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[Couzifer]

Thanks Poetic Seraph for the tip off, as u' all can see, this battle was up and ready for votes a few min's ago but after Poetic Seraph's suspicion abt' O.Wonder.Boy's verse, it turned out that his verse was indeed bitten off from another site, so I went ahead and cancelled the battle. I withdrew vnorm's verse because I don't want it to go waste, he can keep it for another battle with another poet or he can post it as a new topic in the Poetry / Spoken word section.

vnorm

(verse withdrawn)

Vs

O.Wonder.Boy

People nowaday act like nothing's-wrong*
But then they bust they moves when my song-is-on*
Turn it up in the highway or even on-a-bus*
Just like they said danc like no one give-a-f*ck*
I'm here sweatin work makin hits-in-the-lab*
While my homie in the back come to pick-up-the-cash*
I,m ballin albums I got 6-on-the-dash*
My flow got me all my ridiculous-smash*
Nobody listens to ya they sick-of-ya-ass*Money comes and goes the quika-the-fast* Illa the skill the sicka-the-rap* You gotta be real or get kiked-of-the-map* Look at the sky dawg it's about-to-rain* I guess you can't shine without-ya-chains* But me I shine even under-the-moon* No wonda when show up they run-to-they-rooms* They love me in the clubs even radio-stations* Celebrity overnight I be makin-you-famous* Just by chillin wit me you end up in-the-paper* You ain't gotta be a razi you've been-a-hata* Comin up with the most risky- situations* Puttin up headlines like they pissed-you-asian* Does that mean that they neva thought I'd be-this-good* Don't judge me by image ya ain't seen-this-hood* Look at the clock hoime, it's-my-time* What's this we listen to? It's my-rhyme* Is that sun up at 10? Nah homie that's my-shine* Success is my only reason for stayin on-my-grind* When i'm up in the stage I blow-em-away* They start screamin by the time i'm flowin-the-8* By 16 they drive me to the hospital-quick* Nah you ain't kill me dawg i'm just-so-sick* lotta places to go, lotta ppl-to-see* You can make a double album, still ain't equal-as-me* you say that u a rapper but you neva meant-it-dawg* Ya rims are 12's and ya cadillac was a rented-car* Surrenda-dawg, cuz I still rememba-ya-face* You was the lame that tok from kansas-to-state* you kno nothin bout the game, ya ain't understand-it-ok* Na visit ya homies cuz you got a lotta mannas-to-pay* There are a lotta hatas who-is-fake* They put me on they stereo bop to-dis-tape* Don't get cought snitchin I'm the reason for da-homicide* There's a lotta heat up here especially in the summer-time* I'm a hot dog man I neva shot dawg man* i drop off brands wid tops off man* That's how the S lovas do it,the chest covas do it* Vesta don't work, only respect musta do it.

O.Wonder.Boy bit off the above verse from an Asian Lesbian rapper??!! :shock: :evil:

[Poetic Seraph]

Couz, u need to cancel this battle, we got a biter on our hands.

When I read Wonder's piece, I couldn't help but thinking how this was more a lyric than a poem. So unless Wonder is an Asian lesbian female rapper who lives in NY, he's biting!

check this
http://media.bigmusi...-ya-amp-up.html
and
http://profile.myspa...endID=115243075

I knew it smelled fishy

[Couzifer]

Poetic Seraph said:

Couz, u need to cancel this battle, we got a biter on our hands.

When I read Wonder's piece, I couldn't help but thinking how this was more a lyric than a poem. So unless Wonder is an Asian lesbian female rapper who lives in NY, he's biting!

check this
http://media.bigmusi...-ya-amp-up.html
and
http://profile.myspa...endID=115243075

I knew it smelled fishy

Yeah, I've checked the links and his verse is indeed bitten.
I've cancelled the battle :(

Thanks Seraph.

[wreck-a-damus]

This is ridiculous. i don't see anything worth the while in the said bitten verse.