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[vnorm]

post your pieces to the below picture. Evrone can. Best piece will be decided upon.

[brooks]

ok!vnorm,am in!

[vnorm]

^^ k.
more heads?

[Poetic Seraph]

been looking at the pic for a few days now, but still not inspired

sorry

i'ma keep trying though haha

[brooks]

Poetic Seraph said:

been looking at the pic for a few days now, but still not inspired

sorry

i'ma keep trying though haha

thats unlike u ps.

[brooks]

vnorm said:

^^ k.
more heads?

[Poetic Seraph]

I know brooks :shock: :| dunno what's up with that, but i keep tryin :)

[IDEALIST]

POWERLESS, CONTAGIOUS, OVERWHELMING ANTICIPATION !!!

[vnorm]

well, drop somethin boy. i had it too long i even lost ma inspiration. probably you could gimm some. u may make it a battle if you wanna.

[IDEALIST]

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well, drop somethin boy. i had it too long i even lost ma inspiration. probably you could gimm some.

OK....
gimmie 1 day

[Poetic Seraph]

lol @ vnorm

[IDEALIST]

" A WOMANS LOVE FEAR"

The belief is that I'd also benefit..So I've decided to let U win
U proved to me U wouldn't quit..So I gave up & gave in

U handled me with time & care..And U've won me with Ur charm
How Ur courage confronts any who dares..Has kept me feeling safe from harm

I'm fixated with how U move..& it hurts when Ur distant
Ur subtle words r more than smooth..& the feel of Ur voice is instant

U know I've been crushed before..Sorry I've been so Hard
Ur time invested I can no longer ignore..Don't make me regret lowering my gaurd

Now some men lie, deceive and gone in the morning..I've heard this is what some men do
So it's only fair I give U a warning..Of exactly what Ur getting Ur self into

The deal is my LOVE is forever..Not just for U to borrow
And who U've shown me U R was clever..If this is not who U'll be tomorrow

My biggest FEAR is that for U the thrill..Is in the challenge & the chase
And once I'm Urs, my soul U'll kill..By exposing a second face

Much time has gone & now the time has come..U've made me ready to take a chance
No more in my like can I continue to run..from possible genuine romance

As long as our LOVE is never torn..In life we will forever be rich
Just know Hell has no fury like a woman scorn..And payback is a Bitch!!

[IDEALIST]

lil sumtin, sumtin 8)

[Dbbl RR]

WELL DAMN!!

[Poetic Seraph]

a lil sum-sum he says


DAAAYUUUUM!!!! now ur poem makes that picture mean sooo much more, dayum dayum dayum that's all i got to say hahaha

[IDEALIST]

my luv is battle but thanks & nuff respect :)

[vnorm]

IDEALIST said:

my luv is battle but thanks & nuff respect :)

we can do this? p.m me.

[Couzifer]

vnorm said:

IDEALIST said:

my luv is battle but thanks & nuff respect :)

we can do this? p.m me.

*sniff sniff*... I smell a battle!...*sniff sniff*

[mimic truce]

hey. i tried a storyline too. check it out.

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i fallen....
eyes closed....
mind lost, n freed,
fearless of what this time choose
in my mind inside all what my eyes saw
"stay here" and in my heart more
if i shed a tear, will you wipe my eyes slow
theres charm in your guise, is that what this sign shows
pleassurable time, all this is worth a try, tell me its not false
"i know...i know....i know"
sweet rose, scented on your silk clothes
i feel more weakened loose balance off my big toes
this.... is close
nothing could tear us apart...despite what doubt... that... indeed grows
then shatters with another touch, addict to this deep pulse of impulse
love feverish lust, i trust him, feel his needs clutch
heart, beating, warmth, his breath bowled on my neck, hair in sling pose
just to buy a second n restrain myself from your lovely dimples
weak n lost...words building, wondering if i indeed spoke
would spoil the moment...his voice sulky, love it when he sweet talks
i fallen....feelings i hold now in this thick rose
to bloom and remind me of things i should remember, what i believed most.
Love is a mystery, and he is such a sweet ghost. " I love you Steve"

[IDEALIST]

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we can do this? p.m me.

alright