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[Offisah Boogie]

a couple weeks ago i sent y'all some lyrics i bust on Caeser's track, the replies were aight tho i didn't get as much feed back as i wanted. aint recorded a track in more than a year coz i'm tied up with work tho been writting a some lyrics and some producer cats in woodlands want to do some tracks with me.i love workin wit my boy Caeser coz he knows what i really look for in a sound....without further ado, whatchu think bout these rhymes i wrote at work 2day?

pray that i kick this verse without a cuss
i rep Bangers and man, that aint like us
tryin to adjust, they like 'boy, he gon nuts'
'he done gon soft', ;no longer got the guts'
so all of the sudden everybody labels me a fake
but when i say 'fuck', its somethin they cant take
sayin 'its unAfrican, try be radio friendly'
but why is it wrong coz these radio dont play me?
said it many times, i love hip hop with all my heart
but all unfair got me feelin like i wanna quit the art
i been reppin this game as far back as 96
still not a big name, but aint no denyin; my lines' sick
been in the cyphers, been in the battles
been in the booth, my wordplay is scrabble
now who in LSK city say he iller than me?
ask cats i've been on tracks with, i'm a killer emcee
i strungle the beat, then murder the track
murk the the guest artist even when he's verse aint wack
now how i'm i a verse away from being the King?
when the so called 'rulers' all they do is sing
claimin they clique on top when they scared of heights
frontin like they champs when they scared to fight
i'm loved underground like i rest with Levy
commercial cats back up, cant test this emcee
the 'uncrowned King' got the right to claim
whether orally or in ink, you right/write i am
say i aint the best then write a better verse
coz both you and i know, who's gon end up in the hearse
restin enternally ethered six feet deep at Leopards hill
yea, i heard you push weight but ya division paper still
shout out to all the peeps on africanhiphop
its hard to find cats real as me, half these rappers is rip offs

[R.I.S]

O_O Nice closer!!! I liked reading this piece, flow was on point, everything matched up...good shit!!!

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now who in LSK city say he iller than me?
ask cats i've been on tracks with, i'm a killer emcee
i strungle the beat, then murder the track
murk the the guest artist even when he's verse aint wack

^^^those lines were ma fav. though.

[O.Wonder.Boy]

Good sh*t man, ok let me give the hook for this track.It goes like...(It's all about the hah the hah,I never though that hip hop will take me this far. Now i'm in the lime-light, course i rhyme tight. I'm the illest rapper, tryin to hold a cordless,potrolin corness. Just tryin to spit, my inner, reppin sh*t.)

[Offisah Boogie]

just a lil correction, the this bar should read as;
Said it many times, i love hip hop with all my heart
but all unfair CRITISM got me feelin like i wanna quit the art
....and thanx R.I.S and O.Wonder.Boy for the 1st two replies. I know i could've done better reading it now but y'all know how it's like writting lyrics with alot of pending work on ya table and ya boss is just across. I'm sorta not that good with hooks so O.Wonder.Boy i definately taken note of your's, thanx. Right now i'm a lil rusty so hoping to get back into full lyrical shape soon....the hunger still there tho.KEEP IT HIP HOP!

[sdrceo]

i'm loved underground like i rest with Levy
commercial cats back up, cant test this emcee
^^^my fav line!!

okay here goes...

You say you're the king of this rap thing, but we ain't ever heard of ya,
stay in your place dog, you ain't a flippin murderer;
you say you're loved in the underground... with levy? wheres your head?
cause thats the state of your rap career, dog its dead!
been in the cyphers, been in the booth and been in battles?
I re-arrange your whole game plan - break that scrabble!
those cats you were on tracks with, were probably wack as you,
let me guess it was tom, dick and harry...jack aXX fools...
come out the playing pen youngen, in the streets is where you'll find me,
Zeds finest, they playing back lines to rewind me...
im just gettin warmed up, this is a probable cause,
and you're guilty as fXXX man, your rhymin is flawed,
you wanna bury me at leopards, i'll resurrect as the ghost,
cause my styles...P! Punches to your dome and you lost;
this thread will never be the same, like deathrow after Pac died!
and if you say my ish is wack, let me say now the man lied...

[sdrceo]

i don't get it, where is everybody, lets keep this going...

[Offisah Boogie]

zedhiphophead said:

i don't get it, where is everybody, lets keep this going...

Hey, sorry peoples for not been here as often as i wish i could...got mad work as y'all know its soon the end of the year.alotta report writting and shit but i promise in the next coming weeks i'll b online more.my nig O.Wonder.Boy aint forgotten bout ya shout out, i'll hit ya up soon.ZedHipHopHead, nice reply...love ya lines, promise to come bury ya 4 good b4 the end of this comin week.Ya good competition tho.and to everyone, tommorow is World Aids Day, take time to reflect on the many peeps we've lost coz of this scourge and what difference we can make to make this World a better place to live in.Hip hop musically should have the biggest voice.Peace!

