I started writing to escape,as meditative therapy in the sea of brick & weatherboard, the waves roll endlessly.
I search for direction, walk down every miscalculation left me feeling complacent. As they found comfort in my mistakes like they wanted me to make them.
Take this any way you want it, it's your's.
I build this castle just to watch it fall.
I planted the answers just to launch a war,and I act like my actions don't matter at all.
No I don't like this, yes I am used to it, as I sit & write this.
I know it all sounds stupid but that's the point right?
I'm living this life outside my skin trying to extract &
exploit what little is within, somewhere between, the beaty & the way that it ruined me.
I'm sick of all the patronising, in sincere, artificial synthetic,suface layer phrases like it's hart to get through.
You pass tissues? I throw stones at heads then feel betrayed.
When the class shards cut me instead but they hear me.
I feel it in the change in the air & all their open mind should be closed down for repairs..
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Ik-slick here's ur 3 lines
Started by O.Wonder.Boy, Dec 02 2008 05:45 PM
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 05:45 PM
hi guyz. im back but? but not that person i use to be. just wana let u know all the guyz that i have insault. im sorry. im a change man. so u guyz can call me. Snow.Bone . peace guyz.
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 07:16 PM
i aint trynna get in ur bizness but, wtf this gotta do with slick? it's was an ok verse but nothin directly directed at slick...
^^^i like that..
u either stepped ur game up big time or u came out looking wack just to have everyone underestimate u :?:
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I build this castle just to watch it fall.
^^^i like that..
u either stepped ur game up big time or u came out looking wack just to have everyone underestimate u :?:
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im the 'best', even after an 'L', i'd still be AHH's most 'bLest' emcee// (blessed)
This Fella Ku ti (i die hard) [ma yoruba bros understand me!!!]
iWrite till my pen's beat!!!
im the 'best', even after an 'L', i'd still be AHH's most 'bLest' emcee// (blessed)
This Fella Ku ti (i die hard) [ma yoruba bros understand me!!!]
iWrite till my pen's beat!!!
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 07:23 PM
Ok R.I.S you SHOW ME THE WAY.look i never used to battle sumone. I write my own lyrics,not to some1, but about me. So ima get there.
hi guyz. im back but? but not that person i use to be. just wana let u know all the guyz that i have insault. im sorry. im a change man. so u guyz can call me. Snow.Bone . peace guyz.
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 07:29 PM
Ok slick know hard feelings dog, i just need to get myself in this bus, bylaw or tryna take out my jigsaw.
hi guyz. im back but? but not that person i use to be. just wana let u know all the guyz that i have insault. im sorry. im a change man. so u guyz can call me. Snow.Bone . peace guyz.
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 11:45 PM
dude, u shldnt be battling, u shld be up in the poetry/spoken word section, thats a nice verse u dropped their.
..I'm The Truth..
...character is higher than intellect...Emerson
..In a false quarrel there is no true valour..Shakespeare
..a paradox we call reality, keeping it real will make u casualty of abnormal normality..Talib Kweli
...character is higher than intellect...Emerson
..In a false quarrel there is no true valour..Shakespeare
..a paradox we call reality, keeping it real will make u casualty of abnormal normality..Talib Kweli
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Posted 03 December 2008 - 03:56 AM
Thanx xblade i need frinds like u that can help people out
hi guyz. im back but? but not that person i use to be. just wana let u know all the guyz that i have insault. im sorry. im a change man. so u guyz can call me. Snow.Bone . peace guyz.
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