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[The Governor]

i got that flow that flows but never falls like victoria/
i aint talking the queen but that natural wander/
but dont mistake me for the nature boy/
and if you your greater than kalu you must be paranoid/
ma flows is fresh and phat this you cant deny/
bud clean your ears and hear the truth in his lies/
open your eyes and see that the rapper you idolise/
aint better than i cause i got more lines than A4 paper/
and'I AM C'(emcee) like i am the third letter /
in the alphabet and am out to get all you whack rappers/
who diss ma crew and try to side step us/remember 1 thing
we stars so never fall/like KG said from new years day to new years eve
we always ball/youz a fake rapper if you think your 'too tough'/
you sound so whack especially when you force out that fake a*$ laugh/
ma flows is graded compliments to force compliments to force ones/
and i block your whack rhymes like i was a tampoon/

[sdrceo]

nice! will drop some asap...

[sdrceo]

I'm a brother from Z and a G - both Ambians;
Ambience exude as one - not antonyms;
African God spit ice colder than tartica;
Not son of Tony, but still a dream shatterer;
Supreme flaterrer, a Beast on beats batterer;
Breathe the streets, little it take to beat challengers;
Break barriers, a true word carrier, carry the name thru networks and post forums;
Post poems, deep - the lost columns, so steep - the feet swollen from climbing the mountain;
daily I seek and ponder the fountain of youth, indeed - conquer the booth;
wise, really gritty men in disguise - take time to execute plans barely take lives;
devise, plenty lies they tell, telling tales - fables, wanna be signed for life - but no labels;
I stand strong erect in any storm, i am the elements battle in any form;
I stand strong erect in any storm, i am the elements battle in any form...

[The Governor]

Call me captain of the cell cause am beatin' these bars/
serve you stirred flows like i work for cocktail bars/
ma rhymes fully deplete you and leave you with scars/
streets make wishes upon me cause i am a hood star/
ma appearence gets mass appeal like micheal's campains/
ma fans never use mobb physicology cause always there down men/
so all the groupies can hang/and ma hits are like TNT they end up
with a bang/i aint cena but haters come get some/plus your first
name d*ck cause your ma son/ :lol:
these 'whappers'(WHACK RAPPERS) stressing and sweating every time i roll by/
cause hip-hop is ma energiser so i will never say die/
so you better step back and never mess with me/
ma skills touched by god i can make blind men see/
am deep rooted in the game like a tree of mangoes/
and i love ma flows cause it got too many foes/
i 'post' a flow in this forum but not the newspaper/
ma game has its own throwback cause you know iam a player/

[sdrceo]

(your rhyme scheme sounds familiar!!!)

anyway nice similes...but i must say for some parts its no use making rhymes where you have to explain, because you wont do that in a battle or track. i.e these 'whappers'(WHACK RAPPERS) and'I AM C'(emcee)

(this is advice, hope you don't take offense)

otherwise keep on, personally i ain't a battle rapper, i drop knowledge...will invite diplomatic to drop some....

peace

[dplomatic mixbreed]

they drop verses, i disperse free,s that versatile a verse-they claim they sick when they like worth like a retired nurse.lyrical, subliminal, audio rhyme killin individual-cnt be killed by man i reserect like da son ov the spiritual. blood ov a king, strength ov a slave pasion of will-indipendant like lables, deadly on mics 4real.... translation..anybody can sound deep-but u like weight in ur rhymes like toddlers in speech.so keep it simple or atleast spit knowledge.eyo zed hip hop head u shudnt have entertaind dudes nonsense lol.

[sdrceo]

^ nah man its not even like that, we gotta build!