[caesar cognac]

that's my nigga and my boy aint playin,
kings of the game n it aint dragons we slayin,
criminal intent,hellbent on murder cuz,
killers move in silence that's why you never heard of us,
or of him but that's my nigga,jason or freddy boy dude's a killa,
reignin supreme,b***+ we aint scared of ya team,f*-+ around leave your draws bloody call em crimson jeans,

[sdrceo]

now thats what im talking about!let's get it poppin!

Caesar :twisted: you lame in this game they should call you skeezer!
backin' up your boy with that - no ether;
you talking murder, murder...never seen a real scary movie!
talk trash, you're just a little scardy groupie :D
crimson jeans? nigh i split splean...my crew are monsters, don't even risk your team!
and to close off - offisah.B...im waiting! and please bring fire, cause mr.c.c too soft!

[Offisah Boogie]

how ya gon say Offisah Boogie aint the lord in this game
just peep the perspective of the purpose i aim
note my words is heavenly, got ya takin' my words in vain
it gon take more than havin' paper for y'all to feel my pain
fuck whatever Zedhiphophead yappin' bout
ya diggin' a grave if ya sparkin' up doubt
matter fact i'm bringin Zed hip hop back for ya damn sake
ask Caeaser this kid from start being damn straight
i dont need a gimmick to establish a fan base
i'ma slap the the bitch outta ya, till my palms hurt
there aint never been a rapper with sickness this near
Offisah B gon soon to be known to cripple careers
my dope flows gon prove, ya really trash at heart
jaws dropped, im amazing!and im just at the half way mark
wreck rappers that front and try oppose my throne
even if it means been in these LSK streets all alone
dragon flow, ya know the whatever i spit - Fire
my line spark heat like i had a faulty wire
burn Zedhiphophead, leave him a fuckin' broken mess
when i die, my tombstone should read ' this is where dopeness rests'
i shine on tracks, though truth told, i bling not
but my verses take a claim in the Kings spot
so fuck y'all critics that tell these rappers wack is what nice is
i'll hold it down for all Zed emcees that actually got talent to write sick

[sdrceo]

O.B – how you gon assume that I ain’t on that Conscious level/
I write sublime scripts never been an advocate of the devil/
You betta come out that little hole where you’re hiding/
Cause bringing Zed hip hop up is not a one man job…/
My depth is earth’s core, my playground MT.Everest/
I work hard for this game nigh, on the real I never rest/
So you a Dragon, I get burnt, but I will rise from the ashes/
Cause I’m a Phoenix, I come back – see your life pass in flashes/
Really I’m the MVP, ‘ndine wo pusa’ with this rap ish/
Zambian royalty bow down to the God of the culture/
Don’t glorify bling, got cats doing two step to my battle song/
I only follow suite, quoted! Man them verses^^^ too long/
I spit sixteens, you probably need lessons from the headman/
The world is my village call me Chief always ahead man/
Father emcee from the 80s I be Daddy Kane/
Strong finish! No spinach! You weak cats hardly came/

[Offisah Boogie]

props for those sixteens son.right on point......well, guess it is what it is.here is the nail to the coffin!

lyrically i'm a beast that's insane
tsumami flow OB be heavy with reign
shit on chumps whose not fit to bust
no dick relation, but my flow be nuts
industry heard, my squad scary though
wack rappers,leopards hill i bury those
my rap punches pack them flarin blows
lyrically, i'm the worst case scenario
lyrically fit, watch how my verses be long
you'se a bitch, i aint impressed with ya thong
ZHHH, battlin' me, ya aint got the heart
coz ya pussy like my girls private part
ya cant spit, dude ya verses be chockin'
i'ma make ya drown, when my deep thoughts soak in
sorry to do this but ya left me no option
put a grenade up ya ass and blow shit outta proportion
all ya weak ass sixteens, yeah i done read em
put my cock in ya mouth, now ya really the headman :lol:
and my bad, forgive me that i hardly came
hate it when ya all over my dick, the real Big Daddy Kane
see me bearin arms, it's yours after i rip em apart
better keep shut next time, than fail to finish what ya start
so ZHHH, i suggest its best that ya know ya role
OB-lyrical plumber here to save hip hop from this toilet bowl
rhyme for rhyme, no doubt im LSK's number one
legacy through life, Offisah Boogie, this verse is done

[sdrceo]

how you gon put me in a coffin man? im a pharoah resurrected from a tomb/
steppin in my zone; last thing you hearing is a boom/
you wanna finish, when im just getting started/
my flows insane, they should call it retarted/
yeah im a hip hop head, stop refering to fag ish.... :x/
Head honcho! you a old lady stuntin' with your poncho..../
you can have lsk man, im aiming for the globe/
aiming for the galaxy, i should be battling martians! (lol... :mrgreen: )
battled with spartans, legendary like I'm beowulf/
this time it's real little boy, better scream wolfff!/
O-B... not a master like wan kanobi/
kick ur a** of town;I'm raps shinobi/
victorious like barack, so you must be mcain/
the method-man, how i'm bringing the pain/
you forgot to flush homie;cause im creeping out to spoil it/
type of ish peeps feel, see your hands in the toilet!/ :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

[thehost]

nice battle! why did y'all stop?

