like it.it was off

[MC SKILLZ]

good flows but both are lackin on personals except spitzo letter stuff he used.i ma drop by 2 gimma votes.

[cornelius]

thanks iam and Mc Skillz. Word

[ATROcity]

Why dont you go again..this was wack!

[cornelius]

ATROcity said:

Why dont you go again..this was wack!

seems like wack is the only word your brain can comprehend(dull retard). i know you got beef with me dude, but you scared to call me out,cause you know cornelius sends wanabees like you into oblivion.never to be remembered again.isssh thats got to hurt.

[IDEALIST]

Both of these rhymes were cool but too much cartoon-will never do-metaphors and not enough reality for me. But both still not bad.

CORNELIUS- You had some cool lines

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you're fag in a skirt/ a b***h who forgot he got balls inbetween his legs/
now i blast your ass off and hang your neck like cloth with some pegs/

but I didn't think you personalized your piece as much as you could have targeting KIZITO

KIZITO- I wasn't all that impressed with the way you spelled CORNELIUS SUCKS but that did give you better focus on your opponent and you did have lil better wordplay

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Read the scrolls, this is the part were i rip and dismantle/
Nile flooding, blood baths, you'r the next rappers example/
Evolution skipped your tounge, you drop monkey rhyme schemes/
Like "goo goo ga ga, u ma dada" no ur mother just dreams

Nice Battle

VOTE-KIZITO

[dramatik]

vote Kizito

Opener.K
Metha4z.K
Punches.K
Flow.C
Finisher.K

[Kizito]

Wow im amazed i even won this.. im not even a battle emcee i just love playing with words/

Lesson learnt: Up my game!

thanks fam!

[cornelius]

Your Kiz, seems like you took it boy, congrats. word. barstool idealist thanks for enforcing your african hiphop right to vote, and its a wrappppppp.

[cornelius]

dramatic thanks as well, blood.