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#1 Offisah Boogie

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Posted 16 October 2008 - 08:55 PM

i ghost write for a couple cats that wanna make it big with rap....tho, this here is my lyrics i dropped on my boy Ceaser Cognacs 'Leader at last' track. I went in on the second verse

Mirror, mirror who's the most iller
y'all fake monkey rhymes cant match my gorillas
i'm fresh to death, nigga smell my breath
got the Banger chain hangin down my neck
i rep.....
every block on these LSK streets
when i flow i'm sick, on this Cognac beat
Niggas cant admit, im the hottest shit
got the dopest clique, haters can suck my dick
OB is back and this here is a classic
i rank as a don, i'm passed y'all lil bastard
i gave you the blueprint to them rhymes you mastered
i'm the godfather and this aint no movie
poster child, i'm everything you should be
if hip hop is dead, we bringing it back
escober flow, got the fiends fiending for that

what y'all think people?

#2 EMPTY P

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Posted 17 October 2008 - 12:26 PM

It is a good try,keep on never cry,
Competion is so stiff so don 4get to pray,
You cant be a Godfather only by words of mouth,
and the true revolution cant spread via a bluetooth,



Keep it man,
Rastaman never give up,

#3 caesar cognac

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Posted 19 October 2008 - 02:31 AM

sup dawg,tis your boy yak.that sh*t will forever be classical.maybe i should post the track on this site so they can hear it.beathaven baby.peace

#4 sdrceo

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Posted 19 October 2008 - 08:44 PM

cool man, post the track up, try and keep it as clean as possible, i know its hard, but just try! lyrics is cool, which hood do you represent! we need to do more tracks about where we are from, our country and background...know what i mean! people out there want to know about us and our struggles - holla
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#5 O.Wonder.Boy

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Posted 22 November 2008 - 08:42 AM

That'$ my man.Yo! Sh*t dam u can spit,can u give me sum of ur sh*t.Just flowin wid u.Role dog,keep it on tha mork.
hi guyz. im back but? but not that person i use to be. just wana let u know all the guyz that i have insault. im sorry. im a change man. so u guyz can call me. Snow.Bone . peace guyz.

#6 sdrceo

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Posted 22 November 2008 - 10:23 PM

still waiting on those tracks O.B/Caesar!
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#7 Twenty6

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Posted 25 November 2008 - 03:00 PM

Yeah...Me too!
I'm Married to the Game so what you reppin' is MY WIFE!!!

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#8 sdrceo

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Posted 28 December 2008 - 10:20 PM

its getting lonely up in here, where has everyone gone???
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