[all mighty]

ever since i killed it to be crwoned king,champs gon on rampage
trying to replay what only happened once at the cage
you dont know nothin bout hustling,the only thing you ever flipped was a page
come at me on that macho tip,i split punch like johny cage
now who the fuck wanna gaige?
i aint even on this punch line shit dawg am all about the cheese
coz at the end of the day it make the world go round and get bitches on ei kneez
introduce me to your shorty and il be finning to creep that night
get yo super man act on and get hit with that cryptonite
thats right,seat tha fuck calm coz shel be kamn crib that night
thats what happens when you game sick and you rip that mic
half you niggaz just pretend,you aint street hard
compared to the shit i seen and been through,you a sweet heart
and if am lying then lightning strike me
coz most of you hating ass rappers is fans and really like me
so i dont mean to be rude but i gotta tell you if your gear is out dated
fuck with me and learn something,guaranteed to be up graded
so get it clear home boy,am the truth to these kids
spit it and i live in tin the booth and the streets
like my trees with no roots and no seeds
and my words quiet frank,aint no question am true and discrete
the way i chop and screw?sort o like gettn it crunk
your style is like fast food,its total junk
so like niggaz with no hands,we aint feeling your shit
like miners thats on strike,we aint digging your shit
am sorry i had to put out to you straight but pliz dont get pissed off
am just being honest when i tell you yo shit soft
your whole career? fake and bleek
and i could help you with it,blow yo brains out so you can take a leak!hahaha
smell somehting right?
nigga thats beef aroma
and trust me you dont want me to add a lil flavour from roma
my niggaz will beat yo ass to a coma
and trust me you'l need a doc and i aint talking bout nkhoma
so all that yip yapin,is all for the moment
its mak the rap jesus,come get your anointment!!!
mother fuckers!

[hiphopfiend]

Im loving this!

All mighty - crowned king in a cage? now a bird let loose
get shot by my verbal shotgun>>>>flat - dead goose..............
let me 'xpose'' this nigha...mr.all mighty mighty! you a tranvestite - like to wear a nighty nighty......
you aint a hustler homie!playing with chump change...cause being broke is childish - kid - im a grown man!
you'll need a surgeon!!!im a cot damn syndrome....infect your whole vicinity....on the mic i been home>
ill burn your face....leave the whole scene pitch black! no lie homie your whole click been whack!
just jokes man, i actually heard your tapes, you cats are quite nice! but not as ill as me>>>>>>
im a whole army,like a swarm of killer beez>>>I bomb and kill your steez and really you aint got none......
the only style you ever had was modeling your mums dresses...lol :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
hope you got the heart to go a few more rounds, im not a quitter! no sugar coat>keep it str8 bitter :twisted:
Lets go..........................................................................................................................

[all mighty]

hey! i was enjoying the offisah boogie and hiphophead battles.was tryna poke one o ya to battle test my skills but i guess y'all think am whack. need the exercise man,screem at yo boy! 8)

[all mighty]

lets go? :shock:
boy you bout to make me let the battle techs blow
but then this chess so am waitn on givin you what i got last while you give yo best show
you aint no army,you the red cross with soldiers at the battle field
so you cant harm me,but crossing the wrong boarders will get you rattled(killed)
like i said before,you can have that punch line shit
but when its crunch time?shit
il get my somali personna on,hungry!on some lunch time shit
this grown folks business youngn,this here multi
am your rap version of god nigga the most high
you feeling brave and gully?nigga come through
a lil bit o that kung-fu and you'l be calm fool
am so dope its a fact am more relevant
you just an opening act and am the main event! :mrgreen:

[hiphopfiend]

c'mon man, how you gon come at me with verses that you spat before, burg city chaps never seen a gat before...
talking bout techs, this is child abuse how im murdering sixteens....im a giant collosal king - kid - im bigger than six teams...
kick you to the curb till your backbone break, this is knife and fork rap - i feed - you the steak! bunch of lame a** rappers - pu**y be your promos, the only place you gettin heard sippin' shakers at dick zozo...
okay,you wanna spar with a champion, get knocked out cold!i have the midas touch - when i step-son - Gold!
forget leopards hill sonny you gettin' buried at chingwele, count the dots thru you white tee,str8 from my pelle pelle...
im like Liwewe, you're little Ponga tryin to catch up, this is 2009 - 08' nig the rap up....
so strap up, and don't catch no feelings,your head about to leak, I blow the roof off your ceiling!!!!!!!
Tiye.............................................................................................................................

[sdrceo]

whats poppin up in here! o.b where you at?